Talk:Chris Rock–Will Smith slapping incident/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TrademarkedTarantula (talk · contribs) 03:43, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

Hey there! I'll be reviewing this article, but this one will take a bit longer because at the moment, I have an overwhelming amount of homework I need to finish. Tarantula TM (speak with me) (my legacy) 03:43, 19 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Wow, I can't thank you enough for reviewing my nominations. Don't worry, take your time. Skyshifter   talk  12:25, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Update: I've been thinking about blocking myself because it's kind of getting in the way of finishing my homework. I address this because I don't have time in my day to review this article. Tarantula TM  (speak with me) (my legacy) 04:26, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
 * I'm fine with waiting, but if you think you can't finish it, I can ask for another reviewer. Up to you though. Skyshifter   talk  14:27, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
 * I'll ask another reviewer. Skyshifter   talk  01:38, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Go ahead; I've completely lost interest in this. Tarantula TM  (speak with me) (my legacy) 04:28, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Not the GA nominator, but don't worry about it. I applaud your efforts for trying to help, and life should always take priority, especially education. I'm not going to review this for similar time-based reasons, but I remember proofreading this a while ago and being impressed with the detail and contextualisation of the event. Electricmaster (talk) 12:30, 22 December 2023 (UTC)

Important comments / concerns

 * The image of Smith slapping Rock is used twice: in the infobox and at the photograph section. Remove the second instance of Smith slapping Rock.
 * Removed. Skyshifter   talk  21:23, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

Lead

 * ...with what appeared to be an open palm strike... - remove "what appeared to be"; it indicates uncertainty and is similar to a weasel word
 * Removed Skyshifter   talk  14:27, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
 * but completed his presentation without further interruption. -> "but continued his presentation"
 * Fixed Skyshifter   talk  14:27, 31 October 2023 (UTC)

Given the relatively incomplete status of this review, and the withdrawal of the reviewer, I am closing this GAN as a failure on technical grounds and restoring the original nomination to better attract a fresh reviewer. CMD (talk) 04:04, 12 January 2024 (UTC)