Talk:Chris Wroblewski/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 20:54, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 20:54, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Pausing for now, will look at references in a bit. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 14:38, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * He got no college scholarship offers in high school. "got" -> "received"
 * Thx-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:38, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
 * How do you know he was born in 1989/1990?
 * Just guessing based on class levels and dates in school, if I recall correctly.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:25, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * As a sophomore for a seniorless 2005–06 Highland Park team, he posted 28 points in a 60–58 overtime victory over Mount Carmel High School., is the 28 points something notable or was the game notable? Is this just a random high school game where he scored 28 points? Also, "seniorless" is not a word.
 * I am just pointing out that he scored nearly half his team's points in a game as a sophomore.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:11, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Wroblewski led the Ivy League in three-point field goal percentage during the Ivy League schedule So, he led three point percentage just during Ivy League Games? Not for the whole season. This seems like a random stat.
 * In American college basketball (and other American college sports), it is common to see league game only stats because it levels the playing field for schools that may play schedules with wide-ranging strengths of schedules. It is somewhat less notable than an overall statistic, but a perfectly valid one to point out that he had some points of excellence.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:13, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
 * helped keep number-one ranked Kansas on the ropes at on the ropes is too colloquial. Reword to be more encyclopedic.
 * Thx-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:15, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Wroblewski, who started 33 of the 34 games is one of six players, need a comma after "games"
 * Thx-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:18, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
 * He led the team in 3pt% "3pt%" needs to be written out like it was in a previous paragraph
 * Done-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:18, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Wroblewski was named tri-captain I am pretty into sports and can definitely infer what this means, but are you saying he was named as one of three captains? If so, just state that plainly.
 * Done-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:20, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
 * and with 21 points, became his first career double-double missing "it" or "the game". Like what exactly became his first career double-double?
 * Revised-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:25, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
 * In his 104th career game, Wroblewski established a Cornell record for the slowest achievement of 1000 career points scored. - no comment here, just made me laugh
 * We cover everything.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:05, 30 August 2023 (UTC)