Talk:Christian Fellowship in Richmond

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NPOV issues in introduction?
The intro currently says the church started after young people "saw a move of the Holy Spirit in Richmond England," which "led to the birth of gathering of Christians to worship the Lord." This language is very vague, and would be inscrutable to the average secular reader. What is a "move of the Holy Spirit" and what does it look like? Does the "birth of gathering of Christians to worship" refer to the founding of the church, and if so, can't it simply be described as such?Sadiemonster (talk) 10:57, 13 December 2015 (UTC)