Talk:Christian Science/Archive 9

Theology/philosophy
Well, I think the material on CS theology/philosophy is thin and minimal. In terms of space it seems to be overshadowed by a lot of historical and contextual material. It's a bit like having an article on Kant which tells us what he liked for breakfast and his fights with his grandmother, but little or nothing about his teachings on the Ding-an-sich, the noumena/phenomena, the categories, or the categorical imperative. For example I have a book called Christian Science Class Instruction, by Arthur Corey (CA, DeVorss, 1950). Corey was a dissident Christian Science practitioner and teacher who resigned from membership of the CS church, so he could hardly be called a mouthpiece of the organization. The book is very well written and an accurate reflection of CS teaching. Nevertheless I hesitate to use/cite it as a source in the article, as pro-CS sources seem to get much shorter shrift than anti or neutral sources by the most active editors, and I don't have the time to waste on posting material that would be quickly removed. To give a flavor, there are chapters in the Corey book on Revelation, Discovering God, The Supreme Being, The Divine Nature, Reflection, Man, Body, Universe, Error, Mortal Mind, Animal Magnetism, Organs and Functions, Treatment, Demonstration, The Christ, etc. The book makes it particular clear that CS is a form of monistic theistic idealism rather than any form of dualism. I can put something together from the book on CS theology which will be accurate and informative if I can get an assurance that my edits will not be routinely removed. BTW I am not a representative of the CS church in any way, shape or form and Indeed I imagine they wouldn't particularly like it if Corey was used as a source in this article, since he was a dissident in political (though not in doctrinal) terms. Anyway I look forward to a response on this.Be-nice:-) (talk) 22:07, 9 February 2014 (UTC)


 * I find myself agreeing with Be-nice:-). I use a simpler rule of thumb, however.  The article, while better than it ever has been, still is unencyclopedic.  If one comes to the article looking for information on Christian Science, one doesn't really find it.  This results in users going elsewhere for information, which defeats the purpose of constructing and editing the article.


 * "The sources" tend say what we desire them to say in the way we extract them. There is absolutely no proof (and no way to prove) that the aggregate of sources in the article are representative of all available sources or that the way we say they handle the material is representative how the material is handled.  (As an aside, had anyone brought me a paper of this length while I was teaching I would have sent them back to the library for being overdependent on few sources.)  Ultimately the litmus test of any article is (1) is it informative, (2) is it readable and (3) does it make sense.  All the waving of NPOV flags or equality of reference is absolutely pointless if the article does not appear to be unbiased to the reader (who doesn't and won't read all the policy articles and probably doesn't care.)  Truth, if such exists, is not responsive to vigorous hand-waving.


 * I'm anxious to see what Be-nice:-) comes up with. I share his suspicion, however, that any edits will not be accepted by the powers that be.


 * --Digitalican (talk) 00:10, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

Well, I'm gonna wait for a while and see if I get any negative response here. If not, I'll go ahead. But as I said, I really don't have time to waste putting in stuff that's going to be routinely removed. I presume we all--whatever our perspective--want the article on Christian Science to tell us what Christian Science is, rather than focusing overwhelmingly on biographical issues re MBE, and the effects of her teaching on the world. To take another example from philosophy, the article in its current form is a bit like an article on the teachings of Plato focusing (a) on Plato's personal life and (b) on his pernicious effect (as e.g. Popper saw it) on politics in terms of totalitarianism etc, rather than on the teachings themselves.Be-nice:-) (talk) 06:01, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

Interesting point about truth Digitalican. If the philosophical anti-realists are right, there's no such thing and philosophers are all involved in power-struggles masquerading as the search for truth. And if the realists are right, truth, if it exists, bears little resemblance to what we are familiar with in the world.Be-nice:-) (talk) 06:10, 10 February 2014 (UTC)


 * History and Wikipedia are written by the winners. :) At some point, in the years-long struggles with this page, someone asserted that Wikipedia was not about truth but in a sense was some kind of measure of the cultural zeitgeist.  Fair enough -- that is in itself a sort of useful tool.  I am also reminded of the Tao Te Ching which says, essentially, that because you have measured the world does not mean you have changed it.  (This is what happens when two people steeped in Christian Science start talking:  the conversation immediately drops into metaphysics.)  --Digitalican (talk) 13:31, 10 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Be-nice, I have no problem with you expanding the theology section, but it's difficult to say in advance that it would be okay. My concern about that source is that he's very "in universe," very religious, so it might be difficult to extrapolate any philosophy without engaging in OR. Could you propose a sentence or two so that we have the flavour of it? SlimVirgin (talk) 15:57, 10 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Another option would be to create a new page, Christian Science theology. It would give you more space and we could sum it up here summary-style. Some other examples: Christian theology, Buddhist philosophy, Islamic theology, Jewish philosophy. SlimVirgin (talk) 18:06, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

Cool--I might do that if I get some time. Anyway, here are a couple of quotes from the Corey book (the book is liberally referenced to MBE's writings to back up the author's points):

On Principle [God] and idea [man]: "To illustrate this essential oneness or inseparability of Principle [God] and idea, let us say that your friend visits you and you acknowledge his presence. Is not your friend manifested to you? When he departs, you would not expect him to leave his manifestation with you--for his manifestation is your friend manifest. Likewise, thought cannot be detached even figuratively from Mind, for it itself is Mind thinking. Mind is wherever it is manifest as thought, and nowhere else. Its expression is its presence. Manifestation is God in expression. Man, perforce, is God--expressed. "So God created man in His own image, in the image of God created He him." (Genesis 1: 27.) But this that is God beholding Himself is one Being, so that God is all that there is to man." (Corey 1950: 51). That's an exceptionally clear statement of CS theology and also answers the mainstream Christian allegation that Christian Scientists reject the divinity of Christ. (Christ Jesus, considered in his spiritual identity, is God manifest. Considered humanly, he was a human being.)

There are not too creations, a spiritual and a material, but only one spiritual creation, albeit incorrectly perceived: "...the successful practitioner does not turn away from error; instead, he turns it, reverses it, so establishing what is appearing in his present experience as the very expression of God. Materiality recognized as the inverted image of spirituality, is automatically reversed, so that spirituality alone remains." (Corey 1950: 102)

Against dualism (ie from the viewpoint that there is only one reality, the spiritual reality, which is misconceived as material): "Suppose you see a modern painting, of the abstract type, for the first time and, failing to grasp its import, you were to say--as is too often done!--that you could do better than that without a single lesson [...} Then suppose you returned, after a period of art study and experience, to again view the same painting, and found therein a soul-satisfying play of color and light, expressing high inspiration. It would remain the same painting, unchanged, and you would be the same observer. And yet, in a manner of speaking, it would be a new painting and to you a real work of art. You would recognize it in its every detail as the same painting, but you would see it differently [...] But are there two paintings, a genuine and a counterfeit? They are not too, but one." (Corey 1950: 105-106)Be-nice:-) (talk) 18:31, 10 February 2014 (UTC) I love these ideas!!!  Thank you for your willingness to make this article a little more approachable and a little less academic.  I'm looking at the Christianity page, for example, and you come away with basic Christian concepts.  It's not a page about what the atheists think about Christianity.  It is presenting Christianity in a way that someone can understand it.  Then someone can decide for themselves.  Simplywater (talk) 00:08, 11 February 2014 (UTC)

Glad you like them Simplywater (I presume the moniker comes from what you say when someone offers you a double scotch on the rocks?!) BTW, could you leave a line between your comments and the preceding ones? Otherwise they get joined up and it's difficult to see who's sayiing what!Be-nice:-) (talk) 08:43, 11 February 2014 (UTC)

Got it. Thank's Be nice. I say "go for it". I wanted to add a little piece about the rise of Christian healing around the mid to late 1800's. and MBE relationship to that. Any problem. It will just be a paragraph. What is missing from the article is How Christian Science was Christian. The article is filled with how it is everything but Christian. Let me know if anyone minds.Simplywater (talk) 03:11, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

I do agree that this is not a encyclopedia page. And I appreciate all the long hours. But it is too much like a dissertation. And if you want to eliminate any evidence that doesn't jive with your thesis. "Christian Science is a part of the metaphysical camp" There is a problem slimvirgin. You just have to be honest with yourself. Do you want to know what Christian Science is? Heal something. Then you will know. In Christian Science. kids heal others the best sometimes because it is from the heartSimplywater (talk) 03:30, 13 February 2014 (UTC)


 * ...but Christian Science is part of the "metaphysical camp." I think this is indisputable.  I think that it is you who are not being honest with yourself.  You need to put aside your prejudices, read the article, and listen to what people are trying to tell you -- which to this point you have refused to do.  It does not matter how you or I feel subjectively about Christian Science, what is important here is that it is described accurately -- which is still lacking but not for the reasons you keep slamming on.   I actually like, for reasons I won't go into, what SlimVirgin has done, though I certainly do not always agree with her.  I think you need to step back three paces, become acculturated to Wikipedia, and read the article for what it is.  --Digitalican (talk) 04:31, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

Quote from the footnotes: Nichols and Mather 2006, p. 55: "Christian Science ... bears little resemblance to historic Christianity. Each is built on a different foundation – the former on the fundamentals of Greek and Cartesian dualism, the latter on a Hebraistic worldview and a biblical monotheism." This is an example of what is wrong with much of the secondary literature. They just don't "get" Christian Science in philosophical or theological terms. In fact, CS is monistic: it teaches that there is just one creation, a spiritual creation (which is incorrectly perceived as material). For CS, Spirit is all that there is and matter is unreal; good is all that exists and evil is unreal. It is mainstream Christianity that is dualistic, teaching the reality of the spiritual and the material, of good and evil. (NB mainstream Christianity is certainly influenced by Greek philosophy, specifically by Aristotle--whose teachings supplanted those of Plato in Christian theology in the middle ages--and Platonic themes can be found in the Bible, specifically in Hebrews and Revelation). In fact CS is closer than mainstream Christianity to the "Hebraistic worldview" which did not teach that a human being could be God, that God would torture sinners for eternity, and which emphatically taught that there is only one God (not three).Be-nice:-) (talk) 09:54, 15 February 2014 (UTC)

The question is, was Jesus a metaphysician? How did he heal? And does it matter? Those who recognize that that was Mary Baker Eddy's question and life's purpose call Christian Science very Christian and include her in the Bible based healing movement of the late 1800's. Simplywater (talk) 20:52, 17 February 2014 (UTC)

Consistent with Christian Science theology
"consistent with Christian theology"


 * I would like to strike the word 'traditional' because we do not believe we subscribe to traditional Christian theology S&H page 496
 * Have Christian Scientists any religious creed? Answer. — They have not, if by that term is meant doctrinal beliefs.


 * I would like to add the tenets of Christian Science as a reference to "consistent with Christian theology"

The tenets are simply the easiest, most understandable way to show why Mary Baker Eddy felt her religion was consistent with Christianity.
 * 1) It won't take up any space.
 * 2) There are 5 different academic, secondary sources that list the tenents.
 * 3) Both Melton and Shoephflin understood that before you could honestly criticize Mary Baker Eddy's theology, one needed to fearlessly state it. that is why they presented the tenets.
 * 4) Withholding the tenets from this article is like making cocoa without the chocolate, and then critizing it for not being chocolate  i.e. in the third paragraph under Christian Science Theology it says 'there is no original sin, trinity, ect,ect"
 * 1) The central text is the Bible (we take the inspired word of the Bible as our sufficient guide to eternal life)
 * 2) Chistian Science is monotheistic (We adore one supreme infinite God)
 * 3) Her version of the Trinity ( one God, His Son, and the Holy Ghost, Divine Science)
 * 4) Her version of the atonement (Christ, unfolding man's unity with God)
 * 5) Her version of salvation (through Christ, healing the sick and overcoming sin and death) ect.


 * '''I would also like to strike the first sentence in the third paragraph under Christian Science Theology as it is an opinion. Or you could say, according to so and so.Simplywater (talk) 17:13, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

'''

Paragraph about Awakenings
Two observations on the paragraph about Awakenings now at the start of the section titled Metaphysical-CS-New Thought:
 * The secondary sources in footnote 11 disagree, which should be noted in the text.
 * As The WP new religious movement lead and its Terminology section notes, the term “cult” was once used by sociologists of religion (following Weber), but in the past ~30 years it has been replaced by the term "new religious movement": "Scholars studying the sociology of religion have almost unanimously adopted this term as a neutral alternative to the word cult, which is often considered derogatory." Other neutral terms cited on this page as roughly equivalent replacements are emergent, alternative, or marginal religion, movement, or sect. (Note: Pritchard and McLoughlin, cited in footnote 11, published in 1976 and 1980 respectively, which is why they use the term “cult.” Both wrote at the tail end of the term’s phase-out.)

Re: disagreement of cited sources: Melton (quoted in footnote 11) decides that new sects including CS “appeared to challenge Christianity's exclusive hegemony over the religious experience of Western culture.” Whereas McLoughlin (p. 16-17) decides conversely that “There has been no single prophet in America’s five awakenings and no national displacement of the Judeo-Christian tradition. There have, of course, been individual religious leaders, of great force, who founded new denominations or cults: Joseph Smith and Brigham Young among the Mormons; Ann Lee among the Shakers; Aimee Semple McPherson and the International Church of the Foursquare Gospel; William J. Seymour among the black Pentecostalists; William Miller and Ellen White among the Adventists; Mary Baker Eddy, founder of Christian Science; Charles Taze Russell founder of Jehovah’s Witnesses. These leaders have sustained a core of believers, not by repudiating Christianity, but by supplementing or modifying it. They all fall within the Judeo-Christian tradition in major aspects of their theology, and, despite some eccentricities, they generally conform to the prevailing codes of behavior. They have not deflected the mainstream of American culture and, in fact, generally claim to represent a better version of it.”

This shows the spectrum here. Pritchard’s view appears to be somewhere in the middle of these two (she calls some new sects Christian, others not) and as she doesn’t mention Eddy or CS, there isn't an equivalent quotation.

In case this should come into play, of the three sources in fn 11, McLoughlin is by far the most heavily cited by other works.

Also note that McLoughlin theorizes five, not two, periods of awakening and reform. Though of course only two of these periods are relevant to the movements listed in this paragraph, he postulates that all five led to a proliferation of sects in the US.

A bit more re: the terms “cult” and “new religious movement”: The NRM term has baggage of its own primarily in that "Scholars continue to try to reach definitions and define boundaries" - ie, it hasn't been clearly defined - which is part of why variants arose. Still, it’s the most commonly used. There’s a good basic discussion of several terms currently in use for religions emerging in modernity in Stephen J. Stein, Communities of Dissent: A History of Alternative Religions in America (New York: Oxford, 2000), 2-4 in the Preface. Stein’s suggestion of the term “communities of dissent” is unique to his work, though an interesting idea.--Ath271 (talk) 06:12, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Thank you so much for adding this, ath271. Simplywater (talk) 15:57, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Is anyone going to respond? I'm happy to look into making the changes. Is that ok with you slimvirgin?Simplywater (talk) 00:01, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

mark twain
Should we add this video this to add balance to the Mark Twain Section? Mark Twain said a lot about Christian Science.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Aei4Ttb4-gSimplywater (talk) 15:08, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Number of Members
From the Intro: "A census at the height of the movement's popularity in 1936 counted nearly 270,000 Christian Scientists in the United States; as of 2008 there was a worldwide membership of 100,000–400,000." It's clear even to the most committed Christian Scientist (perhaps particularly to him/her) that there has been a numerical decline in membership in recent decades. I don't know how the figure "100,000-400,000" was arrived at, but any suggestion of an actual increase in membership (outside of Africa) seems wildly misleading.Be-nice:-) (talk) 07:16, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

OK, I just noticed that it was talking about two different things: (a) numbers in the US and (b) numbers worldwide. From the footnote, apparently the source of the high figure is the CS church itself: "The church estimates it has about 400,000 members worldwide." However, I don't see how that could be, since Mary Baker Eddy expressly writes in the governing document (the Church Manual, Article VIII, Section 28 ): "Christian Scientists shall not report for publication the number of members of The Mother Church, nor that of the branch churches. According to the Scripture they shall turn away from personality and numbering the people."Be-nice:-) (talk) 07:26, 19 February 2014 (UTC)Simplywater (talk) 15:38, 19 February 2014 (UTC)


 * The footnote that is sourced to the CS church comes from a NPR broadcast on PBS. I'm skeptical that it actually came from anyone in the church who knows membership totals.  I suspect it was more likely that someone working for a branch church gave this number to the reporter as a ballpark estimate.  Obviously the Mother Church has more accurate numbers but does not release them.  However, that is what the source says so that's why it's in the article.


 * The phrasing of membership totals has been debated extensively in the past on the talk pages, you can find details by searching the talk archives if you are interested. Wikiuser1239 (talk)  — Preceding undated comment added 03:15, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

Christian Science Theology
This is still inaccurate:

"There is no original sin, Trinity, miracles, resurrection or atonement in Christian Science, "or at least [Eddy] so allegorized these concepts that they seemed to vanish," according to Philip Jenkins."

CS certainly does not believe in original sin, so that one is correct. Like Judaic monotheism, it believes in one God, not three. It disbelieves in miracles, but teaches that what appear to be miracles are the application of laws of nature that are not currently understood, e.g. the ability to adjust (what appears as) reality by adjusting one's beliefs about it. Christian Science teaches the reality of Jesus' resurrection and there are numerous references to it in Eddy's writings. It's true that she teaches the ultimate unreality of death (like that of all forms of evil) but people who insist that Christians need to believe that Jesus "died" on the cross never actually tell us what they think that entails, for the very good reason that they don't know (neither does anyone else). Christian Science certainly teaches the atonement, though not as it is conventionally understood: ie that God required the torture and death of his son in order to save the rest of humanity from the eternal torture that he would otherwise have allowed them to undergo, because a distant ancestor, created from her husband's rib, indulged in a bit of orchard-robbing at the behest of a talking serpent and gave her husband a bite of the fruit.Be-nice:-) (talk) 20:16, 22 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Be nice, Couldn't agree more about original sin.
 * Miracles - It would be helpful to know what in Mary Baker Eddy's writings you are referring to about miracles. Is there some passages specifically?   She really says quite a bit about miracles, the "miracle of grace" for example. And while you are correct that she doesn't think they are breaking a natural law, she very much believes, honors and acknowledges the marvel of God.

'''A miracle fulfils God's law, but does not violate that law. S&H page 134.Simplywater (talk) 22:45, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

Look up "miracles" in a concordance to S&H. E.g: "Miracles are impossible in Science, and here Science takes issue with popular religions. The scientific manifestation of power is from the divine nature and is not supernatural." S&H 83: 12-15 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Be-nice:-) (talk • contribs) 08:16, 25 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes, "miracles are impossible in Science" She does make a clear distinction between the supernatural and the 'supremely natural'.  Good therefore is supremely natural.  Science is God's knowledge, God's law.  God doesn't have a concept of chaos or illness that needs to be fixed by His or Her miraculous intervention.  Science is the natural law of the Kingdom of Heaven, Reality.  However, from a human point of view, the virgin birth, the resurrection, healing are wonderful marvels.


 * Under the title "miracles rejected" in Science and Health pg 474
 * The reception accorded to Truth in the early Chris‐

tian era is repeated to-day. Whoever introduces the Science of Christianity will be scoffed at and scourged with worse cords than those which cut the flesh. To the ignorant age in which it first appears, Science seems to be a mistake, — hence the misinterpretation and consequent maltreatment which it receives. Christian marvels (and marvel is the sim‐ ple meaning of the Greek word rendered miracle in the New Testament) will be misunderstood and misused by many, until the glorious Principle of these marvels is gained.Simplywater (talk) 18:38, 25 February 2014 (UTC) Thought you may enjoy this from the Wycliffe Bible Luke 1:77 'To give science of health to his people, into remission of their sins;'   — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simplywater (talk • contribs) 18:23, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

Atonement Found this interesting assessment of Eddy's view of the atonement from the Introduction of a book called Faith, Cures and Answered Prayers. The author of the introduction Rosemary D. Gooden writes that Mary Baker Eddy's view of the atonement was perfectly in line with the "Normative" view of atonement in the divine healing movement of the mid 1800 even as espoused by Rev Gordan, a leader of that movement. Her view of atonement, like theirs included redemption from 'sickness' as well as 'sin'.


 * "Do I believe in the atonement of Christ? I do, and this becomes more to me since it includes man's redemption from sickness as well as from sin. I reverence and adore Christ as never before" (This is part of Eddy's response to Gordon on the assertion from him that she did not believe in the atonement Mis Writing p. 96)

Is this book and introduction usable in this article?Simplywater (talk) 01:43, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Christian Science beliefs - tenets/reverting
Hello Alex!! reverting.Good morning. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Christian_Science&diff=596834191&oldid=596572393

The more the better. The Scientific Statement of Being AND the tenets.... There is no conflict here Alexbrn. There is room for both ideas. '''Are there some religious/philosophical beliefs you should declare to us as to why it is difficult for you to be neutral here? '''The Christian Science tenets are tucked nicely in a reference where they will not take up any room.

The reader is coming to this page to learn as much about Christian Science as possible. The more ideas the reader can gleen about Christian Science beliefs the better, don't you think. Why not have both? There is room. The Scientific Statement of Being is present. There is no conflict in having both. There are 8 very sound sources that say the Tenets are the core beliefs.

This is the place to tell us why you don't want both present. The talk page. Here are the sources that say that the tenets are the beliefs of Christian Science. Tenets of Christian Science
 * Religion in America, edited by Harold Rabinowitz page 148 —
 * Melton, Gordon, The Encyclopedia of American Religions and Religious Creeds, pg 681, 1988
 * Mary Baker Eddy, Science and Health with Key to the Scriptures pg. 497
 * Mary Baker Eddy, Manual of The Mother Church, pg 15
 * Melton, Gordon, Encyclopedic Handbook of Cults in American, pg 31
 * Van Voorst, Rober, Anthology of World Scriptures pg 352
 * Schoepflin, Rennie, Christian Science on Trail: Religious Healing in America pg 11
 * http://christianscience.com/what-is-christian-science/basic-teachings
 * '''* 1. As adherents of Truth, we take the inspired Word of the Bible as our sufficient guide to eternal Life.
 * 2. We acknowledge and adore one supreme and infinite God. We acknowledge His Son, one Christ; the Holy Ghost or divine Comforter; and man in God's image and likeness.
 * 3. We acknowledge God's forgiveness of sin in the destruction of sin and the spiritual understanding that casts out evil as unreal. But the belief in sin is punished so long as the belief lasts.
 * 4. We acknowledge Jesus' atonement as the evi‐ dence of divine, efficacious Love, unfolding man's unity with God through Christ Jesus the Way-shower; and we acknowledge that man is saved through Christ, through Truth, Life, and Love as demonstrated by the Galilean Prophet in healing the sick and overcoming sin and death.
 * 5. We acknowledge that the crucifixion of Jesus and his resurrection served to uplift faith to under‐ stand eternal Life, even the allness of Soul, Spirit, and the nothingness of matter.
 * 6. And we solemnly promise to watch, and pray for that Mind to be in us which was also in Christ Jesus; to do unto others as we would have them do unto us. And to be merciful, just and pure.Simplywater (talk) 14:18, 24 February 2014 (UTC)'''

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Christian_Science&diff=595173038&oldid=595172595

Since this discussion is continuing, should we provide a link to the archived discussions from last week? Or do I just rewrite the issues here again? Simplywater (talk) 14:53, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Greetings! My religious beliefs are beside the point (remember: WP:FOC!) – but if you must know, I am a lapsed pastafarian. You are right this article should be "about" CS. We write it by digesting the best of what the best secondary sources have to say, not necessarily by relaying what CS would say about itself. Alexbrn talk 15:01, 24 February 2014 (UTC)


 * The problem with the tenets is that they don't mean what they first appear to mean (that is, if readers assume the usual interpretation of the Christian terms)., I was thinking of either adding a link to the tenets in the infobox under "scientific statement of being" (something like "Basic teachings", christianscience.com), or adding a sentence about the tenets somewhere in the text and that they can be misleading. Adding to the infobox would be easier. Would you object to that? SlimVirgin (talk) 03:58, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, I think liking to them as "tenets" could work. The problem with the previous edit relaying them merely as "beliefs", is that it's not that simple: Melton relays them with surrounding commentary which paints a subtler picture. Alexbrn talk 06:46, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

Thank you both so much for responding!! Sorry Slimvirgin to put so much more work on you. But, 5 difference sound academic sources included the tenets as the beliefs. I don't mind Melton's interpretation as long as we can include another voice along with it. Melton is good, but as a rather orthodox Methodist his view is just that 'a perspective'. We just put it out there in a way as fair as possible and let the reader decide.Simplywater (talk) 17:18, 25 February 2014 (UTC)


 * thanks, I'll add that link to the infobox for now (maybe "Basic teachings", christianscience.com). SlimVirgin (talk) 22:49, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

Panpsychism
If CS is panpsychist, it's got good company in recent philosophy (see the entry on Panpsychism). However, CS doesn't seem to be in accord with this paragraph:

"In contrast to "idealism", as this term is often used, panpsychism is not a doctrine of the unreality of the spatio-temporal world perceived through the senses, or its reduction to mere "ideas" in the human or divine mind. The constituents of this world are, for panpsychists, just as real as human minds or as any mind. Indeed, they are minds, though, in large part, of an extremely low, subhuman order. Thus panpsychism is panpsychical realism; realistic both in the sense of admitting the reality of nature, and in the sense of avoiding an exaggerated view of the qualities of its ordinary constituents. "Souls" may be very humble sorts of entities––for example, the soul of a frog––and panpsychists usually suppose that multitudes of units of nature are on a much lower level of psychic life even than that."

Consequently, while it may sound as if it is a form of panpsychism, I don't think CS is panpsychist in the sense of the Wikipedia entry. It's a form of theist monistic idealism, not panpsychism.Be-nice:-) (talk) 08:14, 25 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Christian Science as panpsychism isn't really supported by the reference to Cunningham. He classifies Eddy's philosophy (I also think wrongly) as pantheistic, which paints with a much broader brush than panpsychic.  To infer panpsychism from the reference, even by connotation, is a kind of original deduction.  --Digitalican (talk) 13:45, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
 * It was sourced to this. Has the source come adrift? Alexbrn talk 13:49, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, the source went adrift; I've restored it. SlimVirgin (talk) 23:03, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Unless I'm missing something (which is certainly entirely possible,) that source is no longer referenced in context. Even so, the context is: "Perhaps the most radical form of idealism is the ancient Oriental spiritualistic or panpsychistic idea -- renewed in Christian Science -- that minds and their thoughts are all there is; that reality is simply the sum total of the visions (or dreams?) of one or more minds."  That still seems a distance from classifying Christian Science as panpsychic (which I agree with Be-nice:-) that it should not be. Panpsychism does not map well into the "Scientific Statement of Being" as quoted in the infobox.)  --Digitalican (talk) 14:17, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
 * There a good article about the various forms of panpsychism here in the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy. SlimVirgin (talk) 23:13, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

I agree. If the source gave a strong argument as to why Christian Science is panpsychism, that would be one thing. But this is nothing more than a passing thought. At most it is a minor opinon. But should not be listed as one of the 'beliefs" Simplywater (talk) 18:00, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for that reference on panpsychism SlimVirgin. The Stanford Enc Philos is a great resource.Be-nice:-) (talk) 08:33, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

I see elements in Reschel's summary that would seem to align with CS theology, and elements that would not. (It places an emphasis on the operation of mind, and in CS mind is to matter as water is to ice; the former constitutes the latter. Yet as Albanese notes, Eddy defined her term for temporal minds a "solecism" because those minds are ultimately or ontologically illusory; only Mind "and its infinite manifestation" exists, in infinitely individualized forms.) Yet I may not the best arbiter of that. More salient: what we individually think about whether Eddy's work aligns with this source or not is really beside the point and is rather OT (guilty as charged, as I've weighed in). Most salient: Reschel wrote that it does; his work is RS; and he is the only scholar to refer to CS in this way. All three need to be considered together. I have no problem retaining this reference, but its singular nature makes it an isolated source. These are "usually considered tentative" and not as reliable as others stating more commonly held views.

Because it's an isolated source, and not because of any viewpoint the quote does or doesn't espouse, I propose:
 * Highlighting in the main text the "radical idealism" term that appears in every source cited here (and several others throughout the lit), and
 * Moving Reschel to the fn with an appropriate comment (e.g., "While most scholars describe this position as radical idealism, Reschel moves beyond this common viewpoint to also suggest...").Ath271 (talk) 10:30, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Agreed.Be-nice:-) (talk) 16:23, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Agreed as well. It's a question of what most accurately describes the philosophical view of Christian Science to the reader in the simplest way. The panpsychic reference must be maintained for the student interested in the internal contradictions between what Christian Science espouses and how it plays out in practice, "radical idealism" is most descriptive. --Digitalican (talk) 17:08, 26 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Done. SlimVirgin (talk) 17:18, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

"Skrbina (2005) finds several panpsychist remarks in Plato, many fewer in Aristotle, and a general anti-panpsychist viewpoint coincident with the rise of “Aristotelian” Christianity that lasted until the renaissance. " (Perhaps much of the hostility to CS in mainstream Christianity derives from the philosophy of Aristotle rather than from the Bible itself?) "...one of the central features of quantum mechanics is the existence of informational but non-causal relations between elements of systems. These relations are non-causal insofar as they are modulated instantaneously over any distance and do not involve the transfer of energy between the parts of the system. But they are informational in the sense that the changes of state of one part of the system seems in some way to be communicated to the other. There is no doubt whatsoever that such quantum systems can exist (they have been created in the laboratory) although the interpretation of them in terms of information exchange is contentious. For example, it is possible to create pairs of photons with correlated polarization states, such that, while neither photon is in a definite state of polarization prior to measurement, they must be discovered to be in opposite polarization states when a measurement takes place, no matter how far apart they are when the measurements occur. Such correlated particles are said to be “entangled”. It does not seem unreasonable to regard two such entangled photons as effectively monitoring each other's state of polarization. We can then use a theory of consciousness [...] to argue that a little monitoring makes for a little bit of consciousness. Furthermore, while entangled states are normally very delicate and susceptible to 'decoherence' caused by environmental disturbance, there might be certain systems that can resist decoherence and it has been conjectured that these systems are the physical foundation of more complex states of consciousness [...]. To follow this line of thought even further, the decoherence argument evidently collapses for the universe as a whole, which by definition cannot be disturbed by any outside force, so presumably the total universe is in one immensely complex entanglement..." As CS would put it, there is but one Mind: "All is infinite Mind and its infinite manifestation, for God is All-in-all." However, I still don't thing that panpsychism is the best description of the philosophy of CS. (It's certainly a radical form of monistic (theistic) idealism, but whether that's equivalent to panpsychism is another matter.)Be-nice:-) (talk) 17:23, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Should have mentioned that the above are two quotes from the entry on "Panpsychism" in the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy.Be-nice:-) (talk) 21:22, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Archiving
I've set the bot to archive faster to clear the page so that it's easier to use. If someone wants to create a separate page for sources, e.g. Talk:Christian Science/sources, we can link to that at the top of the page, rather than having it take up space here. SlimVirgin (talk) 18:29, 20 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you so much. I just wanted to make sure someone had used the different books suggested.  Do you know which of the books that were suggested have been used in the article?  I got a copy of Spiritual Healing in a Scientific Age at the library.  I'll give some different suggestions on quotes after I read it to see what may be useful.  BTW.  If I respond to your messaged on my talk page, do you see it?  Or do I need to respond on your talk page?Simplywater (talk) 00:12, 21 February 2014 (UTC)


 * You can respond on your talk page to anything posted there, and you can respond here to anything posted here. I'll see it in either place so don't worry about that. Would you like me to start a page listing sources that you can work on? As for the books already used in this article, if you look at the References section, you'll see the sources, or just do a search for the name of the author in the article. SlimVirgin (talk) 00:23, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

Simplywater, I appreciate the enthusiasm in your contributions, yet I'm concerned about the length and frequency of your posts. SV has had to speed up the archive bot to accommodate them. The page becomes full so quickly that important threads are lost and discussion is inhibited. I wonder if you would be open to studying and reflecting on the WP guidelines for Talk page use and good practices. This isn't to discourage you from contributing, but to encourage contributions that make this page easier to use, which benefits the article. Are you open to this? So many thanks for considering it.Ath271 (talk) 08:55, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

AbsolutelySimplywater (talk) 03:08, 27 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Many thanks.Ath271 (talk) 20:13, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

antecedent of feminism in the religious world
The Melton/Gottschalk article http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/115181/Christian-Science/8362/Significance mentions that the significance of Christian Science and the role it played in developing women place in the Protestant Church. Should a paragraph be devoted to this? I'm happy to do the research.Simplywater (talk) 16:17, 21 February 2014 (UTC)


 * It's a good idea to write something about CS and women, though I wouldn't use the EB article as a source (there are lots of scholarly sources available on this). My only concern is that the article is getting long, currently 10,600 words. Some of my recent editing has been to reduce length without losing content; I got it down by about 1,000 words. Separate articles would be nice on several issues: Christian Science theology, Next Friends Suit and Christian Science and women. SlimVirgin (talk) 19:36, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

There are lots of sources that talk about CS, women and leadership in the late 1800's.  I guess what is missing is a summery of the significance. From what I've been reading, scholarship points to the effect CS had in empowering women in religion and the effect the healing had on the Protestant faith, helping to move. especially women in Christianity. from a God who adores sickly suffering women to a God that heals.Simplywater (talk) 01:05, 22 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Eddy has a huge feminist historiography that's available in the footnotes of recent scholarly lit. However as SV says, this should probably be a separate article, so now might not be the time to engage it. The content would need a clear place to live before developing it.Ath271 (talk) 09:27, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Thank you!! Simplywater (talk) 17:29, 27 February 2014 (UTC)

For anyone interested in this, the Journal of Feminist Studies in Religion is the top journal at the intersection of feminism and women's studies. It's not an area I can particularly comment on, but I can say that much. A considerable article could be written, then posted, by simply summarizing the arguments in each significant piece of lit as it appeared chronologically.Ath271 (talk) 20:20, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Christian Science church
Just noting here that two editors have recently said on their user pages that they're working for the Christian Science church.

acknowledged on 7 February that he's a media representative for the church, and volunteered not to edit the articles directly from now on. He wanted us to change the first sentence last year so that it didn't link CS to New Thought. He has also asked that we remove from Mary Baker Eddy that she was addicted to morphine. 

posted on 9 February on his user page that the Christian Science church is paying him to edit. Ath has made only two article edits so far (to the Eddy bio last year), introducing an error to the lead that Eddy was twice widowed. (She was once twice widowed and once divorced.)

In addition, (who I don't believe worked for the church and the timing may be a coincidence) also recently focused, like Bridge Bendek, on the first sentence (among other things), wanting to remove that CS belongs to the metaphysical family of new religious movements. On 7 February a new account,, arrived to support Simplywater, which prompted SW to make the edit, claiming consensus. 

I posted a note here last year to try to clarify what would count as a COI in the context of this article; see here in case it's helpful. The guideline is at WP:COI and the financial section is at WP:NOPAY. It says:

"If you have a financial connection to a topic – including, but not limited to, as an owner, employee, contractor or other stakeholder – you are advised to refrain from editing affected articles directly. You may use the article talk pages ... to suggest changes, or the request edit template to request edits (see WP:TEAHOUSE if you have questions about these things)."

I hope this helps. (Pinging and  to let them know they've been mentioned.) SlimVirgin (talk) 16:30, 9 February 2014 (UTC)


 * SlimVirgin, it's correct that Eddy was twice widowed. Her first husband, whom she married at a young age, died when they were living in the South. Her second husband she divorced on the grounds of his infidelity. Her third husband predeceased her. Consequently she was twice widowed (and once divorced).Be-nice:-) (talk) 15:41, 10 February 2014 (UTC)


 * True, thank you, I missed out the second widowing. It was the missing divorce I wondered about. SlimVirgin (talk) 15:51, 10 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Glad to see the widowing issue has been resolved. Probably TMI, but dates in case they’re helpful: widowed 1844 (George Washington Glover); divorced 1873 (Daniel Patterson); widowed 1882 (Asa Gilbert Eddy).Ath271 (talk) 21:12, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

I am fine with the inclusion that some people consider it in the metaphysical family as long as it is also recognized that it is often treated with in the rubric of Christianity. The first sentence should be an non debatable fact. If you have to present an argument as to why Christian Science is considered metaphysical, that means it is contested. My understanding is that Wikipedia is here to present the facts, not make a case for one thing or the other. There are several of us that disagree with the first sentence. Consensus???? We should keep working at it until we all have a first sentence we can agree with. a sentence that doesn't favor on side or the other. Simplywater (talk) 18:00, 10 February 2014 (UTC)

--

Many thanks, SlimVirgin, for the input re: COI and page history. It should help to clarify that the word “contribute” in my user profile doesn’t necessarily mean “edit.” Given the contentious nature of this page in the past, I’ve been assuming the opposite. I fully understand COI guidelines and related sensitivities on this page, and my sense of respecting them is to contribute neutral information to the Talk page. (As a side note, I had no issues with WP:NOPAY or WP:COI last year when editing the Mary Baker Eddy page. I was a fellow at an academic institution then.)

It’s also the case that I’m not an advocate, but an academic, and that my participation is on a warts-and-all basis. See for details. My goal isn’t to represent a particular church viewpoint, but to represent the full range of current scholarship. This is where and I differ. (Why the church is open to paying me to do this at this juncture is an interesting question that I have a few theories on, which I won’t elaborate here unless relevant.) But I’m still paid, and that requires managing COI. To reiterate, given this particular page’s history, we’re in agreement that this involves contributing to the Talk page.

I agree about the volume of posts made without the information at hand to convincingly suggest content changes. Anyone can and should participate, of course, as long as they conform to disclosure guidelines and other ethics. But adequate sourcing seems to be a perennial need. My purpose in contributing a literature review is to support WP:NPOV by “representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without bias, all of the significant views that have been published by reliable sources on a topic.”

Though I haven't been tracking this page for long, it's evident that it's in much better shape than it was a year ago. Yet several of my academic colleagues have noted that most sources considered standard in this field of study aren't represented here (and that they have no time to contribute suggestions themselves, a position I’m sympathetic to). It may be that it’s more useful here to go with the more standard approach of itemizing instances where sourcing could be improved. Unless there’s discussion on the range of lit I presented above or specific works, I’ll shift to that approach.Ath271 (talk) 21:12, 10 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Hi Ath, thank you for clarifying that. It would indeed be very helpful to hear suggestions for academic sources on particular issues; that is, if you could point out issues that need better sources, or anything important that's missing or poorly described. SlimVirgin (talk) 21:43, 10 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Sure thing, and sure thing. I'll consider this and contribute something before long. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ath271 (talk • contribs)


 * On second thoughts, I feel uneasy about the presence of the Christian Science church on this page, and the suggestion in other threads that we use certain sources but not others. So I've struck my post above in case it puts me in the position of having invited the input. SlimVirgin (talk) 17:07, 13 February 2014 (UTC)


 * No worries. No invitation necessary. (I simply read that as showing respect for civil discourse without implying de facto acceptance of any input offered, and I appreciated both.) Yet I do hope this doesn’t imply that I’m not welcome. I’ll assume it doesn’t unless I hear otherwise.


 * Not sure what source-related threads are invoked here, so I’ll just note that my few comments have emphasized that whatever sources are used should be the best available according to WP:RS, not that any sources should be included or excluded on some other basis. If further clarification is needed on this, might you kindly say so? Many thanks.


 * Re: “the church," It's present here in the voices of adherents and ex-adherents, the cultural memories and impressions of observers, my voice as a contractor. This diversity and multiplicity is important. I’m not “the church”; I’m a scholar who has negotiated an independent contract with the church. It's natural for there to be questions about my participation that might evolve. I get that. I have some myself. However with the exception of official spokespeople (and I’m not one), churches include and hire individuals who speak from a variety of perspectives (and as in any normally functioning organization, often these don't remotely agree). Historians of churches are individuals who can’t speak for “the church,” but can speak only about what the church has done and how it has been historically perceived.


 * Also I'm aware that WP desires the input of scholar-experts even while having a complex relationship with them. I don’t assume a level of authority here above what others might find in their own research. At the same time, my input is serious, individualized, and ethical, and I hope that continues to become clear as I contribute (whenever and however I'm able).Ath271 (talk) 04:55, 19 February 2014 (UTC)


 * The Christian Science church seems to regard you as its representative on Wikipedia. Its media rep, Bridge bendek, has posted: "... because Ath and I both re-engaged on WP at the same time, I am going to take a break from the site." (Sorry, just noticed after I wrote this that he's repeated it below.) SlimVirgin (talk) 21:26, 19 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you SlimVirgin! Coming back on here if it's helpful to say that the church has asked Ath to provide scholarly support to this page so far as it's helpful and in line with WP rules. I left to defer to Ath because of Ath's expertise, not to make Ath an official spokesperson here. I'm happy to return to fulfill that role. Thank you! Bridge bendek COI 16:14, 25 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Gah, I'd better respond here before the bot sweeps away this thread. Yes, if being an official rep here were part of my contractual agreement, I’d have to decline. The operative points in my case are that a) the church organization has agreed to give me full control of my own material here (they are not overseeing or editing any of it) and b) I’m not part of a team trying to establish control of this or any page but am simply contributing along with others. In WP terms, again, my participation is in line with WP:PAY. And again, I have my own observations about why the church is open to an arrangement like this at this juncture; happy to discuss if useful.


 * I’m fine with having Bridge bendek here if having a church spokesperson is helpful. If he’s not here, there isn’t one. Yet if anyone is disinclined to accept a comment or suggestion I’ve made because it appears to promote, advocate, or advance the interests of the CS church rather than the accuracy or neutrality of the page, or because it doesn’t appear to have scholarly merit, I welcome and encourage a description of how this is the case. The more specific, the better. I may have a good response that clarifies things; I'd hope so, but I may not. Or I may receive input that changes my views, which I always welcome.Ath271 (talk) 10:56, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Hello Ath, and welcome. It would be very useful if you could point to one or two academically-sound and non-aligned (non CS) sources that discuss Christian Science theology/philosophy accurately, objectively and thoroughly, preferably peer-reviewed sources (eg university presses). I stress the focus on theology/philosophy, not history or politics, as the former is what is seriously under-represented in the article. (For example Gill is seen as pro-CS, and Fraser is very much anti-CS. We need another option or two._ Thanks.Be-nice:-) (talk) 20:48, 11 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you, Be. I'm not a philosopher or a theologian, so I know those literatures less well than historical material, but I can say with authority that CS is not well represented in either discipline. I can also say, however, that in the historical study of religion, theological points are routinely taken up in order to establish the motives and viewpoints of historical subjects. There is quite a bit of this type of inquiry in the literature above. I'll also reiterate that it's not the author's relative viewpoint (pro, con, or more often mixed) that marks their work as a reliable source on Wikipedia. It's the publication criteria and process, as you indicate; Wikipedia's goal is for pages to reflect a healthy array of sources that meet that criteria, regardless of authorial perspective.Ath271 (talk) 21:11, 11 February 2014 (UTC)

Hi all! Thank you SlimVirgin - and thank you for all your hard work on this page! Sorry for the delay in responding here. Because Ath and I both re-engaged on Wikipedia at the same time, I am going to take a break from the site. Thank you! Bridge bendek COI 19:24, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Conflict of Interest - Adding COI is secondary to an editor which hopes to dominant a page. Wikipedia's first interest is serving its readers with a neutral perspective that includes a variety of view points. "COI allegations should not be used as a "trump card" in disputes over article content."Simplywater (talk) 16:48, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Members/Adherents
A person can be an adherent to, or believer in, CS without being a member of the CS church. Could that be clarified somewhere? (I can think of a number of people in my circle of friends/acquaintances who fall into that category. Extrapolating, there must be a considerable number in total.) While the CS church encourages people to join, it is fairly laid-back about membership and certainly doesn't make it as big an issue as some other churches do. Furthermore, there are two "levels" of membership: a Christian Scientist may be a member of a local (branch) church, of the Boston Mother Church, of both, or of neither. There are many people who are Christian Scientists who (a) have not got around to jointing the CS church; (b) don't intend to; or (c) were members at one time but left for whatever reason. Christian Science is basically a matter of self-identification rather than formal membership of an organisation.Be-nice:-) (talk) 10:50, 3 March 2014 (UTC)


 * If you have a source, we could add something about it to the section about members. SlimVirgin (talk) 01:55, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

Stephen Gottschalk being treated fairly
I guess I'm a little confused why information from Gottschalks books, which is considered controversial is not allowed in this article, but information from critical conservative Christians is? Slimvirgin, Who made that decision? Could you point me to the wiki rule that supports that? Simplywater (talk) 04:34, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Quimbyism
The wiki article on Quimby, makes a great distinction between Christian Science and Quimby. Should the differences be mentioned? They list different sources
 * http://www.phineasquimby.com/quimby_manuscripts.pdf.
 * ‘Quimby’s son and defender said categorically, “The religion which [Mrs. Eddy] teaches certainly is hers, for which I cannot be too thankful; for I should be loath to go down to my grave feeling that my father was in any way connected with ‘Christian Science.’...In [Quimby’s method of] curing the sick, religion played no part. There were no prayers, there was no asking assistance from God or any other divinity. He cured by his wisdom.” (Dresser, Horatio W., ed. The Quimby Manuscripts. New York: Thomas Y. Crowell Company Publishers, 1921. - p436)


 * Gillian Gill, page 159,


 * Karl Holl
 * “That which connected her [Eddy] with Quimby was her conviction that all disease in the last analysis has its roots in the mind, and that healing therefore must be effected through mental influence. But it was her earnest Puritan faith in God that separated her from Quimby from the beginning.” (Karl Holl, German Historian), and A good composite of both Quimby, and the incompatibility of his ideas and practice with those of Eddy, can be found in these sources:


 * Taves, Ann, Fits, Trances, & Visions: Experiencing Religion and Explaining Experience from Wesley to James. Princeton University Press 1999 (pp 212-218);
 * Peel, Robert. Mary Baker Eddy: The Years of Discovery. Boston: Holt, Rinehart and Winston, 1966 (chapter, “Portland 1862”);
 * Gill, Gillian. Mary Baker Eddy. Cambridge, Mass.: Perseus Books, 1998 (pp 131-146 & 230-233). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simplywater (talk • contribs) 01:45, 22 February 2014 (UTC)


 * The Quimby section seems to be a bit weighted agaisnt' Eddy. Searching for neutrality.  Again, there isn't any academic voice on the other side of the argument, even though that voice does exist in Gill and Ann Taves.

Gill - It would be helpful to include Gill's findings.... If you need to balance Gill's quotes, I would take out her first quote in this section, because it really doesn't capture her argument. She says with regard to Milnine's finding
 * "As I shall show in the course of this book, the evidence that Mary Baker Eddy's healing theology was based to any large extent on the Quimby manuscrips is not only weak but largely rigged.
 * '''"Dresser makes no suggestion that this type of healing involves tapping into a divine strength" page 159
 * "In this chapter I have argued insistently upong the radical originality of Mrs. Eddy's work in Science and Health. Such a view swims against a strong anti-Christian Science current-"
 * "the problem with thie (their) line of reasoning is that it is untrue, and it is demonstrably untrue to anyone who holds a copy of Quimby's Questions and Answers in one hand and Mrs. Eddy's "Science of Man" in the other." — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simplywater (talk • contribs) 23:41, 23 February 2014 (UTC) whoops sorrySimplywater (talk) 23:56, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

There are 8 sources making reference to Eddy and plagerism. Fraser dismisses the Quimby charge, But there are several charges left with no response. The Mary Baker Eddy library has some interesting research on the 'taking offence' article - http://www.marybakereddylibrary.org/research/offenseSimplywater (talk) 17:53, 27 February 2014 (UTC)

Since no one is responding, I'm guessing I'm free to make some edits. I have the Fits, Trances and Visions books on order at the Library. It would be nice to add some different sources. However, I am having a hard time seeing the neutrality in this section. It seems like a general free space for anyone who wants to throw out a charge against Mary Baker Eddy's writings.Simplywater (talk) 04:57, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Martin
I like SV’s idea above of starting a Talk page for sources if needed, but perhaps that's no longer required. I’ll assume so for now.

Re: Walter Martin’s The Kingdom of the Cults: This isn’t RS or a “religious reference book” in a normal sense. It’s published by a conservative Christian press that says the book will help believers in their “ministry and evangelism” to provide “a defense of the faith” and “true biblical theology,” and that it will give fundamentalist Christians “apologetics help.” I note that the WP page on this book presents it as neutral; the short summary there appears to be based on the title’s amazon description, which is the publisher’s description minus key details about the book's religious rationale. (It seems to be a ministry strategy of the publisher to present it as neutral to wider audiences.) So I can see how it would seem to be RS at first glance. This book is sometimes an object of academic study, but there ends its academic use.

Proposal 1: Because Martin is not RS, remove the reference to Martin’s book.

Proposal 2: Could keep the source in a footnote with text like, “Some conservative Christians have long defined Christian Science as a cult and developed ministry tools designed to combat it on theological grounds, chief of which is Walter Martin’s TKotC.”Ath271 (talk) 21:24, 28 February 2014 (UTC)


 * It might be in an article about the specific book, but general encyclopedia articles are not places to promote books or to give book reviews of every book remotely on the topic.  Unless the book makes a specific claim in this article and fully meets WP:RS, it just will not fit in.  "Ministry strategy" is not really a good hook here. Collect (talk) 21:30, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

Agree with Ath's proposal 1 or 2.Be-nice:-) (talk) 22:17, 28 February 2014 (UTC)

I infer from Collect's comments that Ath271's Proposal 1 is preferred. I agree. --Digitalican (talk) 22:36, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes -- thunk I was clear enough  Collect (talk) 00:09, 1 March 2014 (UTC)


 * The Kingdom of the Cults isn't named in the theology section as an RS, but as an example of a well-known religious reference book that includes CS as a cult (see the entry here). That's why its inclusion in the article has a secondary source, rather than being used as a source itself. The source is Philip Jenkins, Mystics and Messiahs: Cults and New Religions in American History, Oxford University Press. There was one instance of it as an RS in the article (one of several sources in a bundled ref), which I've removed. SlimVirgin (talk) 00:25, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for removing the bundled ref. And thanks for the clarification, helpful. Since Jenkins is the secondary source, shouldn’t he be named rather than Martin? And if kept in, shouldn’t the reference to Martin’s work be in line with how Jenkins refers to it?

Sorry so long below. Several overlapping issues here. Can skip to Summary and Proposal and revisit any details as needed.

Here’s the sentence in the article: “Several scholars continue to view it as a cult because of the rejection of medicine and the degree to which it departs from traditional Christian doctrine;[32] it remained listed in the 2003 edition of Walter Ralston Martin's (1928–1989) religious reference book, The Kingdom of the Cults.[33]” Martin is invoked here (grammatically and conceptually) as an example of the “several scholars” who continue to view CS as a cult. Modifying this to refer to the RS (Jenkins) should be fairly simple. So should ensuring that it reflects Jenkins’s view of Martin’s work.

Jenkins refers to Martin a few times, most succinctly as an example of several “Christian, usually evangelical, attacks on Christian and Christian-derived movements,” including Christian Science. Jenkins’s full description, on p. 51: [http://books.google.com/books?id=FeL1HpJ-Jh8C&pg=PA51&lpg=PA51&dq=%22At+least+until+the+1960s,+the+majority+of+books+concerning+cults%22&source=bl&ots=iWCXiddu4Q&sig=QCixpgghDitNlNV7D1KqKxh8W00&hl=en&sa=X&ei=s2EXU4KyDsSX1AHRi4DYCQ&ved=0CCcQ6AEwAA#v=onepage&q=%22At%20least%20until%20the%201960s%2C%20the%20majority%20of%20books%20concerning%20cults%22&f=false “At least until the 1960s, the majority of books concerning cults followed this same pattern, comprising Christian, and usually evangelical, attacks on other Christian and Christian-derived movements. Standard books on cults included”] Martin’s KofC (which Jenkins here discusses re: Jehovah’s Witnesses, but CS is included in the paragraph’s broader point). He continues (p.52), “For their Christian critics, the cults fell short of full or authentic Christianity.” And later (p. 59), “The main thrust of the attack” on Christian Science by orthodox and other critics “faded rapidly” after 1910, yet “even so, religious critics would long continue to denounce Christian Science as a cult, and as late as 1992 the church still merited a starring role in the latest edition of Walter Martin’s Kingdom of the Cults.” Using any one of these quotes, or a snippet from it, would clarify Jenkins's view of Martin, which differs in key ways from that of the book's publisher.

Another main issue: The first half of the sentence also needs work to more accurately capture the work of the sociologists it cites. The sentence now says, “Several scholars continue to view it as a cult because of the rejection of medicine and the degree to which it departs from traditional Christian doctrine.” Actually:
 * Jenkins often seems to agree with his early-20th-c. orthodox Christian sources that CS “departs from traditional Christian doctrine,” but this is not a feature he especially links to his view of CS a cult. His first chapter makes many suggestive and sweeping characterizations re: “Cults in American History,” but these descriptions are linked to specifics time periods, and it’s difficult to extrapolate from one to all. The closest he comes to defining 19th century cults is the fairly standard “select and separatist groups who looked to a prophetic individual claiming divine revelation” (p.4-5). This is in reference to mostly early 19th century groups, but he doesn’t get closer than this to CS temporally. He does link unorthodoxy to every group in the book, but no more or less than he links dozens of other descriptions to cult status.
 * OTOH, Stark and Bainbridge do link the unorthodox aspects of CS to a proposed cult status; they are they only ones who specifically do this. And Simmons is the only one to argue the “cult” classification for medically-based reasons. They could be considered isolated sources and put in a footnote, or they could be treated as individual examples of a broader inclination among some NRM scholars to classify CS as a cult. Jenkins and Melton appear to simply use the term in its generic and contested classical sociological sense. This makes for some slippage in their texts between the scholarly and pejorative uses of “cult,” illustrating why this term is so heavily debated, but it’s certainly their scholarly prerogative to sidestep this debate. These are their books, and they can do what they wish in them. WP can’t invoke the same prerogative; it can point to the debate and explain it, which would improve the clarity of this paragraph. At the very least, WP can make sure not to engage in this same slippage.

Summary: Two sociologists describe CS as a cult for unique and differing reasons; another two do so more generically, in the contested yet classical sociological manner. In a parallel yet sometimes touching universe, some conservative Christian groups (signalled by Martin) continue to call CS a cult in the same sense used by the early clerics cited in the first half of the paragraph.

Proposal: Follow the sentence about A.H. Barrington’s piece on CS, Spiritualism, and Theosophy (a nice redux of points in Jenkins) with something like,
 * “Some groups of conservative Christians continue to refer to it as a cult. Philip Jenkins notes that it remained listed in the 1992 edition of Walter Ralston Martin's (1928–1989) The Kingdom of the Cults, which Jenkins calls one of several books produced by “religious critics.” (p. 59)
 * Cite Jenkins, p. 59, in the footnote, along with the full quote (pasted/linked above).
 * Optionally, add to the fn any other quotes about Martin from Jenkins (pasted/linked above).
 * There's no RS to cite for this (since Jenkins published a decade prior and mentions the 1992 edition), but could note that CS remains in the 2003 edition of Martin’s book.
 * Continue in the main text with something like, “Some present-day sociologists call CS a cult in the nominally non-pejorative (yet contested) sense found within their field of study, and they offer differing reasons for classifying CS this way.”
 * Link “contested” to the NRM WP page to give readers an accurate and current view of this debate.
 * Then continue either in the text or in the footnote, as space allows, with something like, “Simmons views CS as a cult because of its rejection of (conventional) medicine; Stark and Bainbridge cite the degree to which it departs from traditional Christian doctrine. Jenkins and Melton call CS a cult in the more generic sociological sense, without focusing on any one particular rationale.”
 * Actually, Melton's encyclopedia work should probably be cut, since it's a tertiary source and there are three others cited that are RS. But I'm not especially concerned with that.Ath271 (talk) 17:32, 5 March 2014 (UTC)(originally autostamped 16:59, 5 March 2014)

Thanks so much for the edits, SV. If you might note briefly here, as usual, when you edit based on Talk page input, that would be helpful. (I’m assuming this is best practice; just let me know if not. And apologies if you just haven’t gotten around to it yet.)

This sentence still remains: “It remained listed in the 2003 edition of Walter Ralston Martin's (1928–1989) religious reference book, The Kingdom of the Cults.”

The RS cited for this is Jenkins; but on the page the reference points to, Jenkins refers to the 1992 edition of Martin’s book. The sentence needs to be appropriately edited to reflect the source.Ath271 (talk) 22:32, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Fastest-growing religion
I've reverted the addition to the lead that it was one of the fastest-growing religions between 1900 and 1925, for two reasons. First, there was consensus to restrict the discussion of figures in the lead to what is there now; if we want to call it one of the fastest-growing the best place is at the end of the "First journal, first church building" section, which discusses membership figures during that period.

The lead already violates UNDUE by equating church estimates with independent ones, so to add anything about fastest-growing then, without mentioning the decline now, would make that worse (but the lead shouldn't be longer or more detailed on that point).

Second, the source actually says "far the fastest growing," not one of the fastest. And it's not clear that that's correct. Whorton is an historian of science, not religion, and he doesn't cite his source (it's Whorton btw, not Vorton, and The History of Alternative Medicine in America, not the history of American medicine in America). I think there are more appropriate sources who would have looked at the census figures and church memberships (I believe Melton discusses it and Rodney Stark certainly does). SlimVirgin (talk) 20:22, 7 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Let's get rid of the census sentence. That can go with the other numbers futher down.  Since there is a very long discussion about CS being a cult under theology, it's fair to acknowledge, as discussed under 'denomination' it is also recognized as a denomination.128.223.146.128 (talk) 22:54, 7 March 2014 (UTC)Simplywater (talk) 22:55, 7 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Rodney Stark (1998) does indeed address it: "During the first several decades of the twentieth century, Christian Science was the fastest growing American religious movement." He has made a detailed study of the figures so he's probably the most appropriate source. I've added it to the "First journal, first church building" section. SlimVirgin (talk) 15:25, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

SlimVirgin, I'm answering this discussion under the 'denomination' section because that is where the references to this discussion are. Simplywater (talk) 16:45, 8 March 2014 (UTC)


 * The sentence starting "Eddy redefined terms... " didn't see a source for that. What is the source?Simplywater (talk) 23:06, 7 March 2014 (UTC

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Denomination, Redux
The most important point of that census is the one from 1926 says that Christian Science has been recognized by the U.S. Government as a denomination since before 1916. I think that is fair to include the reality, apart from those who are prejudiced against Christian Science. The First Church of Christ, Scientist is recognized as a denomination by the U.S. government. Some may call it a cult. But who gets to decide? The U.S. government calls it a denomination. The Christian Science denomination was founded by Mary Baker Eddy in 1879.


 * A footnote to the referenced page points out that statement was furnished by the Christian Science Board of Directors, not the U.S. Government or Census Bureau. --Digitalican (talk) 16:13, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

I propose to add the sentence, slimvirgin you can decide where, "The First Chruch of Christ, Scientist is recognized by the U.S. government as a denomination" Some may not agree, but it is true.Simplywater (talk) 15:44, 19 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Where is that documented as such? Although the U.S. Census has asked (on the long form) for religious self-identification. That does not seem to me to be the same as recognizing a denomination. I would suspect that it is not constitutionally possible for the U.S. Government to recognize a religious institution as more than an organization, without respect to affiliation. --Digitalican (talk) 15:54, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

It is on page 354 under denominational historySimplywater (talk) 16:30, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
 * It's from 1926 and the footnote on the page says the statement was provided by the CS Church Board. So we might use it to say that in 1926 the CS Church Board chose to characterize CS as a "denomination". But that's not worth saying in my view. Alexbrn talk 16:36, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

U.S. Department of State Foreign Affairs Manual Volume 9 Visas
 * "Practitioners and nurses of the Christian Science Church (Church of Christ, Scientist) may properly be considered as ministers of religion under INA 101(a)(27)(C). Readers and lecturers do not qualify as ministers, but could qualify as an alien seeking to come in a religious vocation or occupation. The Christian Science Church is considered a religious denomination with an organization in the United States."   http://www.state.gov/documents/organization/87563.pdf

Christian Science practitioners are able to obtain R1 visas. ALSO 9 FAM 42.32(d)(1) N1.1 Determining Bona Fide Organization http://www.state.gov/documents/organization/87563.pdf
 * "Religious workers include ministers of a religion who are authorized by a recognized denomination"
 * The U.S. government defines denomination as having "a formal code of doctrine or discipline, religious services and ceremonies, some form of ecclesiastical government, a recognized creed and form of worship, religious congregations and established places of worship"
 * The Salvation army and Christian Science practitioners may be considered ministers for an R1 visa http://www.immihelp.com/visas/religiousvisa/Simplywater
 * UTC)9 FAM 42.32(d)(1) N1.3 Practitioners and Nurses of Christian Science Church http://www.state.gov/documents/organization/87563.pdf

(talk) 16:53, 19 February 2014

IRS from 4361 - Christian Science exemption from self employment tax


 * Only ministers of recognized denominations can apply for exemption from self employment tax
 * Christian Science practitioners are able to apply for exemption from self employment tax http://www.irs.gov/pub/irs-pdf/f4361.pdf
 * Christian Science is recognized as a denomination by the IRS.Simplywater (talk) 17:19, 19 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Any good secondary sources discussing this? Alexbrn talk 17:22, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Here are some. There are a lot of references on Law websites. Here are references from books http://books.google.com/books?id=TPs4AAAAIAAJ&pg=PA366&dq=us+definition+of+denomination&hl=en&sa=X&ei=dewEU5DSM7OMyAH5nYHgCg&ved=0CDMQ6AEwAg#v=onepage&q=us%20definition%20of%20denomination&f=false

http://books.google.com/books?id=wC8Q-LMBkGsC&pg=PA154&dq=religious+visa+requirements+christian+science&hl=en&sa=X&ei=pe0EU8niPOO0yAHCl4CQDg&ved=0CFwQ6AEwBg#v=onepage&q=religious%20visa%20requirements%20christian%20science&f=false "only individual authorized by a religious denomination...."

http://books.google.com/books?id=OO5L123r3kQC&pg=PA15&dq=religious+visa+requirements&hl=en&sa=X&ei=7u4EU6nvDOjcyQHN1YHoCA&ved=0CEAQ6AEwATgK#v=onepage&q=religious%20visa%20requirements&f=false "

Pg 90 http://books.google.com/books?id=QVxdDqOQnoMC&q=religious+visa+requirements+christian+science&dq=religious+visa+requirements+christian+science&hl=en&sa=X&ei=X_AEU_qKCOu-sQT9s4HQBg&ved=0CDsQ6AEwADgU

pg 60 http://books.google.com/books?id=WvNs4F3LFBcC&pg=PR37&dq=massachusetts+christian+science+religious+denomination&hl=en&sa=X&ei=G_EEU9LZE4i20AHYy4GADw&ved=0CFUQ6AEwBg#v=onepage&q=massachusetts%20christian%20science%20religious%20denomination&f=falseSimplywater (talk) 18:01, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

p.s The Christian Science Church is considered a religious denomination with an organization in the United States. is a direct quote from http://www.state.gov/documents/organization/87563.pdfSimplywater (talk) 18:07, 19 February 2014 (UTC)Simplywater (talk) 19:29, 19 February 2014 (UTC)Simplywater (talk) 19:41, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Hello??? Any object to me adding ---The Christian Science church is considered a religious denomination by US department of homeland security. Simplywater (talk) 01:26, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
 * sourced to which source exactly? I'm not seeing the significance? Alexbrn talk 06:24, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
 * The amount of hair-splitting going on is and has been unnecessary.  Is Christian Science a religious denomination?  Both the U.S. Internal Revenue Service and Department of Homeland Security say so, and Simplywater has documented that fact.  (It is at least a debatable proposition as to whether Christian Science should be called a Christian Denomination, but that's another discussion.)  My inference is that this speaks to the lead sentence about what Christian Science is over and above a set of beliefs and practices. That, in turn, reflects the indirect argument about the legitimacy (in the sociological sense) of Christian Science that has been going on for over a year here.


 * Are these U.S. Government documents academic peer-reviewed sources? Directly, no.  Indirectly, yes.  Are they arbiters of fact?  I would find it hard to say that they are not.  --Digitalican (talk) 14:20, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
 *  Significance 

The Christian Science Church is considered a religious denomination with an organization in the United States.http://www.state.gov/documents/organization/87563.pdf I agree with Digitalican that the word 'denomination replace "beliefs and practices".Simplywater (talk) 16:21, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
 * 1) For me, the greatest significance is that there is a person who has been a part of this conversation for over a year and it matters to him. What are we doing on Wikipedia if we can't honor each other.
 * 2)  Words have meaning. 'cult, new religious movement, sect, denomination' all have different connotations.
 * 3) in the eyes of the U.S. government, the word denomination communicates some sort of religious stability.
 * 4) the U.S. government sees the significance of a group being a 'denomination' I.e. it carries a legal standing,
 * 5) Wikipedia solicits all verifiable view points. Especially those that really matter to long time participants. RESPECT
 * 6) The Federal Governments view point of the religious status of Christian Science is in the interest of Homeland Security.
 * 7) Homeland Security in these pressing times is of utmost importance
 * 8) we want to assure the wiki readers that Christian Science is not a National threat, a dangerous cult, or a terrifying sect.
 * Seems to be a quirk of the US visa system; unless there's some high-quality source discussing its significance in the categorization of CS, including it would be undue, as we have very good sources directly addressing that topic already. Alexbrn talk 16:34, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

'''There are those who consider it a cult. Yet still, the Federal Government, considers it a denomination.''' I don't think any of the secondary sources that have been presented suggesting that Christina Science is a cult would hold up in a court of law, thus denying a Christian Science practitioner a visa./ I'm trying to imagine the lawyer saying "but Melton says they are not a denomination but a cult". If your sources can't hold up in a court of law, it is not that high quality of a source. And it is this philosophical discussion of cult, sect ect which is just a meaningless quirk, don't you think? wiki wants all verifyable viewpoints to present all sides of an issue. This is one side of the issue don't you think?Simplywater (talk) 17:32, 20 February 2014 (UTC

ps. it is not just for visas. The government definition of denomination also influences the IRS and tax deductions and unemployment taxes. And that is not a meaningless quirk. We don't have to add everything. We can just assure anyone who may read this article, that for legal purposes, Christian Science is considered a denomination.http://www.irs.gov/pub/irs-pdf/f4361.pdfSimplywater (talk) 17:57, 20 February 2014 (UTC)


 * The relationship between the Christian Science church and the United States government over the years has been controversial (e.g. the religious exemptions, the categorization of Christian Science prayer, practitioners, nurses and homes as medical care for the purpose of insurance, the attempt to extend the copyright on Science and Health, etc). It could easily be a separate article. You're highlighting the danger of doing original research based on primary sources without having an overview.


 * You were arguing elsewhere that the article should be based on up-to-date mainstream scholarship, so please find some of that to support what you're saying. SlimVirgin (talk) 18:25, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

Slimvirgin, I really really appreciate all the work you are doing.
 * I will find up-to date scholarship stating that Christian Science is a denomination. I understand textbooks are ok. Is that right?

Bring up any information you feel is important. i.e. government. I would rather that people read this article because it is interesting than pass it up because it is boring. Don't you think? AS long as there is up to date scholarship. This will is becoming a very great article.

Are books like Melton's Encyclopedia mainstream scholarship? I think the Oxford Encyclopedia says Christian Science is a denomination. Does that work? Is the McClure article so old that it has become a primary source?Simplywater (talk) 01:03, 21 February 2014 (UTC)


 * The McClure's articles contain a lot of primary-source material (e.g. affidavits from people who knew Eddy). The articles themselves (and subsequent book) were a secondary source at the time of publication, and in a sense still are. They can also be regarded as a primary source because they were published in Eddy's lifetime, and so give us insight into the way she was viewed at the time.


 * Yes, Melton's work is mainstream. Christian Science is a new religious movement/cult/sect, depending on your perspective and vocabulary. It's not a mainstream Christian denomination. But these are just words, and you are focusing on them too much. I've tried to avoid getting into the church-sect-cult issue; I did at one point start a sub-section in response to your posts, in an effort to accommodate your Kinnamon material and place it in perspective, but it was a mistake and I undid it. The current version has just one paragraph in the theology section saying that it was viewed as a cult during Eddy's lifetime, and one sentence saying that several scholars continued to view it as a cult. I think we should leave it there. SlimVirgin (talk) 01:19, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

SlimVirgin, thank you for taking the time. I do really really appreciate this. But these words mean something to some people.

My understanding is the Encyclopedias may be used if sourced. More important, these two men had to work together to write the article. It may give some insight on what is neutral. I wonder what their discussions were like as they sorted out the wording? Does this count as a source? Looks like in his later writings, Melton changed his mind and Christian Science is a denomination. Simplywater (talk) 02:45, 21 February 2014 (UTC)Melton, Gordon and Gottschalk, Stephen - Encyclopedia Britannia, http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/115181/Christian-Science/8362/Significance
 * Christian Science, religious denomination founded in the United States in 1879 by Mary Baker Eddy (1821–1910), author of the book that contains the definitive statement of its teaching, Science and Health with Key to the Scriptures (1875). It is widely known for its highly controversial practice of spiritual healing.... (50 of 2,341 words)

BTW the article was last updated December, 2013. Gottschalk has passed on. I guess Melton could have removed the word denomination, but he didn't. What is the date of the Melton writings you are using?Simplywater (talk) 02:57, 21 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Gottschalk was a Christian Scientist; we can't place anything he has authored or co-authored in WP's voice (unless it's entirely uncontentious, but then better to find a different source). SW, I'd like to request that you not engage in any more cherry-picking or focus on labels: someone called Christian Science an X, and you like X, therefore Wikipedia must call it an X too. Melton classifies CS in his scholarly work in a variety of ways, most recently as a member of the "Western esotericism" family. CS is also linked by some scholars to the occult; shall we add that too? I really hope this concentration on labels will end, or at least give us a break from it, please. SlimVirgin (talk) 19:27, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

I'm good getting rid of all the labels. Should we take the 'cult' word out all together go get rid of all the labels? Simplywater (talk) 01:08, 22 February 2014 (UTC)

Gottschalk - My understanding is that once a book has been peer reviewed, an authors religion is no longer the issue for true scholars. While we wouldn't want too many quotes from one source, an author's religion should not prejudice us against him. That is my understanding.Simplywater (talk) 02:10, 22 February 2014 (UTC)

Melton calling Christian Science a member of "Western esotericism". Love to read it!!! Looked for that source and couldn't find it. Could you give me the name of the book? Because he includes Christian Science in his "Encyclopedia of Protestantism"Simplywater (talk) 04:21, 22 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Need a little help understanding why having references that call Christian Science labels like cult, heretic, pantheism, gnostic, spiritualism, theosophy, hindu, ect is not controversial, but using references from academics who use the word 'denomination' or 'christian' is controversial? I'm at a loss here.Simplywater (talk) 23:52, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

I looked at other pages and they allow laws as source materials. Since there is a reference to Christian Science being a cult, shouldn't we include the academic voice that labels it a denomination?Simplywater (talk) 14:59, 24 February 2014 (UTC)


 * It's difficult to know where to post in this section, which is long and includes several topics. Two main points:


 * SW, please do drop the “denomination” concept. You’ve brought in several interesting sources, but overall they don't add up to enough to constitute a significant scholarly view.


 * Classifying CS according to scholarship is a matter of the relative weight of the sum total of sources. Some sources are what WP calls “isolated.” Thus (to pull on threads on this page) some RS call CS a “denomination,” but not enough to make the cut here. One scholar calls CS a “community of dissent,” but the term is unique to him. Melton might call CS a type of "Western esotericism,” but he’s essentially alone in this. These are all isolated references.


 * Amending my view here. SW brings out 3 RS below, which is fine by me.Ath271 (talk) 11:11, 6 March 2014 (UTC)


 * SV, I wouldn’t voice discomfort re: the term “cult” on a personal level. And this isn’t an isolated usage. But it’s hard to avoid how broadly contested this term is in the overall lit. I count three mentions in the article; the snippet in the theology section re: how some researchers viewed it as a cult during MBE’s lifetime is great. Overall, agreed and very solid. The other two mentions should reflect the term’s deeply contested status. The term shouldn’t be scrubbed to accommodate religious discomforts, but it should be qualified to note scholarly variety and discrepancy in its use. Common practice says that it shouldn't be used as a neutral term without caveats, qualifications, notes. (At academic conferences, I've never heard it used without air quotes.) WP:NRM lists plenty of sources to show this.Ath271 (talk) 09:17, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Got it. Very helpful.Simplywater (talk) 03:07, 27 February 2014 (UTC)

Don't know if this is an academic source, but it makes reference to the 'cult' vs 'religious movement' debate.

Davis, Derek, New Religious Movements and Religious Liberty in America - Speaking about using the word 'cult'. http://books.google.com/books?id=up5fnY7Wp1wC&pg=PA92&dq=use+of+the+word+cult+new+religious+movements&hl=en&sa=X&ei=TkwPU7msFarp0AHs2oGoBg&ved=0CDkQ6AEwAw#v=onepage&q=use%20of%20the%20word%20cult%20new%20religious%20movements&f=false.


 * The sterotype implies that all unconventional religious groups are the same. when in fact they are vastly diverse in their characteristics, and most of them do not break the law or commit violent acts. "Cult" is a four letter word that communicates hatred and prejudice just as much as racial and anti-Semetic slurs and other various ugly words against women and gay people. Applying any pejorative label to a group can dehumanize them, make it appear to be legitimate to discriminate against them, deprive them of their civil and human rights, and kill them.  (page 92)Simplywater (talk) 15:01, 27 February 2014 (UTC)

Sorry Alh271, but I disagree about dropping the discussion about using the word 'denomination'. Especially from a woman's study perspective. Eddy, is considered to be one of the few American women, to found their own religion. Let along world wide. To dismiss that place that she and a handful of other women hold in history is not very insightful. WP wants important view points represented. From a woman's study perspective, while we don't need to elaborate, Eddy's feat of founding a denomination is note worthy. Especially if the movement is going to be called a 'cult' three time.

Christian Science is known as being one of the few American denominations founded by a woman.
 * Christian, Kevin, Sociology of Religion. Contemporary Developments (Page 190 )
 * "At the same time two entrprenuai women were instrumental in founding new denominations. Mary Baker Eddy in the case of Christian Science and Ellen G. White with the Seventh Day Adventists"http://books.google.com/books?id=EYtjY7GJav4C&pg=PA190&dq=denominations+founded+by+woman+eddy&hl=en&sa=X&ei=tFUPU--lAeKZ1AHj1ICABw&ved=0CEQQ6AEwBA#v=onepage&q=denominations%20founded%20by%20woman%20eddy&f=false
 * Oppenheimer, Mark; Knocking on Heaven's Door: American Religion in the Age of Counterculture, Yale Press (page 134)
 * were preaching and some like the Pentecostal Aimme Semple Mc Phersm, the Shaker Ann Lee, The Seventh Day Adventist Ellen Gould White, and the Christian Scientist Mary Baker Eddy, founded their own denominations.http://books.google.com/books?id=7j6wzn4Aoz8C&pg=PA134&dq=denomination+founded+by+women+eddy&hl=en&sa=X&ei=lVwPU97vMO-50AGF4YGoBQ&ved=0CDQQ6AEwAjgK#v=onepage&q=denomination%20founded%20by%20women%20eddy&f=false


 * Vorton, James C, Nature Cures, The History of American Medicine in America, Oxford University Press (page 123)http://books.google.com/booksid=N21eyOQlE0kC&pg=PA123&dq=women+founded+denomination+eddy&hl=en&sa=X&ei=ymEPU6uzDeHQ0wHwkoDoBQ&ved=0CFYQ6AEwCDgK#v=onepage&q=christian%20science&f=false
 * Between 1900 and 1925 Christian Science was one of the fastest growing denominations in the United States

Help me understand why it is not worth pursuing the inclusion that Christian Science is one of a handful of denominations founded by women. Especially since WP wants all significant view points. I consider this a significant viewpoint from a woman's study perspectiveSimplywater (talk) 16:25, 27 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Maybe you're right. I'll think about it. I wouldn't link the term directly to women's studies, though; none of the sources above come from that field. Each of the authors simply uses the term in the context of new religions founded by women, which may well be incidental. There are plenty of sources that discuss this same set of religions and note the gender of the founders without using the term "denomination."Ath271 (talk) 20:12, 28 February 2014 (UTC)


 * To clarify: when I say maybe you're right, I mean maybe this term has a higher frequency of use than I'd realized. I think SV is right that the term "cult" (in the technical or sociological sense) has a higher frequency of use than I'd realized; this is a disciplinary split (it's been banished to the sidelines in most humanities subfields where I work but appears to be retained more in sociological subfields, though not without piles of accompanying footnotes, a situation the article should reflect. I'll think about this more, too.) If nothing else, all of this may show that the terms denomination, NRM, new religion, emergent religion, etc. are used more or less interchangeably, and the term cult sometimes is used as an equivalent, too, though not unproblematically.Ath271 (talk) 21:11, 28 February 2014 (UTC)


 * I've thought about it. Amending to conclude that all the ways scholars generally describe minority religions - denomination, NRM, sect, cult when specified properly, etc. - should be represented in the article. Not a big deal. None should be favored, excluded, or further belabored.Ath271 (talk) 11:11, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

I found 14 different sources that call Christian Science a denomination. Everything from dictionary uses, Encyclopedia's (Brittania) to books about Christianity. Including "The Idiots guide to Christianity" We don't want to mislead the readers, Christian Science is not viewed by mainstream American as a cult. Even the Wikipedia pages refer to it as a denomination. ie


 * New Religious Movements - "Generally, Christian denominations are not seen as new religious movements; nevertheless, The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (Mormons), the Jehovah's Witnesses, Christian Science, and the Shakers have been studied as NRMs"

The page refers to Christian Science either being thought of as a cult, developed as a cult 3 different times. Each of these references are by fairly orthodox writers. On the other hand, well known publishers like Yale Press, and Oxford Press, are calling it a denomination. It is fair to also mention in some way that many consider it a denomination. It is thought of as a cult by the minority, not the majority of educated thinkers. 1. from a legal point of view it is a denomination. OR 2. from a historical point of view it represents a denomination founded by a woman OR 3.  "It was the fastest growing denomination at the begining of the 20th century"
 * Vorton, James C, Nature Cures, The History of American Medicine in America, Oxford University Press (page 123)http://books.google.com/booksid=N21eyOQlE0kC&pg=PA123&dq=women+founded+denomination+eddy&hl=en&sa=X&ei=ymEPU6uzDeHQ0wHwkoDoBQ&ved=0CFYQ6AEwCDgK#v=onepage&q=christian%20science&f=false
 * Between 1900 and 1925 Christian Science was one of the fastest growing denominations in the United States

SV, does that work for you?Simplywater (talk) 06:44, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

SW, a few points:
 * Of the 14 source you’ve found, most (dictionaries, encyclopedias, Idiot’s guide, etc.) are not RS in WP terms.
 * Christian, Oppenheimer, and Vorton are all RS. These don’t show that a majority of Americans or a majority of people with an advanced education classify CS as a denomination. (No existing study shows either point.) Further, these don’t prove that scholars or critics never refer to CS as a cult.
 * However, this collection of RS does show that some scholars refer to CS as a denomination. Do you have a specific proposal for where to include this in the article?Ath271 (talk) 17:27, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
 * I do,
 * Between 1900 and 1925 Christian Science was one of the fastest growing denominations in the United States" A census at the height of the movement's popularity in 1936 counted nearly 270,000 Christian Scientists in the United States;

This works because this covers the range of names that are attributed to Christian Science. Religious Movement, Cult, Denomination. What still concerns me is the amount of space given to the 'cult' label. 8 sentences. This is a minor view point. As I have shown above, the US government does not consider it a cult. It is not on the list of potentially dangerous movements in the United States. So I feel the weight of discussion about the cult issue is a bit overboard. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simplywater (talk • contribs) 01:04, 6 March 2014 (UTC) Simplywater (talk) 01:52, 6 March 2014 (UTC)


 * I'd vote for a sentence like that, or just for tossing in the word "denomination" occasionally. Proportionately to its use in the lit.


 * No need to make a big deal about it, or any other terminology that scholars don't make a big deal out of themselves. E.g. this doesn't suggest that most Americans or scholars see CS as a denomination, which seems to have been what much of this section argues. But that's not reflected in a neutral sentence like this. I'm fine with it.Ath271 (talk) 11:11, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Slimvirgin, do you want to weigh in on this discussion. Then, this article will touch on the basic 'labels' for Christian Science. But since, event he New Religious Movement page refers to Christian Science as a denomination, it seems most neutral to consent that there is a segment of society that refers to it as a denomination. The sentence above is well sourced and fits in naturally to the page70.56.18.125 (talk) 15:34, 6 March 2014 (UTC)Simplywater (talk) 15:47, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Since all the the edits I have made have been reversed, it would be nice to know objections here instead of entering into an editing war. Are there objections?Simplywater (talk) 17:02, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello Slimvigin, Again, my edit was undone to remove the word "denomination" https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Christian_Science&diff=598594858&oldid=598593318 and replace it with 'religious movement'

It would help if I understood your objection to such a term? Perhaps you can see how the choice of scholars you are choosing, colors this article Here's one example of how it could be done. Wiki article.
 * Alt27, Digilaigian and I all agree that it is appropriate, given the number of sound sources that call Christian Science a denomination, to include that word "occasionally".
 * Two periods of Protestant Christian revival known as the Second and Third Great Awakening (c. 1800–1830 and c. 1850–1900) nurtured a proliferation of cults and sects in the United States, including Christian Scientists, Jehovah's Witnesses, Latter Day Saints, Adventists, Spiritualists and Swedenborgians.[11]

Replaced with
 * "Revivalism and the work of charismatic leaders had also been an important source of new denominations contributing not only to the schims of the Great Revival period earlier in the century but also to the later emergence of such denominations as the Seventh Day Adventist, Christian Science, Salvation Army, Jehovah's Witnesses, and Pentecostal Holiness Church."

Slimvirgin, instead of reversing my edits that use the word "denomination" could you articulate your objection to that use?

RE - Jenkins. Just discovered the Jenkins actually refers to Christian Science as a respectable and recognized denomination. The quotes this pages uses overlooks his views so I added them. How interesting https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Christian_Science&diff=599635221&oldid=599481806Simplywater (talk) 22:27, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

Bryan Wilson, Sects and societies also refers to Christian Science as a denomination.Simplywater (talk) 09:53, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

Encyclopedias
I noticed some of Melton's encyclopedias were being used.

Just trying to get an understanding of encyclopedias. It says Encyclopeidic content must be verifiable. Is this usable

Encyclopedia of Protestantism, Routledge, Hans Hillerband editor,Simplywater (talk) 17:17, 7 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes, SW, it's as usable as any other encyclopedia published by an academic press. If you're unsure, google the press name and read to find out if it's an academic imprint. All encyclopedias are considered tertiary sources on WP and should be used only in overviews, not in detailed discussions.Ath271 (talk) 02:58, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

There is no original sin, Trinity, miracles, resurrection or atonement in Christian Science/ this section is totally false
Is this a quote? What is the reference? It needs to either have a reference or be removed.Simplywater (talk) 05:36, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

This whole section is absolutely false. (other than original sin) I have no idea who this author is but he knows nothing about Christian Science. I am surprised wikipedia is allowing a conservative Christians to interpret Christian Science without at least allowing Mary Baker Eddy's own theology speak for its self.

1. Virgin Birth http://journal.christianscience.com/issues/1987/12/105-12/do-you-believe-in-the-virgin-birth#footnote-1
 * For most of us the virgin birth isn't something we think about daily. But it must have been important to the Founder of Christian Science, because at the time of the building of the Original Edifice of The Mother Church, the question came up. Mrs. Eddy invited several of her students to contribute one thousand dollars to the building fund. The money was donated, but when Mrs. Eddy learned that one of the donors did not believe in the virgin birth of Jesus, she sent the thousand dollars back." See Robert Peel, Mary Baker Eddy: The Years of Authority (New York: Holt, Rinehart and Winston, 1977), p. 69↑


 * The Virgin-mother conceived this idea of God, and gave to her ideal the name of Jesus — that is, Joshua, or Saviour. The illumination of Mary's spiritual sense put to silence material law and its order of generation, and brought forth her child by the revelation of Truth, demonstrating God as the Father of men. S&H page 29

flesh. S&H pg 543
 * This prophecy has been fulfilled. The Son of the Virgin‐mother unfolded the remedy for Adam, or error; and the Spirit and

2. Miracles -
 * A miracle fulfils God's law, but does not violate that law - S&H page 117
 * The miracle introduces no disorder, but unfolds the primal order, establishing the Science of God's unchangeable law. Spiritual evolution alone is worthy of the exercise of divine power. S&H page 135
 * Man-made doctrines are waning. They have not waxed strong in times of trouble. Devoid of the Christ-power, how can they illustrate the doctrines of Christ or the miracles of grace? S&H pg 134

3. Resurrection wow!! this guy is so off on the resurrection it isn't even funny. Do you think we would believe in spiritual healing and not believe in the Virgin Birth and the Resurrection? These to points are the basis of our theology. Virgin Birth = Man is spiritual. Resurrection = There is no death. It doesn't even make sense.
 * After the resurrection, even the unbelieving Thomas was forced to acknowledge how complete was the great proof of Truth and Love. S&H page 24
 * It is the living Christ, the practical Truth, which makes Jesus "the resurrection and the life" to all who follow him in deed. page 31
 * The resurrection of the great demonstrator of God's power was the proof of his final triumph over body and matter, and gave full evidence of divine Science, — evidence so important to mortals.S&H page 42
 * It is the living Christ, the practical Truth, which makes Jesus "the resurrection and the life" to all who follow him in deed. S&H page 31
 * In his resurrection and ascension, Jesus showed that a mortal man is not the real essence of manhood, and that this unreal material mortality disappears in presence of the reality.
 * We acknowledge that the crucifixion of Jesus and his resurrection served to uplift faith to understand eternal Life, even the allness of Soul, Spirit, and the nothingness of matter.

So how should we fix this? I'm happy to state Mary Baker Eddy's point of view. Simplywater (talk) 06:21, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Hello Simplywater. This discussion has been had already on this Talk page and indeed throughout Wikipedia. Basically, the problem is as follows:


 * Secondary sources are preferred to primary sources on Wikipedia.
 * Many of the secondary sources on CS are strongly biased against it, inaccurate, or both.
 * Those secondary sources (eg Peel) that are sympathetic to CS and also reasonably accurate, are not accepted as reliable sources, because the author is a believer in Christian Science. (Don't ask me why this applies to CS and not to eg Darwinism, Lutheranism or Catholicism, but there you are...)

That's it in a nutshell.Be-nice:-) (talk) 09:27, 6 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Hi Be-nice, just noting here that, because you raised the issue of Jenkins before, I've removed that sentence ("There is no original sin, Trinity, miracles ..."). It wasn't really serving a purpose. The point was to stress that the terms are used differently, which the section does.


 * As for CS sources, the article does use them, so I'm not sure what you mean; we use Eddy and Gottschalk throughout, several Christian Scientists, Christian Science practitioners, and church spokespersons. The thing to avoid is over-relying on them, per WP:UNDUE, and an important point to remember about UNDUE is that issues must be judged in terms of the overall significance to the article topic. This article already violates UNDUE in favour of Christian Science in several places.


 * Also, we can't place tiny-minority views in Wikipedia's voice. Christian Science falls within the category of what Wikipedia calls fringe views, whether approached as a general metaphysical outlook (radical idealism, opposition to medicine) or as a religion. It's therefore preferable to use in-text attribution (Smith wrote) for primary/CS sources, or to rely on mainstream academic sources. But even with mainstream academic sources, in-text attribution is better for anything contentious, so really the sources are treated the same throughout. SlimVirgin (talk) 17:21, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Who made up those rules? I'm sure Wikipedia doesn't want their pages to be a sounding board for orthodox Christianity. That first sentence either needs to be a quote, or removed because it is the interpretation of the editor, not Jenkins wordsSimplywater (talk) 16:00, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Let me understand. Conservative Christians who tend to dislike Christian Science are able to interpret the theology, but those who know the theology can't. It's like saying "I'm sorry, only the Protestants get to comment on the Catholic page." The Christian Science page should be treated with the same respect. I don't mind that the views of Conservative Christians is voiced. I mind that it is considered the authority on Christian Science.Simplywater (talk) 16:09, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Virgin Birth

Braude, Ann, Women's Leadership in Marginal Religions: Explorations Outside main stream. University of Illinois Press (page 61)
 * The virgin birth was an important tenet in Christian Science because it showed that biological functions could be controlled by Spirit"

Resurrection

M-W Encyclopedia of World Religions. page 235
 * Christian Science holds the crucifixion and resurrection of Jesus Christ to be the central event in history, indispensable to the redemption of mankind.

Lewis, James, Encyclopedia of Cults, Sects, and New Religions, Prometheus (page 176)
 * Christian Scientists accept the Bible as their guide to eternal life. They believe in God's forgiveness of sin through the destruction of the belief in sin.  They believe that Jesus' atonement illustrated humanities unity with God, and that his crucifixion and resurrection demonstrated the power of God, Spirit, and the nothingness of matter.

Atonement

Gooden, Rosemary, (introduction)Faith, Cures and Answered prayers. Syracuse University Press. (page xxx) Is this book usable?
 * "In a letter Gordon wrote to Reverand Joseph Cook, a Congregationalist, and convenor of a weekly gathering, the Monday lectures. Gordon argued that Christian Science denied Atonement, a central tenet of Christianity and the personality of God.  Eddy responded to Gordon on these points as follows
 * 'Do I believe in the atonement of Christ? I do, and this becomes more to me since it includes man's redemption from sickness as well as from sin. I reverence and adore Christ as never before'
 * This view of Atonement was consonant with the view of Atonement in the divine healing movement espoused by Gordon."


 * Yes, Simplywater, Gooden is RS.Ath271 (talk) 22:51, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

As you can see from these sources, the statement that there is no Atonement, Resurrection, Virgin Birth is ABSOLUTELY MISLEADING. I'm sure that is not wiki's intent. This may be the opinion of a writer. But his is only 1 opinion. Since this is such a central issue, the reader deserves to know that others recognize how Christian Science views these important Christian tenets.Simplywater (talk) 17:36, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Thank you here as well, SlimVirgin, for the edit in response to Simplywater’s comments.

This sentence remains: “According to Philip Jenkins, Eddy so allegorized several Christian concepts ‘that they seemed to vanish.’” Actually, Jenkins is here summarizing what he calls “polemics” that argued this at the turn of the 19th century. At times he might seem to agree with them, but his multi-page section titled “Defending Orthodoxy” focuses on how “religious critics would long continue to denounce CS as a cult.” (p. 59) That is his thesis. All the material in this section is geared to support it.

Similarly, when he says (in footnote 20) that some aspects of CS unorthodoxy were “most pernicious,” this is not his personal view; he is summarizing orthodox critics who felt this way. Any relevant text should make this clear. Jenkins notes (p.59) that “For most ordinary citizens in recent years, the movement’s name has usually been associated with its sober and well-respected publication, the Christian Science Monitor.” This provides context and balance re: his view of CS overall.

The current paragraph also still lists only sources that say Eddy held “very different views” of Christian doctrine (presumably than orthodox Christians - the phrase needs an object), whereas several sources emphasize likenesses as well. Many exist, and it would make sense to include Gottschalk here. But what SW has provided is representative as a baseline. The para should reflect the diversity of sources.Ath271 (talk) 22:49, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

If possible, it would be nice to also use "Faith Cures, and Answers to Prayers" as it is the autobiography of the first African American woman to support herself through prayer based healing around Mary Baker Eddy's time. The editor is also African American clergy. Nice to have diversity. SV it doesn't seem fair to just dump everything on you. I'm happy to put a few sentences together although I don't have Gottchalk's books. But I can go to the library and find them. Simplywater (talk) 05:26, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Like Ath27 pointed out, it makes sense to remark in the Christian Science theology section how Scholars see CS theology consistent with Christianity. Rosemary Gooden argues that Eddy's concept of atonement, that it included salvation from sin and sickness, the same as the theology of the protestant faith cure movement. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simplywater (talk • contribs) 21:47, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

More on Eddy's view of the Atonement


 * "Christian Science has a doctrine of the atonement promising redemption from both sickness and sin" Here Mrs. Eddy was perhaps farthest from other metaphysical healing groups, which have borrowed from her, and closest to traditional Christianity"
 * '''Judah, Stillson, The History and Philosophy of the Metaphysical Movements in America, Westminster Press, page 281-282

'''
 * "In a letter Gordon wrote to Reverand Joseph Cook, a Congregationalist, and convenor of a weekly gathering, the Monday lectures. Gordon argued that Christian Science denied Atonement, a central tenet of Christianity and the personality of God.  Eddy responded to Gordon on these points as follows
 * 'Do I believe in the atonement of Christ? I do, and this becomes more to me since it includes man's redemption from sickness as well as from sin. I reverence and adore Christ as never before'
 * This view of Atonement was consonant with the view of Atonement in the divine healing movement espoused by Gordon."
 * Gooden, Rosemary, Faith Cures and Answered Prayers, Syracuse University Press pages xxxviii


 * In reading Science and Health, the textbook of Christian Science, one is immediatly struck by the centrality of the Christ in Eddy's teachings. As the son of God, whose incarnation as Jesus of Nazareth indicated the oneness of God and humanity, Christ serves as the divine principle that through the atonement has made reconsiliation with God possible.  Affirming belief in both the crucifixion of Jesus and his resurrection as proofs of God's love, truth, and goodness"
 * Umansky, Ellen, From Christian Science to Jewish Science, Oxford University Press, (page 18 )http://books.google.com/books?id=R92T55BQzy8C&pg=PA18&dq=Mary+Baker+Eddy+atonement&hl=en&sa=X&ei=u_8hU63TMpCAogTCsoHACw&ved=0CFAQ6AEwBDgU#v=onepage&q=Mary%20Baker%20Eddy%20atonement&f=false

I propose to have two or three sentences, by RS scholars that show how Eddy thought concepts like Atonement, Resurrection, Crucifixion, Virgin Birth were inaligment with Christianity. This is in response to authors who felt these concepts didn't exist in her theologySimplywater (talk) 19:14, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Summary-style
It's getting difficult to follow the various posts here, but I saw some mention of expanding the theology section. I just want to say again that having a separate article, Christian Science theology (preferably based on academic sources), would be a really good idea if someone were willing to write it.

This article, Christian Science, is the parent article and not everything can be added here, especially not details that a general reader would be less likely to find interesting. Wikipedia develops summary-style: a parent article summarizes a series of daughter articles, which in turn might summarize others. So Christian Science would host a summary-style section on the theology that summarizes the daughter article Christian Science theology (and we could add a "further information/see also" link at the top of the theology section to draw attention to the daughter article), and in turn Christian Science theology might summarize an article on Christian Science views of God.

This method allows parent articles to focus on a general reader's understanding of a topic, without every article becoming too long and going off on tangents. SlimVirgin (talk) 17:35, 7 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Curious. The view of the article (or collection of articles) about Christian Science as stated by SlimVirgin from my point of view turns the subject on its head.  I would have thought (silly me) that someone would turn to an encyclopedia entry on Christian Science to find out about Christian Science and its theology.   While certainly Christian Science's contentious relationship to society, government and medicine is important, it isn't the primary feature of the "belief system."  The key to this seems to be that, as SlimVirgin has stated elsehwere,  Wikipedia approaches Christian Science primarily as a fringe view first and secondarily (if at all) as a religion.  Thus it has been impossible to describe Christian Science as a religion, even in the lead, though that is the structural role it plays in society.


 * The crux (no pun intended) of this seems to be validation or legitimacy. If Christian Science is granted any status beyond cult or fringe, some interpret this as a validation or legitimization of Christian Science by Wikipedia.  This does not make sense to me.  If, for example, I look up the entry on Lysenkoism (deliberate choice of topic) I expect to find, and do find, a more-or-less accurate and complete description of what it is, its history and its following followed by commentary.  I don't interpret the accurate description as in any way validating a belief in Lysenkoism.  It is, simply, expository description.


 * Along those lines, what I would expect to find here is the primary article describing Christian Science with auxiliary articles describing "Christian Science and the Law" or "Christian Science and Medicine" or "Christian Science and the Welfare of Children" which are important and interesting topics but which involve the interaction of Christian Science with other social institutions and not Christian Science as itself.
 * --Digitalican (talk) 21:05, 7 March 2014 (UTC)


 * I agree with many of your observations, Digitalican. I would expect to see simple expository description here, too. Accurately describing a belief system is not endorsing the belief system.


 * The academic approach in ethnography and anthropology, often adopted in religious studies, is to separate description, analysis, and interpretation. Descriptions outline the belief system in a manner adherents basically recognize (this is the test of accuracy). Analysis works to understand the description in scholarly terms. Interpretation states the scholar’s views, which adherents do not need to understand or agree with.


 * Recall that a year ago the article didn’t recognize Christian Science as a religion at all. What it shows today is progress. More progress is needed to fully separate description, analysis and interpretation. This would, actually, be a very helpful template for each of the section's articles to adopt.Ath271 (talk) 20:44, 11 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Sorry, meant each of the article's sections. And each new article stemming from existing sections.Ath271 (talk) 02:39, 12 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm not thinking of expanding it. Just allowing the full picture to be seen. If we are going to say how Christian Science is not "christian", we should let the reader know, in just a sentences, that other scholars do see it as Christian. Because many scholars do view it as Christian. I think it could work in just a sentence or two. Nothing big. Simplywater (talk) 18:13, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Digitalican, I understand that this article is viewing Christian Science as a sect/cult. But I trust this system, and I will continue to provide the evidence that although there are those that believe that, there is another part of society that views Christian Science as 1. Christian 2. a denomination Digitalican, You just have to trust. Wiki wants different view points to be presented. Simplywater (talk) 03:01, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

In regard to SlimVirgin's earlier suggestion, I could do a reasonably accurate article, or a stub at least, on CS Theology, ie it should survive criticism in terms of its accuracy from anyone familiar with Christian Science, whether an adherent or not. However it would be heavily reliant on the primary sources, in particular Science and Health (as well as on a few CS secondary sources like Peel and Corey). If I make a start then perhaps people who have the time to access (non-CS secondary sources) could fill it in from them. However I'm not going to start unless there's no objection from the regular contributors to the Talk page, though I realise we can't speak for others - that's fair enough in terms of how Wikipedia works. So if anyone feels that would be problematic, please let me know!Be-nice:-) (talk) 22:05, 13 March 2014 (UTC)


 * I think a piece on Christian Science Theology as suggested by SlimVirgin and outlined by Ath271 would be useful, even as a separate page. My fear is that the current Wikipedia metrics for neutrality in WP:NPOV and WP:IRS along with WP:UNDUE tend to encourage argumentation over description could well turn it into yet another epistemological battlefield, particularly when there is a heavy reliance (for descriptive purposes) on interpretation of a primary source.  Too, different CS teachers and classes occasionally have slightly different interpretations of CS theological points that could result in their own level of hair splitting.


 * Those reservations noted, go ahead! --Digitalican (talk) 12:10, 14 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Hi Be-nice, it would be great if you could write a separate article on that. It would have to be compliant with Neutrality, Verifiability and No original research. You can use primary sources so long as you only use them descriptively (Eddy wrote that X). The policy on primary/secondary sources (part of No original research), says:


 * "Any interpretation of primary source material requires a reliable secondary source for that interpretation. A primary source may only be used on Wikipedia to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the primary source but without further, specialized knowledge. For example, an article about a novel may cite passages to describe the plot, but any interpretation needs a secondary source. Do not analyze, synthesize, interpret, or evaluate material found in a primary source yourself; instead, refer to reliable secondary sources that do so. Do not base an entire article on primary sources, and be cautious about basing large passages on them. Do not add unsourced material from your personal experience, because that would make Wikipedia a primary source of that material."


 * It would also have to include secondary-source material that you might not agree with, per NPOV. Perhaps you could start the article in your user space or in the new draft space, i.e. Draft:Christian Science theology. You could work on it slowly there before moving it into the encyclopaedia. SlimVirgin (talk) 15:14, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

OK, I'll do that if I get some time.Be-nice:-) (talk) 19:41, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

Goodens' thoughts on the link between mind cure movement and Protestant spiritual healing.
Hello Folks,

While I have read snipets here and there about the relationship between 'mind cure' and protestant healing starting in the mid 1800's, Gooden connects the dots in the most eloquent way. It's important to see that these two movements, mind cure and faith cure grew up together, faith cure starting first. Christian Science theology is born of both movements and Gooden sees that connection.

While Cunningham argued that 'mind cure' was a phenomenon separate from the Christian tradition, Rosemary Gooden argues that mind cure stemmed from the beliefs of nineteenth century evangelical Protestantism and its belief in the spiritual power of healing. Specifically, Gooden views Christian Science as providing 'historical evidence' of the link between 'mind cure' and Christian theology. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simplywater (talk • contribs) 19:14, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

So, Slimvirgin, can you discuss why you removed Gooden's views on this subject? The talk page is the place to discuss things instead of just removing them.Simplywater (talk) 19:21, 8 March 2014 (UTC)

Where you removed my edits again without any discussion. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Christian_Science&diff=next&oldid=598728839 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simplywater (talk • contribs) 19:46, 8 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Simplywater, are you by any chance copy-pasting material from elsewhere into the article? The reason I ask is that your edit and post above are not your usual writing. The first paragraph ("Hello Folks") is someone's opinion of Gooden, and the second paragraph is your edit to the article. It reads as though it was lifted from someone else's conversation.


 * The edit you made ("While Cunningham argued ...") addressed a position that isn't in the article. We don't mention Cunningham's view of the mind-cure/faith-cure distinction. We don't mention Cunningham at all in the text. Cunningham 1967 is a source for unrelated points, but the paper Gooden addresses is Cunningham 1973, which we don't use. So the whole thing has the appearance of having been plopped in from elsewhere. SlimVirgin (talk) 16:13, 9 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Not sure what you mean about copying and pasting from elsewhere. Sometimes I think things through on my sandbox to force myself to only write what is important. Isn't that what I was asked to do?  Is that a problem?

However,
 * Gooden's arguement speaks for themself.

'''Faith cure and mind cure thus had in common the beiefs of nineteenth century evagelical Protestantism and a strong belief in the spiritual power of healing., page xli

Simplywater (talk) 02:43, 10 March 2014 (UTC)

Love the way this article is coming together!! SlimVirgin, you have done so much work. Not sure what is the best way to use Gooden's views, but I think it is important to include them. The article is heavy with the views of white males. The diversity would only add to it.Simplywater (talk) 03:43, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Don't think Gooden is worth using much, if at all. She seems to have spent some years as a seminary lecturer which hardly qualifies her opinions as authoritative for heavy use here. Alexbrn talk 05:26, 10 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes, Gooden did teach at a seminary for several years. Charles Braden was an ordained Methodist minister. Philip Jenkins and Rodney Stark are both at a Baptist university with an orthodox Christian mission statement; faculty members must provide a statement of how their faith and research support one another. In the field of religious studies, some sort of religious affiliation on the part of a scholar is not uncommon.


 * Rather than excluding or including any of these authors based on degrees of perceived secularity or religiosity, WP provides for including any source that meets RS criteria. Gooden, Jenkins, and Stark are equally RS.


 * SW, I'm thinking back to the email you posted from Ecumenical Trends, giving permission to share an article with "your group." That would explain the "Hello Folks" post. Copying material to the article from a Christian Science website or discussion group (or anywhere else) would violate Plagiarism and Copyright violations. SlimVirgin (talk) 15:27, 10 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Let's seek clarity here. SW wrote on the WP Talk page, addressing the Talk page community, “Since the Ecumenical Trends article is only available in print, I have asked and been given permission to share it with you all.” The “group” her letter of permission refers to is "you all," the Wikipedia Talk page group. She carefully attributed both the letter and the article.


 * In the snippet above, it would appear that SW has simply copied and pasted her own edit to the Talk page in order to generate discussion about it. That seems to be the rationale she provides. The spelling, grammar, and syntax all appear to match her usual contributions. SV, if you suspect that some portions do not, please recall that except in cases where hard evidence of plagiarism exists, it’s always helpful to be temperate and careful in our words and to give one another the benefit of the doubt.Ath271 (talk) 21:08, 11 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Plagiarism - I didn't plagiarize from some other site.  I didn't need to. Gooden is perfectly clear and articulate in her argument.  I just happened to have gotten her book from the library. And with regard to the Ecumenical Trends article, I asked the Catholic Organization that prints it if I could share it with you all and they said I could.  Just to be safe, I only shared parts of the article, not the whole thing because SV had told me I could share whole articles.Simplywater (talk) 22:59, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

Re: the content of SW’s post, I agree with SV that it is perhaps not placed most judiciously, nor is the point singularly clear. However, it centers on this quote:

“Christian Science teaching and Eddy's religious experience show the commonality of Christian theology, the centrality of the person of Christ, and a belief in spiritual power to heal in both faith cure and mind cure.” (Gooden pg xxxvi)

This is RS showing a scholar with differing views from those of several others in the article. Gooden’s book is not heavily cited in the literature but is, if nothing else, relevant here and interesting. Let’s remain open to it and be guided by intellectual curiosity about evidence that doesn’t match what we know so far.

I agree with SW that Gooden’s work should be cited somewhere—not because of any religious or racial status of the author, but because her work shows scholarly disagreement re: how CS is to be interpreted.Ath271 (talk) 21:08, 11 March 2014 (UTC)

I find Gooden's arguement interesting and worth including in this article because it shows an important link that is hinted at in this article. Under Metaphyscial/New Thought theology, the paragraph, and we have seen this same idea repeated several different ways, starts out by saying that many of the new movements and denominations developed out of the Protestant revival. Gooden is simply showing that the 'mind cure' movement is not an isolated event that happened in a vacuum. It is a Christian healing movement. And Christian Science specifially shows the commonality of Christian theology. SV how do you feel we could best include this interesting argument?Simplywater (talk) 18:17, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Ecumenical workshops
There has been a lot of activity recently aimed at having the article minimize the differences between Christian Science and mainstream Christianity, to the point of making the talk page hard to use at times. It's reasonable to suppose this might be connected to ecumenical workshops started in January by the Christian Science church's Committee on Publication. Entitled "Yes, we’re Christian. No, we’re not a cult!", the workshops are being offered to CS churches across the United States, and teach members how to engage in outreach to change the perception Christians may have that CS isn't Christian.  pdf flyer.

At the end of January Simplywater arrived after a long break and since then has posted dozens of times, including as several IPs, asking that we call CS a Christian denomination, remove the word cult, and remove the differences between CS and Christian theology.​ At the beginning of February Bridge bendek and Ath271 said that they were here on behalf of the church. Ath has mostly supported Simplywater in her efforts.

The announcement of the outreach program and the increased activity here could be coincidence, but the problem we have now is twofold. First, most Wikipedians are volunteers and don't have time to respond to a high volume of (often long) posts. Second, because I've tried to accommodate requests, the article is being slowly slanted in favour of CS in violation of the neutrality policy.

Several things have to be taken into account when writing an article. Sources have to meet the minimum "reliablity" threshold. But they should also be appropriate for the point in question; they should not express tiny-minority positions; they should for the most part be independent secondary sources; and the overall content of the article has to comply with due weight. Googling for sources sympathetic to CS in an effort to change the article's direction ignores that for every source that says X, there might be half a dozen that say not-X.

With every respect to those involved, I think we have to be allowed to return to normal programming. If the church feels it needs representation on the talk page, I could perhaps suggest a different approach to Bridge bendek. SlimVirgin (talk) 00:07, 15 March 2014 (UTC)


 * I take the point SV. I've no problem with fair-minded criticism of CS as long as it's accurate about the substance of the teachings. And for the record, I'm skeptical both of ecumenism and of the CS church's attempts to reconcile Christian Science with mainstream Christian thought. In fact, there's a case to be made that it is in fact the latter that is out of step with Biblical Christianity. (For example the notion of a soul in the body, or of hell as a state of eternal torture for sinners/unbelievers, both seem to be quite distinct from the original Jewish concepts.) At a guess, this may be due to the influence of certain Greek ideas that crept into Christian thought in the centuries after Christ. Also particularly notable is the historical supplanting of the influence of Plato within Christian theology by that of Aristotle - CS theology appears much closer to the ideas of the former than the latter. But this is getting into OR, so I'd better stop.Be-nice:-) (talk) 01:10, 15 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Slim Virgin, I have no desire to minimize the differences between orthodox Christianity and Christian Science. Mary Baker Eddy was not an orthodox Christian. But as in Eddy's time, not all Christian Theologians agree.  And it is worth allowing their voice to be heard. Let's not be afraid of the differences.    It is fair to state Eddy's views on basic Christian Concepts quickly and honestly, from RS on atonement, resurrection, virgin birth, and trinity, the Christ AND THEN, state how others disagree with her. For example
 * For Eddy, Jesus, was the son of a virgin and while not God, he was the way to salvation. He 'was the mediator between Spirit and the flesh, between Truth and error."  Christian Scientists believe that the crucifixion was effications because of the 'affection and goodness it demonstrated for mankind.' "According to Mrs. Eddy, Jesus' resurrection and ascension showed that a mortal man is not the real essence of manhood and that this unreal mortality disappears in presence of 'reality'.  They are Trinitarian in an unorthodox way, and their doctrine of the Atonement, or one's unity with God, promises redemption from both sickness and sin.  Judah, The History and Philosophy of the Metaphysical Movements in America, Westminster Press Pages 257-273.


 * Then you can go at it and tell how the orthodox views it as unchristian. We are not minimizing the differences. We are stating the theology honestly to let the reader decide.Simplywater (talk) 06:05, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Agree with – a selective insistence on lesser sources is endangering this page's neutrality. A major strand of commentary in RS makes the distinction between the belief system of CS and than of mainstream Christianity, and the categorization of CS as a "cult" had been made to the extent it is worth recording. We need to make sure both these things are relayed. Alexbrn talk 06:12, 15 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Due Weight - I'm happy to go through and count the lines and lines of text in the footnotes against Christian Science.  Does the space allotted to text in footnotes count as 'due weight'?Simplywater (talk) 06:16, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Weight is not determined by balancing views "for" or "against" CS: that is an inherently POV-inflected way of seeing it. We apportion content in a way which mirrors how it is apportioned in the most reliable, independent sources. Alexbrn talk 06:20, 15 March 2014 (UTC)


 * That makes sense. It was SV who said the article is being slanted in 'favor' of Christian Science.  Is that a POV-inflected statement?  There is only 'in favor' or 'against'.  Can you clarify?Simplywater (talk) 06:46, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
 * If editors are failing to apportion weight properly and instead picking content that advances a favoured position, then the result will be to slant the article. That would be strongly the case if the many changes advocated by CS spinners recently had been enacted, and there is a risk it may have happened by accident: the presence of WP:COI-tainted editors in a consensus process has a tendency to compromise it. It might worth revisiting and maybe unwinding some recent changes. Alexbrn talk 07:20, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

Could we avoid that kind of rhetoric please (ie "spinners")? If a passage is (a) sourced, (b) an accurate reflection of the source, (c) uses good (unbiased and accurate) sources, (d) is accurate in terms of reflecting the subject-matter and (e) the article reflects the academic consensus, I don't see a case for "unwinding" it. This is common sense, without throwing in a lot of wiki-acronymsBe-nice:-) (talk) 11:02, 15 March 2014 (UTC)


 * If you mean spinners, do you a voice different than conservative orthodox writers? Much of this article is sourced by conservative Christian writers.  It seems appropriate to look for others voices in the Christian Science theology section.
 * SV said Gottschalk, whose books are RS, who thee most quoted scholar on Christian Science "can not be quoted in the Christian Science theology section" because he is a Christian Scientist.
 * Could you imagine saying that the Catholics cannot be quoted on their own theology because they will add a 'spin'?
 * Charles Braden was an ordained Methodist minister.
 * Philip Jenkins and Rodney Stark, and Gordon Melton are at a Southern Baptist university with an orthodox Christian mission statement; faculty members must provide a statement of how their faith and research support one another.


 * In the field of religious studies, some sort of religious affiliation on the part of a scholar is not uncommon.


 * SV and Alexbrn, allowing a Christian Science Scholar speak about what Christian Science is, is not adding a 'spin'.   It is being respectful toward the religion.  Christian Science should be allowed the same respect as any other religion.  Thousands and thousands of respectable people study this religion.  They live in communities, their children go to school.  Their friends go to Facebook.  I am a volunteer also.
 * Every one of the above writers are adding a spin when they discuss Christian Science. They are viewing Christian Science through the lens of orthodox Christianity.  Slimvirgin, you are doing a wonderful job.
 * It's fair that Christian Science views on these Christian concepts like trinity, atonement, resurrection, Christ be presented in a few sentences by someone who can honestly approximate Eddy's ideas. Without an 'orthodox spin' Simplywater (talk) 12:51, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
 * CS gets no more respect that any other belief system: WP does not have special policies for religions. We simply use the highest quality sources and reflect what they have to say about the topic. That CS adherents have personal quibbles with what they say are the biases of certain authors cannot be taken into account: if the work of those authors has been validated by being published through reputable channels, and accepted in mainstream scholarship, then those are what WP shall duly relay. Alexbrn talk 13:01, 15 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Again, I notice your use of denigratory rhetoric ("personal quibbles"), in this case as if the views of CS adherents were ipso facto of no importance. And is your use of "shall" a forecast, a recommendation or a command, or all three at once?Be-nice:-) (talk) 13:20, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
 * The quibbles are of no import so far as source selection goes: established high-quality secondary sources can't be dismissed purely on the basis of personal doubts about the author, by CS adherents ... or anybody. "Shall" indicates a mandatory requirement. Alexbrn talk 13:31, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

Break 1
I'd like to take this back to the point of the discussion, namely the church's outreach activities and its involvement in this article. But first I have to correct one of Simplywater's mistakes, that I said Gottschalk could not be used as a source. That is false. As the article shows, I've used him as a source myself several times. (This is one of numerous mistakes in SW's posts.)

The point is that the church is a key primary source for this article. It can't also be involved in writing it, and in directing and taking over discussions on the talk page. Wikipedia is an independent voice, and its readers expect to find an article that has been written and fashioned by people other than the subject of the article. They can go to christianscience.com for the church's perspective. When they come to en.wikipedia.org, they expect to find something free of church influence as far as possible, and we want to be allowed to deliver that.

That doesn't mean the church's views are excluded, but it has to be kept at arm's length, and not allowed to become one of the authors or backseat drivers. (I'm pinging the church's media rep, .) SlimVirgin (talk) 15:24, 15 March 2014 (UTC)


 * SV, I am in awe of the careful work you've put into this article, but there is an error which is common to both Christian Scientists and non-Christian Scientists, and that is that the Christian Science church is the "voice" of Christian Science. It's not - the books of Mary Baker Eddy are. Nor is the CS church a key primary source for the article, except insofar as it is the main publisher of Eddy's published writings (the latter are now in the public domain in any case). Personally, I too would object if the church were "directing and taking over" discussions, but I don't think they have been, to date anyway. Having said that, as a Christian Scientist (and church member) I disagree with the current preoccupation of the CS church with trying to make CS palatable to mainstream Christian tastes. Imo they would be far better off clarifying and emphasising what CS distinctively teaches rather than trying to make it acceptable to religious orthodoxy; and indeed highlighting, if necessary, where CS differs from the millennial accretions of conventional theology.Be-nice:-) (talk) 21:58, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

. there is a difference between "church influence" and stating the theology of Christian Science correctly. This is an encyclopedia. People come here for information. There are a 'set of beliefs and practices called 'Christian Science'. I expect that Wikipedia wants to present that and all the arguments that go with it. They can go to a great variety of 'conservative' websites and get that anit-christian science view also. Wiki has the pleasure of presenting the variety of sides. Which is beautiful. It is the reason I trust it. I feel I'm going to get the complete story here. honest good and honest not so good. Simplywater (talk) 20:39, 16 March 2014 (UTC)

SV, it doesn't serve the interests of Wikipedia to try and 'out' others as if we lived in the middle ages. This isn't Survivor. Let's not try and turn people against each other.Simplywater (talk) 21:02, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
 * with regard to using Gottschalk in the Christian Science theology section you said

"Gottschalk was a Christian Scientist; we can't place anything he has authored or co-authored in WP's voice (unless it's entirely uncontentious, but then better to find a different source)"Simplywater (talk) 21:27, 16 March 2014 (UTC)

Break 2

 * SV first,
 * I have to say that I also appreciate very very much the thought you have put into this article. It has come so far from when I first saw it a few months ago and was stunned by what it said.
 * I feel you are confusing "the church's views" with stating Christian Science theology accurately. I feel very comfortable with objections from orthodox Christian thinkers, as long as the theology is stated correctly with regard to ATONEMENT, CRUCIFIXION, VIRGIN BIRTH, RESURRECTION
 * This article is about 'the beliefs and practices' of Christian Science as the first sentence of the article defines it. We can spend an extra paragraph on the beliefs since 90% of the article is about the denomination.
 * A look at the Encyclopedia Britannia is very helpful for viewing a 'neutral view' of Christian Science. The article was co-written by Melton and Gottschalk.  The theology is stated correctly, yet the objections are present.  (I suggested this before but you said and I quote

"Gottschalk was a Christian Scientist; we can't place anything he has authored or co-authored in WP's voice (unless it's entirely uncontentious, but then better to find a different source)"
 * I have found several other independent RS that talk about Christian Science theology without the critical orthodox lens.

'''Braude, Ann, Women's Leadership in Marginal Religions: Explorations Outside main stream. University of Illinois Press (page 61)'''
 * The virgin birth was an important tenet in Christian Science because it showed that biological functions could be controlled by Spirit"

Lewis, James, Encyclopedia of Cults, Sects, and New Religions, Prometheus (page 176)
 * Christian Scientists accept the Bible as their guide to eternal life. They believe in God's forgiveness of sin through the destruction of the belief in sin.  They believe that Jesus' atonement illustrated humanities unity with God, and that his crucifixion and resurrection demonstrated the power of God, Spirit, and the nothingness of matter.

'''Gooden, Rosemary, (introduction)Faith, Cures and Answered prayers. Syracuse University Press. (page xxx)'''
 * "In a letter Gordon wrote to Reverand Joseph Cook, a Congregationalist, and convenor of a weekly gathering, the Monday lectures. Gordon argued that Christian Science denied Atonement, a central tenet of Christianity and the personality of God.  Eddy responded to Gordon on these points as follows
 * 'Do I believe in the atonement of Christ? I do, and this becomes more to me since it includes man's redemption from sickness as well as from sin. I reverence and adore Christ as never before'

Rosemary Gooden argues that Eddy's concept of atonement, that it included salvation from sin and sickness, the same as the theology of the protestant faith cure movement.
 * "Christian Science has a doctrine of the atonement promising redemption from both sickness and sin" Here Mrs. Eddy was perhaps farthest from other metaphysical healing groups, which have borrowed from her, and closest to traditional Christianity"
 * '''Judah, Stillson, The History and Philosophy of the Metaphysical Movements in America, Westminster Press, page 281-282

'''
 * In reading Science and Health, the textbook of Christian Science, one is immediatly struck by the centrality of the Christ in Eddy's teachings. As the son of God, whose incarnation as Jesus of Nazareth indicated the oneness of God and humanity, Christ serves as the divine principle that through the atonement has made reconsiliation with God possible.  Affirming belief in both the crucifixion of Jesus and his resurrection as proofs of God's love, truth, and goodness"
 * Umansky, Ellen, From Christian Science to Jewish Science, Oxford University Press, (page 18 )http://books.google.com/books?id=R92T55BQzy8C&pg=PA18&dq=Mary+Baker+Eddy+atonement&hl=en&sa=X&ei=u_8hU63TMpCAogTCsoHACw&ved=0CFAQ6AEwBDgU#v=onepage&q=Mary%20Baker%20Eddy%20atonement&f=falseSimplywater (talk) 20:15, 16 March 2014 (UTC)


 * SW, do you mind if I split this post of yours off from the discussion above? I would like the thread to focus on the church's involvement, rather than any specific issues or arguments. SlimVirgin (talk) 20:20, 16 March 2014 (UTC)

I can't really speak about the churches involment. Can you give me a specific example of what you mean?Simplywater (talk) 20:24, 16 March 2014 (UTC)


 * I've added another sub-section header. I'd like to keep the thread above (Break 1) focused on the church's involvement in this article and talk page. SlimVirgin (talk) 20:31, 16 March 2014 (UTC)

misquoting Ann Taves Christ/Truth/God
Why was my edit reversed. The text you give totally misquotes her. This is her text.

The t in truth needs to be capitalized. This is just sound writing SV. It has nothing to do with pro or con Christian Science. It's just being honest in our writing.

page 214

"Thus, theologically, Quimby made a carful distinction between Jesus, the natural man with 'a natural body of flesh and blood' and Christ, or God. The distinction between jesus and Christ was crucial throughout.  Thus, while the body of Jesus was crucified, it was Christ or Truth who was resurrected."

You don't need to include the quote, but truth needs to be capitalized to Truth, God to be consistent with her analysis of Quimby.Simplywater (talk) 00:57, 17 March 2014 (UTC)


 * I've capitalized Truth per the source (Wilson 1961). SlimVirgin (talk) 01:25, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

Who uses the word "simply"? Taves doesn't. Does Wilson?Simplywater (talk) 01:28, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

The Qumby manuscripts show the same thing. Christ isn't "simply a synonmn for Truth". Christ is Truth, God. http://books.google.com/books?id=TcfD0jXRDbcC&pg=PA433&dq=quimby+eddy&hl=en&sa=X&ei=jlAmU97sB8LaoAT-q4GoAw&ved=0CC8Q6AEwAQ#v=onepage&q=Truth%20Christ&f=falseSimplywater (talk) 01:36, 17 March 2014 (UTC)Simplywater (talk) 22:16, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

The word "simply" is not in the Wilson text or the Taves text. SV that is your perception. That is not what is written. It needs to come out.Simplywater (talk) 09:44, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

Wilson page 121 - "Jesus is distinguished from Christ, the former name is given to the Galilean prophet, while Christ is a synonym for Truth which Jesus manifested and which can dwell in the consciousness of all men.Simplywater (talk) 09:49, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

RE "Like Quimby, she distinguished between Jesus the man and the concept of Christ; Christ was simply a synonym for Truth."[25]

Looking at both Taves and Wilson, neither one states a comparison between Eddy and Quimby. Let's keep with good scholarship.
 * Taves is talking about Quimby.  She does say "Eddy retained Quimby's distinctions between error and science, belief and truth"
 * Wilson is taling about Eddy.
 * This is a assumption SV that is being made.
 * I am not an expert on Quimby, and it would take a scholar to say that the distinctions Eddy and Quimby made were similar especially since Eddy's idea of Jesus as the son of a virgin, the son of God, and the wayshower for humanity are GREATLY different than Quimby's view of Jesus.Simplywater (talk) 22:16, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

Christian Science Prayer.
I would be most greatful if the first sentence of this section could start with something positive, as that is more inline with Christian Science. Always start with the good.

Here are a list of quotes from Eddy about how to start praying from S&H.


 * The prayer that reforms the sinner and heals the sick is an absolute faith that all things are possible to God, a spiritual understanding of him, an unselfed love.
 * Always begin your treatment by allaying the fear of the patient. The great fact that God lovingly

governs all, never punishing aught but sin, is your standpoint, from which to advance and destroy the human fear of sickness.
 * Christian scientific practice begins with Christ's keynote of harmony, "Be not afraid!" Said Job: "The thing which I greatly feared is come upon me."
 * The fundamental propositions of divine metaphysics

are summarized in the four following, to me, self-evident propositions. Even if reversed, these propositions will be found to agree in statement and proof, showing mathematically their exact relation to Truth. De Quincey says mathematics has not a foot to stand upon which is not purely metaphysical. 1. God is All-in-all. 2. God is good. Good is Mind. 3. God, Spirit, being all, nothing is matter. 4. Life, God, omnipotent good, deny death, evil, sin, disease. — Disease, sin, evil, death, deny good, omnipo‐ tent God,
 * If the Scientist reaches his patient through divine Love, the healing work will be accomplished at on visit, and the disease will vanish into its native nothingness like dew before the morning sunshine.Simplywater (talk) 23:05, 17 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Simplywater, this is almost a poster example of why we must be careful in using primary sources. Although the language is meaningful to you, other Christian Scientists, and those learned in Christian Science -- it is absolute gobbeltygook to someone not versed in the language and concepts who comes to this page to learn about Christian Science.  It is the same problem with the Tenets of Christian Science:  Although they are factually the core of Christian Science belief they are incomprehensible to newbies without secondary source interpretation.  In expository writing it is vitally important to keep the nature of your target audience in mind (a lesson for us all, I think.)  When describing Christian Science prayer (which isn't prayer at all in the traditional notion of the term) it is important to be accurate about what it is in a way that everyone can understand. --Digitalican (talk) 14:08, 18 March 2014 (UTC)
 * The page is already using only primary sources. I didn't write it.  Have you taken a look Digitalican?  I agree.Simplywater (talk) 20:00, 18 March 2014 (UTC)
 * I have. The primary sources are used carefully.  Like much of the article, however, the section is descriptively uninformative as to what mental work (jargon alert) actually is.  I am not sure that quoting directly from S&H in the way that you ask will help the situation at all.  --Digitalican (talk) 21:23, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

continuing the denomination discussion
Not sure why this was archived.

Slim Virgin, we need to discuss why this article will not use the word 'denomination. Why aren't you participating in this discussion?

'''"The Christian Science Church is considered a religious denomination with an organization in the United States." '''http://www.state.gov/documents/organization/87563 .pdf RS sources that refer to Christian Science as a denomination.

"Between 1900 and 1925 Christian Science was one of the fastest growing denominations in the United States"
 * Vorton, James C, Nature Cures, The History of American Medicine in America, Oxford University Press (page 123)http://books.google.com/booksid=N21eyOQlE0kC&pg=PA123&dq=women+founded+denomination+eddy&hl=en&sa=X&ei=ymEPU6uzDeHQ0wHwkoDoBQ&ved=0CFYQ6AEwCDgK#v=onepage&q=christian%20science&f=false

".... women were preaching and some like the Pentecostal Aimme Semple Mc Phersm, the Shaker Ann Lee, The Seventh Day Adventist Ellen Gould White, and the Christian Scientist Mary Baker Eddy, founded their own denominations."


 * Oppenheimer, Mark; Knocking on Heaven's Door: American Religion in the Age of Counterculture, Yale Press (page 134) ://books.google.com/books?id=7j6wzn4Aoz8C&pg=PA134&dq=denomination+founded+by+women+eddy&hl=en&sa=X&ei=lVwPU97vMO-50AGF4YGoBQ&ved=0CDQQ6AEwAjgK#v=onepage&q=denomination%20founded%20by%20women%20eddy&f=false

"Revivalism and the work of charismatic leaders had also been an important source of new denominations contributing not only to the schims of the Great Revival period earlier in the century but also to the later emergence of such denominations as the Seventh Day Adventist, Christian Science, Salvation Army, Jehovah's Witnesses, and Pentecostal Holiness Church."
 * Wuthhow, Robert; The Restructuring of American Religion, Princeton University Press pg 21

"In most books on cults published from the turn of the century inot the 1960's the largest share of space is devoted to movements that generally viewed themselves as Christianity and eventually would be recognized as respectable denominations: Christian Science and New Thought groups, the Latter Day Saints, apocalyptic sects like the Jehovah's Witnesses and Pentecostal Adventists."
 * Jenkins, Philip; Mystics and Messiahs, Cults and New Religions in American History, Oxford Univerisity Press. page 46

"Christian Science and Seventh Day Adventism were two denominations that institutionalized their approaches to healing and the body in religious context"
 * Harvey, Paul; Themes in Religion and American Culture; The University of North Carolina Press. p. 86

'''::: Wilson, Bryan; Sects and Societies, Univerisity of California Press, pages 205, 149, 150
 * 1) '''"It is by no means easy to produce direct evidence of the age structure of the Christian Science denomination in this country"
 * 2) '''"Christian Science is one of the few denominations in the United States which had, even by 1926 spread.
 * 3) " Christian Scientists had risen by 300 per cent in value, a figure approximated by only one other denomination - the Disciples of Christ."

"In 1875 Mary Baker Eddy (1821-1910) introduced a new variety of Protestantism with a radical rendition of the modernist position: not only can Christianity accommodate science, it is science" :::Hillerbrand, Hans, The Encyclopedia of Protestantism,p 410

"Christian Science, religious denomination founded in the United States in 1879 by Mary Baker Eddy (1821–1910), author of the book that contains the definitive statement of its teaching, Science and Health with Key to the Scriptures (1875). It is widely known for its highly controversial practice of spiritual healing...." :::Melton, Gordon and Gottschalk, Stephen - Encyclopedia Britannia, http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/115181/Christian-Science/8362/Significance

"The increasing pluralization and secularization of society, as well as the substabtial splintering of Protestantism and the creation of new non-orthodox denominations such as Christian Science and the Latter Day Saints, weakened the social and cultural consensus of traditionally Protestant nations."
 * Naphy, William, The Protestant Revolution: From Martin Luther to Martin Luther King Jr. Random House page clxxxii.

 '"Fry eyed four major denominations which had doubled in size in the previous twenty years. These were the Church of Christ, Scientist, the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints, the African Methodist Episcopal Church and the Churches of Christ."' :::Marty, Martin, University of Chicago Press, Modern American Religion, Volumne 2 1919-1941. p 33

"Seventh Day Adventism remains unusual among the new denominations which include the Church of Christ, Scientist, the Church of Latter Day Saints, and Jehovah's Witnesses in establishing training hospitals and contributing actively to medical research. Several but not all of the denominations have instituted strict codes of dietary practice.  Between the physicians and the Christian Scientists, between the physcisians and the Jehovah's Witnesses, relations have been and remain strained" :::Faubin, James; An Anthology of Ethics, Cambridge University Press p 228

"Another illustration of the policy of the law in preventing religious opinion from resulting in overt acts of afforded by the Christian Scientists. This denomination believes that all the ills of the body can be cured by prayers." :::Zollermann, Carl; American Civil Church Law, The Lawbook Exchange pg 18 Simplywater (talk) 01:39, 21 March 2014 (UTC)

Break
Simplywater, I'm sorry but I think this is going to be my last response to you, barring anything unforeseen. (By the way, the more bold, italics and raw links there are in your posts, the harder they are to read.)

You are using the word denomination in a loaded way. Most people who use it simply mean religion or religious group. Just as it's best to avoid the words sect and cult, it's similarly sensible to avoid the word denomination in case it's understood in its loaded sense. (Sect is not used in the article at all to describe CS; cult is used only in one sentence to describe how CS was seen historically, and in a second to describe that some church people were angered by the Bliss Knapp book because it made CS look like a cult.) The article therefore sticks with terms that most of the academic sources (not only cherry-picked ones) use and would not dispute. SlimVirgin (talk) 02:27, 21 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Due Weight.
 * Trying to understand what you mean by "loaded". It seems like a very normal word to me. Which you refuse to use. That is your perspective.
 * Could you give me a source that says that 'denomination' is a loaded word? Perhaps in a Orthodox Christian world that wants to control what is a denomination and what is not, the word is loaded. :But Wiki doesn't live in that world.
 * Your opinion needs to be sourced. Do you have one? Love to see it. Simplywater (talk) 00:23, 22 March 2014 (UTC)


 * The word is used simply to mean religion most of the time. But there is an academic debate about the denomination–sect–cult divide, where the terms have particular meanings, and some scholars say Christian Science is not a denomination in that sense. (I had assumed you knew this; otherwise there would be no reason for you to keep adding it.) Because the word has a particular meaning within that debate, and not all academics agree about it, the article avoids it (so as not to take a "side"), and also avoids sect. It now also avoids cult, except for the two exceptions I mentioned above, where the use is unavoidable. Instead, the article uses terms to describe CS that no academic would object to. SlimVirgin (talk) 00:35, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, let's count sources. How many RS sources do you have that say that say the words  "It is not a denomination?".Simplywater (talk) 00:41, 22 March 2014 (UTC)


 * SV, several months ago when you told me there weren't any sources that called Christian Science a denomination, I believed you. And I thought, huh, I always thought we were a denomination.   So I looked around and found lots and lots of dictionaries and non RS sources that said "Christian Science is a denomination, bla bla bla".  And I brought them here. And was told "It's not RS".  And I thought.  huh.  ok. I guess we really aren't a denomination.  Then I learned what was RS.  And I looked deeper.  And found that lots of RS sources call us a denomination from Oxford University Press, Princeton Press, Yale Press.  '''Do you think these RS academics don't know what they are doing when they use the word 'denomination'?

'''But when I saw on the Christian Science page, a quote by Philip Jenkins that Christian Science was a cult. Only to look deeper at his book to find him saying..... "But really it is a denomination". And when I added that to the text, you removed it. Then, SV, I lost all trust. Which is not good.
 * What I've learned is that most scholars are not participating in that petty debate about if it is a denomination or not.Simplywater (talk) 01:14, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
 * It simply is a denomination.


 * waiting for your list of RS sources that say "it is not a denomination". Simplywater (talk) 19:28, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

Recent edits
These are the problems with the recent edits. I've written this out in case it's helpful, but please bear in mind that this is time-consuming, so it's not something that can be done whenever edits like this are made.

"The significance of this event which Mary Baker Eddy would later refer to as her 'falling apple' 'marked the abandonment of Quimby's mental and magnetic teachings' . As she was alone, without her magnetic healer, Eddy's spiritual realization highlighted for her, Jesus as healer and that his powers 'could be acquired by others.'"
 * Edit


 * Issues
 * Re: Lewis p 176: This is The Encyclopedia of Cults, Sects, and New Religions, 2001, which isn't referenced already; the Lewis book already in use is Lewis 2003, so "Lewis p. 176" causes confusion.
 * 1) Gooden isn't the author of that book (she just wrote an intro). The author is Mrs. Edward Mix, and the title is Faith Cures, and Answers to Prayer.
 * 2) Gooden's intro isn't about Eddy (she is mentioned only in passing).
 * 3) I can't find much of a publishing history for Gooden.
 * 4) Gooden doesn't say anything about Eddy being alone without her magnetic healer, doesn't mention Quimby that I can see.
 * 5) It wouldn't have been the significance of the event that marked the abandonment, but the event itself.
 * 6) The edit assumes that the event (the fall) was significant at the time, but the rest of the section contradicts that. If you want to argue that it was significant for Eddy when it occurred, rather than something she invested with significance years later, you would need sources to show that (there aren't any that I'm aware of).
 * 7) Minor punctuation issue: the period should be placed before the ref tags (i.e. after teachings).

"As editor of the Christian Science Journal, Emma Curtis Hopkins secretly investigated the accusations of the Dressers. While Melton claimed Hopkins eventually left Eddy's movement because of philosophical differences, Harley claims and she may have been fired for her investigation.  In 1885 Hopkins wrote of her findings 'I found Eddy free to her own original inspiration. I saw all the letters said to be written to Dresser and Quimby and not one them could be held as argument against her supreme originality'"
 * Edit


 * Issues
 * 1) The article hadn't by this point mentioned the Christian Science Journal or Emma Curtis Hopkins.
 * 2) The article had so far mentioned only one Dresser, not two.
 * 3) Why did Hopkins have to investigate secretly? Needs an explanation.
 * 4) Who is Harley? (needs full name, link or description on first reference)
 * 5) That Hopkins might have been fired for this makes no sense, so would have to be explained (this is just a guess on Harley's part, and indeed she goes on to qualify it).
 * 6) This is the first mention of letters.
 * 7) Minor punctuation issue: the comma should be placed before the ref tags (i.e. after differences), and the final sentence lacks a period.
 * 8) Minor referencing issue: the article uses short refs in the text and long refs in the References section.

An article has to have a narrative flow, so that someone reading it from start to finish will understand it. Material can't just be pasted in; each sentence and paragraph within a section should flow from the previous one. It's important to check that new material hasn't already been mentioned, and that it doesn't contradict other material without explanation. When a new name is introduced, it needs to be linked or described, sometimes both. When a new issue is introduced, it has to be explained.

Also, an effort should be made to determine whether a source is appropriate for an issue, rather than relying on the minimum threshold of reliability. It's worth checking, too, that the source is scholarly and rigorous, and doesn't express a tiny-minority view (which could mean the source should be used with caution and in-text attribution, or perhaps not used at all). SlimVirgin (talk) 19:39, 19 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your wonderful reply. Let's take this one step at a time

For Eddy, this event marks the start of her trust in "God" as the healer as opposed to a person. If Eddy had fallen, and Quimby had healed her, her departure from mesmerism to Christian Science wouldn't have happened. The death of her brother, her first husband, her son, her mother, the death of her father, the death of Quimby, the absence of her husband, and poverty, forced her to turn to something else than a human. She turns to Jesus' words with a new paradigm than before she met Quimby and understands something. Something that at the age or 40 something makes her life take 180 degree turn. What is amazing to me, is that this woman had the most pitiful life, and comes up with a theology that God is all Good. Faith, Cures and Answers to Prayers
 * Narrative flow. I agree completely.  You write very tightly so it is difficult to add anything without rewriting your work, which I don't feel comfortable doing.  I add what may be interesting and allow you to weave it in as you like
 * I can fix the Lewis reference
 * Eddy found herself alone - Up to that time, and for still a time after this fall, Eddy is dependent of the mesmeric aid of others for health.. We don't have any record of her healing herself.
 * 1) Gill - Mrs. Patterson asked for her Bible, sent everyone out of her bedroom, and then amazed them all by getting out of her bed unaided. 162
 * 2) Mrs. Mary Glover wrote to Mr. W.W,Wright, I have demonstrated upon myself in an injury occasioned by a fall, that it did for me what surgeons could not do.
 * 3) "The falling apple that led me to the discovery how to be well myself, and how to make other so." Gill page 163
 * 1) "The falling apple that led me to the discovery how to be well myself, and how to make other so." Gill page 163
 * Abandonment- Both Lewis and Melton, Encyclopedia Handbook of Cults, refer to this event as Eddy's departure from Quimby and recognizing "God" as the healing agent.
 * is from a series of Women and Gender in North American Religions. Amanda Porterfield, and Mary Farrell Bednarowski are the series Editors
 * Gooden generously devotes 6 pages to Eddy, (you may not have the book)meticulously making a case that Eddy is a link proving that 'mind cure' is simply an offshoot of a movement inspired by Wesley in the late 1700's in England. An argument that others, including Melton, Curtis, and Porterfield make in various degress.Simplywater (talk) 01:42, 23 March 2014 (UTC)

Tremont temple.
Last Historic topic is Tremont Temple.

These books cover the event -
 * Faith, Cures, and Answered Prayers, -Rosemary Gooden University of Syracuse Press
 * Mary Baker Eddy, Gillian Gill
 * The Emergence of Christian Science in American Religious Life and Rolling Away the Stone Gottschalk, Stephen,
 * Joe,EW Kenyon and his Message of Faith, The True Story, McIntire,
 * Fundamentalists in the City, Conflict and Division in Boston's Churches, Oxford Press
 * Defense of Christian Science against Joseph Cook and J. Gordon's religious ban, Mary Baker Eddy
 * This is an obscure book by Mary Baker Eddy.  This is not circulated by the Church, but is available on-line by Kessinger Publishing as a historic document.

http://books.google.com/books?id=PhNlewAACAAJ&dq=defense+of+Christian+Science+against&hl=en&sa=X&ei=WvotU6maMYeEogT29oF4&ved=0CD4Q6AEwAg Not sure where it should go, but it is historically noteworthySimplywater (talk) 21:15, 22 March 2014 (UTC)

This is rough. Holiness movement and Tremont Temple.

The 19th century religious landscape was complex making it difficult to categorize the healing movements of the time. The explosion of Protestant divine healing movements (also referred to as faith healing, faith cure, or simply healing movement)crossed several Protestant denominations starting in the early 1800’s in England with the Primative Methodists inspired by "A Plain Account of Christian Perfection" written by John Wesley. the minister who founded Methodism. Christian Science needs to be viewed within the context of the Holiness movement both because of the access this movement gave to women and because Eddy was “an heir to Wesley’s understanding of Christian Healing.”

John Wesley ‘emphasized the importance of subjective experience of the Spirit’ and wrote “I believe that God now hears and answers prayer even beyond the ordinary course of nature.” Although he healed, spiritual healing was not his focus. In the 1830’s American Methodist lay woman, Phoebe Palmer  “reformulated” John Wesley’s teaching. Palmer argued that ‘perfection’ or ‘holiness’ didn’t need to be a process but could be immediate. Physical healing of the body was evidence of instantaneous sanctification. Ethan O. Allen a Methodist layman who believed that purification from sin would eradicate sickness, became the first evangelist to make healing his ministry. Charles Cullis, an Episcopal layman and homeopathic physician in Boston advocated that complete salvation included both spiritual and physical healing.

Mary Baker Eddy is included in the list of Protestant reformers “who objected to the notion that God ordained bodily suffering”. Porterfield, Amanda; Healing in the history of Christianity, Oxford University Press, pp 178-180 and Christian Science had in common the beliefs of nineteenth century evangelical Protestantism which included a strong belief in the spiritual power of healing. yet Christian Science and other ‘divine healing’ leaders never joined forces. When clergy tried to point out the differences, in the eyes of the public, they seemed the same. In 1885 Methodist minister and Boston University Professor Luther T. Townsend, an adversary among others, of the divine healing movement and mind cure movement, wrote a treatise called “Faith Work, Christian Science and Other Cures”. In that treatise Townsend highlighted the similarities between the divine healing movement and Christian Science saying both were the response of the operation of ordinary ‘physical laws’ without intervention or the miraculous power of God. Around the same time A.J. Gordon a proponent of Christian perfection and involved in the divine healing movement, wanted to distance his movement from Christian Science. A letter, written by Gordon was sent to the popular Evangelical Boston lecturer Joseph Cook, and in February 1885 at the Tremont Temple Monday lectures, to a crowd of 3,000, the letter was read by Cook. Through the letter Gordon attacked Christian Science saying it was a 'false religion'. He also said through Cook that “it was anti-christian in it’s no personal Deity, no personal devil, no personal man, no forgiveness of sin, no such think as sin, no sacrificial atonement, no intercesary prayer”. Hearing about the attack, Mary Baker Eddy wrote Cook and asked for the opportunity to reply. He agreed and gave her 10 minitues to defend her system of healing as Christian at one of the Monday Tremont Temple lectures

On March 16, 1885 at Tremont Temple, to a crowed of 3,000 in an extemporaneous reply, Eddy asked “Do not the reverend gentlemen demand the right to explain their creed?” She then commenced to explain her doctrines on atonement, God, sin and the trinity. She said
 * Do I believe in a personal God?
 * I believe in God as the Supreme Being. I know not what the person of omnipotence and ominipresence is, or :::what the infinite includes; therefore, I worship that of which I can conceive, first as a loving Father and Mother; then as thought ascends the scale of being to diviner consciousness, God becomes to me, as to the apostle who declared it, “God is Love”, - divine Principle, - which I worship; and ‘after the manner of my fathers, so worship I God.”

In reply to attacks on her doctrine of atonement, Eddy replied that ‘this becomes more to me since it includes man’s redemption from sickness as well as from sin. I reverence and adore Christ as never before.” Some argue that Eddy’s doctrine of atonement, which includes both salvation from sin and suffering was the same doctrine of the faith cure movement and a result of the Protestant healing movement of the 1830's  Although having "obvious ties to Christian tradition",  many theologians feel a deeper understanding of the theology places it outside traditional Christian theology. Today Christian Scientists distance themselves from 20th century faith cure movements who have have “ridgely proscriptive views of medicine”. . — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simplywater (talk • contribs) 04:38, 26 March 2014 (UTC)