Talk:Christiane Amanpour/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Edge3 (talk · contribs) 23:06, 23 January 2014 (UTC)

I am failing this article's GA nomination for the following reasons:
 * The lead is too short (WP:LEAD)
 * The article has an unresolved "citation needed" tag. Please provide inline citations, per WP:GACR #2
 * The following phrases seem unencyclopedic or unprofessional, per WP:WTW. Please use more precise language:
 * "Amanpour gained a reputation for being fearless..."
 * "Amanpour has reported on major crises from many of the world's hotspots..."
 * On a related note, "hotspot" is not well-defined here.

Please read the GA criteria closely before renominating. Edge3 (talk) 23:06, 23 January 2014 (UTC)
 * "She has had many memorable moments in her television career..." -- The significance of this paragraph is not explained well.
 * The "Bosnian War reporting" section comprises a large part of its parent section, such that the article appears to give too much weight to one topic. Furthermore, this section relies excessively on quotations.
 * There are two sections about her CNN career: "CNN" and "Return to CNN". The first section should be renamed to indicate that it was only the first of two terms at CNN.
 * The "Affiliations" and "Screen and media appearances" sections need more details.
 * The "Trivia" section seems unnecessary.