Talk:Christine Nelson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Try shrinking the lead to three paragraphs per MOS:LEADLENGTH.
 * Remove the comma after "first episode of Degrassi Junior High"
 * It's Late "It's Late" (all uses)
 * That's about it here.
 * All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:24, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Concept and casting

 * Is the hyphen necessary between "provocatively-dressed"?
 * "Of the filming" doesn't sound right. Maybe change "Of" to "On" or "During".
 * All fixed - I've made it "Speaking of the filming". to make it more clear. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:26, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Characterization

 * "father may had" "father may have"
 * Fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:27, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Role in Degrassi

 * Except for the one in #The_Next_Generation, are the TV screenshots needed?
 * Remove the comma after "were a baby".
 * There's a word missing between "by parents".
 * "withhold a payment" "withhold payment"
 * Is "day care" two words in British English?
 * "which Spike responds" "to which Spike responds"
 * All fixed. I also just put "daycare" as one word. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Novelization

 * "based from" doesn't sound right.
 * Remove the comma after "support her daughter".
 * Both fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:28, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Reception and impact

 * "story line" "storyline" (all uses)
 * "14 year-old" "14-year-old"
 * Remove the comma after "pregnant in real life".
 * "for the Planned Parenthood" "for Planned Parenthood"
 * All fixed. ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)