Talk:Christmas/to do

(Items suggested by peer reviewers)


 * Edit to eliminate redundancies that make the article too wordy
 * Edit to reduce vague terms of size - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”
 * Thorough copyediting
 * Eliminate unnecessary wikilinks (e.g. "birth", "volunteer", etc.) - mostly done, definitely should be double checked though
 * Incorporate a "Controversy" section with a "Main article:" link.

(Other items)


 * Add references to Arts and media section
 * Add references to Regional customs and celebration section