Talk:Christmas with Friends (India.Arie and Joe Sample album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Premeditated Chaos (talk · contribs) 22:23, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

Pleased to see this as a GA nom, considering I did the DYK hook review! Looking forward to going over it more thoroughly. &spades;PMC&spades; (talk) 22:23, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 00:11, 17 February 2018 (UTC)


 * I have revise this part according to your suggestion. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, that cannot be done unless it is cited in a source. I do not believe that any of the source straight up just say that this album is primarily Christmas standards. However, I would argue that this verges on this type of argument You don't need to cite that the sky is blue in which is it truly necessary to cite information that is very clear in the track listing. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I don't necessarily need it to be cited, but if the lead says it, the body ought to as well, since the lead summarizes the body. Even if you just say "Christmas with Friends comprises ten songs, nine of which are Christmas standards and one is an original track." I would argue that doesn't need its own citation per BLUESKY. &spades;PMC&spades; (talk) 02:00, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Revised as suggested. Aoba47 (talk) 03:41, 17 February 2018 (UTC)


 * I have reorganized the section somewhat. I made the third paragraph about the critics' comments on the sounds/genres associated with the various songs as that was a common pointed brought up in their reviews and articles. Let me know what you think. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Agreed; revised as suggested. Aoba47 (talk) 01:41, 17 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Studio locations are already cited by Reference 4, which appears later in the paragraph (as all of the information is supported by that citation). Added the citation for Charles. The "she said that it would be her only Christmas album." part is already supported by Reference 16 and the "Arie promoted the album by performing..." is already cited by Reference 1. Aoba47 (talk) 01:45, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Fair enough. I did add a ref for the only Christmas album bit, only because I clarified the origin of the statement in the body and wanted to make sure that was clearly reffed. On the topic of citations, "They worked together on music without much success;" wasn't supported by Ref 1, the Billboard ref, so I replaced it with Ref 16 (now Ref 2), the Ebony ref, which does support it. &spades;PMC&spades; (talk) 18:37, 17 February 2018 (UTC)


 * I do not see a need to include an image of Sample as he is visible on the album cover. That is also the reason why I did not add an image of India.Arie to the body of the article. Aoba47 (talk) 01:47, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * No problem, just a thought, &spades;PMC&spades; (talk) 18:37, 17 February 2018 (UTC)