Talk:Christophe Bruno

Hey guys the overall organization of the page looks good you just need to add to the sources and I think elaborating on the topics under subheadings might help. Also you might want to put words like "Iterate" in quotations otherwise editors might be confused. Izivkovi (talk) 18:51, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

I think you guys have done a pretty good job so far. The page looks a bit bland right now, but I'm sure you guys will add some pictures and some more links after today. I would definitely try to add a picture of Bruno himself and also some pictures of his artwork as well. MPalangio (talk) 18:53, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

The overall organization, topics looks good. The section on Literature (I assume..?) is Iterature. Unless this is right...? You need to go through and comb for grammatical errors.

Ok, I reread the section of Iterature, and it does sound like that is what it is supposed to be; however, it is kind of jarring. Maybe more explanation about the name?Etoile bleu (talk) 18:54, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

Break the first sentence into two: a first brief one introducing him, a second about his thesis/argument. Fine to make the sections be about his works, but I would make these sub-sub headings, i.e. make the sub-heading be "works" or something like that, and then the sub-sub be individuals work such as gogolchat and iterature.--Sandybaldwin (talk) 18:56, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

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