Talk:Christopher Lee/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Realmaxxver (talk · contribs) 21:17, 2 June 2022 (UTC)

Reviewing comments soon. I mean, I can't not review this. Realmaxxver (talk) 21:17, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for taking this on! I think you'll find it's in a good state according to the six GA criteria, and I look forward to working with you. Chiswick Chap (talk) 04:07, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
 * - more comments? Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:30, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
 * doing now. Realmaxxver (talk) 20:05, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ? Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:47, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I will be gone for a week so I'll have it finished then. sorry. Realmaxxver (talk) 13:25, 13 July 2022 (UTC)

Early life

 * "Lee's maternal great-grandfather was an Italian political refugee, Jerome Carandini, the Marquis of Sarzano, whose wife, Lee's great-grandmother, was English-born opera singer Marie Carandini (née Burgess)." → "Lee's maternal great-grandfather, Jerome Carandini, the Marquis of Sarzano, was an Italian political refugee; his wife, Lee's great-grandmother, was English-born opera singer Marie Carandini (née Burgess)."
 * Fixed.
 * "It was arranged that he should stay on in Menton after his sister had returned home," → "It was arranged that he should stay in Menton after his sister had returned home,
 * Edited.

Military service

 * "As the North African Campaign progressed, the squadron "leapfrogged" between Egyptian airstrips, from RAF El Daba to Maaten Bagush and on to Mersa Matruh. They lent air support to the ground forces and bombed strategic targets." → "As the North African Campaign progressed, the squadron "leapfrogged" between Egyptian airstrips, from RAF El Daba to Maaten Bagush and on to Mersa Matruh; they lent air support to the ground forces and bombed strategic targets."
 * Done.
 * "After breaking through the Mareth Line, the squadron made their final base in Kairouan.[52] After the Axis surrender in North Africa in May 1943, the squadron moved to Zuwarah in Libya in preparation for the Allied invasion of Sicily.[53]" → "After breaking through the Mareth Line, the squadron made their final base in Kairouan;[52] and following the Axis surrender in North Africa in May 1943, the squadron moved to Zuwarah in Libya in preparation for the Allied invasion of Sicily.[53]"
 * Done.
 * "After the Allied invasion of Italy, the squadron was based in Foggia and Termoli during the winter of 1943. Lee was then seconded to the Army during an officer's swap scheme.[57]" → "After the Allied invasion of Italy, the squadron was based in Foggia and Termoli during the winter of 1943, where Lee was then seconded to the Army during an officer's swap scheme.[57]"
 * Done.
 * "He spent most of this time with the Gurkhas of the 8th Indian Infantry Division during the Battle of Monte Cassino.[58]" → "Most of his time during the Battle of Monte Cassino was spent with with the Gurkhas of the 8th Indian Infantry Division during the Battle of Monte Cassino.[58]"
 * Edited.

Overall

 * Hello, I saw your note on the GAN page and I can take this up if you would want me to. — The Most Comfortable Chair 01:38, 4 September 2022 (UTC)


 * That's very kind of you. Let's see if we can get this finished! Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:34, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
 * All right. I will complete the review; will be done in a day or two. — The Most Comfortable Chair 18:50, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
 * , I came here because I saw the second opinion request; I see you've responded, but there's been no activity in two weeks. Are you still planning to review this? Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 21:25, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Mike Christie, The Most Comfortable Chair opened two GA reviews on 4 September, neither of which they have yet started, as well as saying they'd take on this one. As it has been three weeks with no action here, I think we can consider this available for you to take on, which would be most welcome—there is already plenty to do when they are able to resume GA reviewing, which I hope is soon. Thank you for checking. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:33, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
 * OK -- if they haven't started this by the time I am ready to pick up a new one, I'll take this on. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 08:12, 25 September 2022 (UTC)

Restarting review

 * I'm dubious about the provenance of File:Christopher Lee 1944.jpg. The source link doesn't work; archived versions of it don't seem to belong to a structured website but to some kind of upload directory.
 * Mmm, yes. How about we upload it with an NFUR? Would seem reasonable. I've removed it for now.
 * Not sure we could justify it -- there are other pictures of him, after all. What were you thinking of to satisfy the requirement that it enhances reader understanding or that no free alternatives exist? Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 18:38, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
 * That other images of him as a young (service)man will also be in copyright. Unless someone can find an official image of him doing his duty in uniform, which would be PD; but that seems unlikely.
 * What would the "reader understanding" argument be? Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 19:26, 25 September 2022 (UTC)


 * File:Dracula 1958 c.jpg is claimed to be public domain, because it was published without a copyright notice, which seems extremely unlikely.
 * This seems to be all right; it's a still from the PD trailer. "Trailers for movies released before 1964 are in the Public Domain because they were never separately copyrighted." – i.e. the "no notice" tag is correct.
 * Yes, missed that it was from the trailer. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:38, 25 September 2022 (UTC)


 * File:Oblong lee.jpg looks wrong. It looks like a film still, is claimed to be "own work", and the given licence tag is clearly wrong.
 * Removed.


 * File:Horror express gip.jpg almost certainly had a copyright notice on the film.
 * Removed.


 * Earwig finds a backwards copy page but no other issues.
 * Noted.

Will look at sources next. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 17:04, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks Mike. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:27, 25 September 2022 (UTC)

Content

 * Can we get a date or two for the events of his military service between December 1941 and January 1943? There's quite a sequence of events without a date there.
 * Edited. It was a period where he confessedly did very little. Not surprisingly, nobody has had very much to say about this time in his life.


 * "where Lee was then seconded to the Army during an officer's swap scheme": presumably should be "officers' swap"?
 * Fixed.


 * "Most of this time during the Battle of Monte Cassino": oddly phrased, as if that battle took his entire time with the army during the swap scheme.
 * Reworded.


 * Suggesting switching the order of the last two sentences in the "Military service" section -- as it stands I had to read the Telegraph interview to be sure it was Lee and not his stepfather who was attached to special forces.
 * Done.


 * I don't think we need the long lists of costars in the 2009 films.
 * Removed.


 * "With his operatic bass voice": not encyclopedic, though you might well be able to find a quote that says the same thing and use that.
 * Added.


 * "during T.S. Eliot’s period as a parishioner there": approximate dates? Even the decade would help.
 * Added. Eliot was a churchwarden there from 1940 to his death in 1965.


 * The closeness centrality feels like trivia, stated so baldly; I think if it's interesting enough to keep it needs to be explained inline.
 * Yes. Glossed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 20:15, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

That's all I can find. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 19:46, 26 September 2022 (UTC) All the above look good; I tweaked one thing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:27, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

Spotchecks
Everything looks good, so passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 22:27, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
 * FN 65 cites "supported William Hague and David Cameron": verified.
 * FNs 111 & 137 cite "Some thirty years after playing Francisco Scaramanga in The Man with the Golden Gun, Lee provided the voice of Scaramanga in the video game GoldenEye: Rogue Agent." Verified.
 * FN 122 cites "In 2004, Lee lamented that Hollywood scripts were mainly spin-offs, as people were afraid of taking financial risks, commenting that he was mostly being offered spin-offs of Lord of the Rings or Star Wars." Verified.