Talk:Christopher Mellon

Needs links, detail on connection with PA, Pittsburgh
This article needs links in several place, and some detail on how this particular member of the Mellon family is connected to Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. More inline citations, too, and a photo would be great. --DThomsen8 (talk) 18:32, 19 October 2010 (UTC)
 * It's done. ;-)--87.170.206.35 (talk) 18:10, 6 August 2020 (UTC)

Needs to be better organization and greater detail
This article is not formatted properly and is missing sections, paragraphs need to be better organized and in cases need to be more chronological. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Parzival191919 (talk • contribs) 13:23, 16 March 2018 (UTC)