Talk:Church (Red vs. Blue)/GA1

GA Reassessment
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As part of WikiProject Good articles' Project quality task force, I am re-reviewing this article to ensure compliance with current good article criteria. I have determined that it doesn't meet criteria for the reasons outlined below and needs a bit of work. As it's not inconceivable that my concerns can be addressed in a relatively timely manner, I'm putting the article on hold for seven days or longer if sufficient work is done before then. -- Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 03:01, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
 * The main issue I see is that there's no sort of assertion of real world importance, a major issue affecting its comprehensiveness. How was the character received?
 * Either the plot section is too long or it needs to be broken up for legibility; right now, it's just a wall of text.
 * There's a few unsourced sections, particularly the last sentence of filming (which needs to be folded or cut anyhow) and the final bit about his role in the plot (which might suffer from WP:OR issues too.)
 * As there's been no meaningful action on the above, I am delisting. Remember you can renominate at WP:GAN at any time you feel it meets criteria. Please direct any comments to my talk page; I don't watchlist old reviews. -- Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 14:45, 30 August 2009 (UTC)