Talk:Church Avenue station (IND Culver Line)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:55, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:04, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Lead is inadequate, it should cover some of the history of the line and perhaps even some of the pertinent points of the layout.
 * I added information from the history section. What do you think is pertinent in the layout section?--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure I'm the expert on that. I tend to include something from all the major sections and the layout section is probably the largest in the article. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 17:09, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , probably include that it's an express station with four tracks and two platforms. epicgenius (talk) 14:51, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Where is the street address of the station referenced?
 * In the exits section, where it says Outside fare control, there is a token booth and staircases going up to all four corners of Church and McDonald Avenues.
 * Zip code? The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 17:08, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * " Line.[4][6][5] " order.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Curiously, Kensington is not mentioned in the main part of the article at all, just the lead and infobox.
 * This is the practice for all other subway articles.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Not for Wikipedia articles though. Shouldn't be anything in the lead that isn't in the main body of the article? The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 17:05, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * It should be. I'll add it now. epicgenius (talk) 14:51, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Link Ditmas Ave station first time round.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * expected expected - a bit repetitive.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "On October 30, 1954,[17][18] " any need for two refs?
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "local service.[24][7]" order.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * " station.[24][7][25][26]" likewise.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "passenger complaints" about what?
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * What is MTA?
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "New Zealand athlete Jack Lovelock" somewhat understating, he was a 1936 Olympic gold medallist!
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Don't overlink Ditmas.
 * ✅--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking this up. I have addressed some of these and will get to the remainder of the issues already noted.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 16:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * The Zip code isn't referenced anywhere, but it's not a dealbreaker. If you could do that it'd be great. But I'm passing the article in any case. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 10:44, 5 April 2020 (UTC)