Talk:Ciao Italia: Live from Italy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:56, 22 October 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * "...playing in front of 1.5 million audience" → playing in front of an audience of 1.5 million
 * "...appears in an aspect ratio of 1.33:1 on the..." is 1.33:1 not more well-known as 4:3?
 * Be consistent with your ellipses (...), the first time they are surrounded by square brackets, but the second time they are not
 * "It also charted at three on the Finnish DVD chart" → It also charted at number three on the Finnish DVD chart
 * "It is was released..." whoops
 * Credits and personnel: think about col-2ing these. Can a source be provided?
 * All done Tb hotch Ta lk C. 18:13, 22 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I did the Finnish Chart thing which you missed :). I will pass the article now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 20:06, 22 October 2010 (UTC)