Talk:Cindy Baer

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jbarbzz23. Peer reviewers: Ans232, Bmyrga, Angelasuarez09.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:05, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
I really enjoyed reading your article. I did not find a lot of grammatical errors and i thought you did a very good job at putting your ideas into words. Ans232 (talk) 13:49, 16 November 2015 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hello, I peer reviewed your article and I thought it was great! I do suggest that you attempt to move your references and external links sections to the bottom of the page after your body of text, as well as combining the two separate references sections. Also, it is listed that Baer founded multiple non-profit organizations. If possible, maybe you could create a separate section for these. Additionally, I think the page would look much neater if you included a separate section for filmography, which would separate her notable works from the career section. I attempted to add hyperlinks throughout the article, but a lot of terms and her movies do not have their own separate pages, so I was only able to add a few. Once again, great job! Bmyrga (talk) 04:12, 17 November 2015 (UTC)