Talk:Cinema of Bhutan/Archive 1

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After doing research on the Cinema of Bhutan on various sites, I have came to the conclusion that most of the very little information that is provided is all correct. Considering that the Cinema of Bhutan is relatively new, which only dates back to the mid 1990's. It is expected to be just as big as Bollywood films. For the most part, When the Cinema Bhutan is searched for on the web, most of the same stuff is listed for it. Information being exact to what is found on its wikipedia page.Baggio9071 (talk) 16:55, 30 September 2016 (UTC)

Nice job adding to the Cinema of Bhuthan page. You found some really good sources with lots of info and posted links in the reflist on the page. I read the sentence you added about the film industry being at the "threshold of its international breakthrough". It looks as though this is taken right from the "Bhutan Film Industry" article that you linked to. Please put this sentence into your own words. For help with this, take a look at the "Avoiding Plagarism" handout that's posted to Canvas (under Modules).Prof.bgreg (talk) 12:15, 1 October 2016 (UTC)

I have decided to stay with this topic of choice for the project. Considering the cinema of bhutan is a fairly new industry, this is a small wikipedia page with more stuff to be added. I have found a couple of websites that seem to offer a ton of information of the topic, so I can use those sources to my advantage for this project.Baggio9071 (talk) 16:34, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
 * @Baggio9071: I think this is a great topic with a lot of potential for adding to the article. Please see my comment above about the sentence you added to the article that says that the film industry in Bhuthan was at the "threshold of its international breakthrough".  As I mentioned, this seems to be taken right from the "Bhuthan Film Industry" article that you found.  Please revise this sentence so that it's in your own words.  Take a look at the "Avoiding Plagarism" handout that's posted in Canvas as well.  Best, Prof.bgreg (talk) 21:50, 15 October 2016 (UTC)

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