Talk:Cinnamon Red Colombo

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Hi, there can you please assist me with this. I am unsure how it reads like an advert. I have edited it again to add "claimed" to be South Asia's first lean luxury but was just quoting the article referenced. Anyway, appreciate any information to help improve the page and move it out of drafts. I also followed the format provided for Page: Cinnnamon Grand so unsure where I went wrong. (IantheYR (talk) 19:26, 7 May 2020 (UTC))