Talk:Circus Juventas/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cirt (talk · contribs) 05:22, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

I will review this article. &mdash; Cirt (talk) 05:22, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * A preemptive thanks! Bob Amnertiopsis ∴ChatMe! 05:51, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Hey, it may take me a little while to get to it but I'll keep you posted on my progress. &mdash; Cirt (talk) 07:05, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * No worries! I'll be here all week, as they say. Also, I know a lot of the refs are pulled from paywalled archives, so if you need me to pull any quotes to support anything, I'm happy to do it. Thanks again, Bob Amnertiopsis ∴ChatMe! 15:00, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * , could you please expand the lede intro sect, per WP:LEAD, so it can function as a standalone summary of the entire article's contents? That's the only glaring issue I'm seeing right now, so rather than put this as GA on Hold, thought I'd just ask you here, before we proceed onwards. &mdash; Cirt (talk) 17:26, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Beyond maybe the Music section which I realize is pretty lacking from the lead, are there any other sections or areas you'd recommend expanding upon? Bob Amnertiopsis ∴ChatMe! 18:03, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Mainly some from Reception, and a bit more from History. &mdash; Cirt (talk) 23:32, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * How's that, ? Bob Amnertiopsis ∴ChatMe! 23:53, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Much better, I'll get to the rest of the review in a bit. &mdash; Cirt (talk) 23:57, 4 October 2014 (UTC)