Talk:Cissy Fitzgerald

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Rachelkinross. Peer reviewers: Get1432, Lmhickey.

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I couldn't really find grammatical errors or anything like that. You did a great job of using citations and linking to other Wikipedia pages. You just need to do some more research and add more information. You're definitely doing a great job so far though! -Leah Hickey — Preceding unsigned comment added by 100.6.135.22 (talk) 22:27, 15 November 2015 (UTC)

Possible Article Improvements
I think this is a good start to this article. One change I believe will benefit the article would be to split it into sections rather than have several paragraphs with no headings. One possible section to be included could be about her life, where you could expand on the information provided about her family and children, maybe some biographical information about where she was born or lived, any information on her childhood you might be able to find such as who her parents were or any education she received. This article might benefit from a "Career" section as well, where you could go into more detail about the films she appeared in and maybe more specifically what her roles entailed. Overall, I think this is a good start, and by formatting into different sections and expanding upon what is already there, this could be a great article! Good job! Get1432 (talk) 04:59, 16 November 2015 (UTC)