Talk:Citavi

Comments on user-spaced draft
The external references might be passable. In a deletion review, people would be quick to point out that you're linking to a blog & press releases. --Karnesky (talk) 21:29, 11 February 2011 (UTC)
 * I'd turn the feature list into prose & have fewer links to the Citavi website (10 references to the developer's own site is probably too much & just feels like promotional speak).
 * You might fix the grammar of "Citavi is widespread in Germany" & include a specific quote from the article that is used to make this assertion (the PDF is too big for google to translate the whole thing).
 * If relevant, re-add the following removed reference to someplace more important: