Talk:CitySavings

Draft review
Hi Tol, Please see the improved edits to Draft:City Savings Bank, the draft has now have reliable sources and Citations for verification of its authenticity and notability subject for approval. But before we proceed for submission, I am requesting for your review and consideration. Thank you and looking forward to response. Filipinot@yot@lk 15:03, 12 June 2021 (UTC)


 * @Filipinotayo: The draft is much better than before, and shows notability. There are a few issues within the text that I'd like you to improve before I publish it — I have used inline cleanup tags to mark them:
 * Quantify "after years" (after how many years?);
 * Add the nearby city they expanded to (which city?);
 * Add a citation for "1st ranked Loan Association and Savings in the country", and say who ranked it.
 * Once you have done these, I think the article can be published. Thank you! Tol  &#124; talk &#124; contribs 18:25, 12 June 2021 (UTC)


 * @ Tol, Thank you for your reviews and helps. Please refer to my additional source and content. Thanks. Filipinot@yot@lk 02:00, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * @Filipinotayo: Thank you! At least for now, I have removed "1st ranked Loan Association and Savings in the country" because I'm sure that it's entirely neutral, unless it's in some ranking conducted by a neutral third party; citing it from their website, a primary source, is not enough for such a claim. You can add this again if you say who ranked it first, if it is by an independent and reliable source, and if you add a citation to that source. I have accepted the draft. Tol  &#124; talk &#124; contribs 02:12, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * @Tol: Thank you again. I am working on it. Thanks and more power. Filipinot@yot@lk 02:22, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * @Filipinotayo: You're welcome! Tol  &#124; talk &#124; contribs 02:23, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

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