Talk:CitySpire/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:38, 3 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Link Murphy/Jahn in the lead
 * Done. Epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Infobox refers to the structural engineer as Rosenwasser/Grossman, but the text has Robert Rosenwasser Associates?
 * Link louvers
 * Done. Epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Floor space is variously given as 830,000 or 830,005
 * I've rounded both figures, since 830,000 is rounded to the nearest thousand. 830,005 is probably a metric-to-U.S. customary conversion, since the difference from the 830,000 figure is less than 1 square meter. Epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * The lead uses the adjective Moorish to describe the dome's influence, but this doesn't seem to be elsewhere in the article
 * The influence of Moorish architecture was on City Center, not CitySpire. I removed it. Epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Lead unequivocally says that it overran its height by 14 feet; but the article says it was either 11 or 14
 * Fixed the lead. Epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * "Koch ordered the incomplete dome dismantled that November" - But it was said to be completed in August earlier in the paragraph?
 * This was an error, so I have removed "incomplete". Epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Infobox says that it was completed in 1987, but the body says and the building was completed by 1990 and the lead says 1989?
 * The building opened in 1990, rather than 1987 (which was the topping-out date). 1989 was the date when many residential and office tenants had purchased space in the building, but not all tenants had bought space by this time, so I removed that date from the lead. Epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Is NYCCigarBars.com RS?
 * Removed. Epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Other sources look fine
 * Image licensing is okay

Placing on hold, good work here. Hog Farm Talk 19:24, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have addressed all these issues now. Epicgenius (talk) 13:41, 4 January 2022 (UTC)