Talk:City of Lover/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pseud 14 (talk · contribs) 17:56, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

I will review in the next couple days. My first dabble within the GAN review space (so apologies if it will be a bit slow). Ping me if I don't get to it a week from now. Hope all is well. Pseud 14 (talk) 17:56, 25 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for taking up this review, . Please ping me once you finish reviewing and I'd try to resolve within 1 week, though there might be some delay due to my hectic schedule lately. Best, Ippantekina (talk) 15:27, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Concert type should be one-off concert instead of one-day. Both in the lead and infoxbox to be consistent with other one-off concert articles.
 * The avoid confusion, number of shows should just be listed as 1 Europe can be removed since location info already precedes that.
 * Remove 1 played, as this likely refers to the aired television special for the same concert.
 * I think we can also remove duration for the TV special, as it is covered in the body, and since this is the article for the concert.
 * The first para is only two sentences long; maybe merge it with the 2nd para. While not an absolute rule, general guidelines per MOS:LEADLENGTH is 2 para for articles with fewer than 15K characters.
 * with tens of thousands of seats is a bit informal. Perhaps rephrase?

Background

 * free-spirited production Swift's songwriting → free-spirited production and Swift's songwriting...
 * Swift held the City of Lover concert, a one-off concert at the → Swift held City of Lover, a one-off concert... -- suggest taking out the first instance of concert, as City of Lover itself refers to the concert.
 * were no widespread promotional campaigns → extensive promotional campaigns is much better IMO
 * The City of Lover concert was the only concert → City of Lover was the only concert -- drop first instance of concert per above.
 * The City of Lover concert marked Swift's first concert -- same as above
 * She had also held a small performance → She previously held a small performance

Television and music releases

 * ran for a length of 42 minutes → ran for 42 minutes

Reception

 * Upon completion, the City of Lover concert received positive feedback → Upon completion, City of Lover received positive feedback
 * to play the 2,000-seat Olympia → to play at the 2,000-seat Olympia
 * Swift had had limited commercial success -- removed duplicated had
 * she had prioritized the English-speaking → she prioritized the English-speaking
 * behind-the-scene → behind-the-scenes conception -- suggest linking
 * Swift only included the Lover songs was the result of the ongoing masters controversy → Swift only included the Lover songs as a result of the ongoing masters controversy

Set list

 * Good

Media

 * File:City of Lover (ABC Special) by Taylor Swift.png - with Non-free FUR - OK
 * File:The lobby of L'Olympia in Paris.jpg - Creative Commons license - OK

Final comments and verdict

 * I have finished my review and have put this on hold until after you address my comments; nice work on this! -- Pseud 14 (talk) 22:18, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
 * thanks again for taking up the review. I have addressed everything, and also trimmed down the quote to lower the copyvio score. Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 16:04, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your work. Passing. Pseud 14 (talk) 16:33, 27 February 2023 (UTC)