Talk:Civil Air Patrol/GA1

GA Review

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * I fixed a few acronym inconsistencies, and tagged an unclear statement.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * I left one citation tag for a paragraph that wasn't cited at all.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Really close. In addition to the tags I left, The age of the audio recording concerns me.  ON HOLD for up to a week for the minor improvements needed. Jclemens (talk) 03:55, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I have addressed your concerns. I hope it now fully meets the criteria. &mdash;  scetoaux (T | C)  22:19, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Really close. In addition to the tags I left, The age of the audio recording concerns me.  ON HOLD for up to a week for the minor improvements needed. Jclemens (talk) 03:55, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I have addressed your concerns. I hope it now fully meets the criteria. &mdash;  scetoaux (T | C)  22:19, 5 September 2008 (UTC)