Talk:Claire Edmondson

Contested deletion
This page should not be speedy deleted as an unambiguous copyright infringement, because the part in question has been removed from the page. --MerMarr00 (talk) 17:33, 12 November 2016 (UTC)

Copyright problem removed
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The article need to be depersonalised
The section about the controversy contains some WP:OR especially this section

The music video for Broken Social Scene's Sweetest Kill (June 2011) polarised people across the internet. A dark take on love gone wrong, the video featured Bijou Phillips lovingly chopping up her boyfriend and burying him in a rose garden.[3] In 2011 women rarely killed in pop culture and the video was subject to backlash. Despite the backlash, it quickly became the dreamy “Female Gaze” calling card. The video was celebrated by many, while agitating some indie fans, with a handful of men harassing Edmondson online, calling her despicable and bemoaning she ruined their favourite band for them. While this female powerplay horrified many, others wrote of its importance.[4] In one indie music video, Edmondson managed to dismantle the indie film world’s “manic pixie dream girl” trope.

i don't even know what that last phrase is supposed to mean...--Domdeparis (talk) 11:20, 24 November 2016 (UTC)