Talk:Clarence McGeary/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 16:22, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
 * to late to be eligible to the first "to" should be "too"
 * He returned to the Bison in 1948 and played end. He moved from end to center in the 1949 season. probably an opportunity to combine these two sentences to soften up the short, choppiness
 * Fargo, North Dakota need a comma after North Dakota
 * but choose to remain -> "chose"
 * Bismarck, North Dakota need a comma after North Dakota
 * Ref spot check: #4, 5, 11, 17, 21, 22
 * Issues addressed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:54, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 16:20, 20 October 2023 (UTC)