Talk:Clarence Ransom Edwards/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 23:04, 8 April 2010 (UTC) Overall this is a good article. I just have a couple tweaks that need to be made:
 * What's an A.M.? Link to the type of degree.
 * I can't figure out what it is so I removed the AM part. --Kumioko (talk) 01:52, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Ref #13 needs a publisher.
 * Done --Kumioko (talk) 01:52, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "on account of his intimate acquaintance with conditions in the Philippines, which were administered by that office." what was administered by the office? Didn't quite get that.
 * Done --Kumioko (talk) 02:12, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "In month, year, this-" That first comma isn't needed; it happens many times so I didn't list every mention here.
 * Done --Kumioko (talk) 01:52, 9 April 2010 (UTC)

Just a few things. I'll put the article on hold and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 23:04, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Article looks good now, so I'll pass it as a GA. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:14, 9 April 2010 (UTC)