Talk:Claude Piel

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 02:17, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Appropriate infobox should be added
 * Photograph should be added from a source with a free license, if available
 * Needs some copy editing into Wikipedia style and internal links adding
 * Some basic biographical information required, including precise dates of birth/death, place of birth, positions held with dates, etc
 * Lead needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * Main body of article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
 * Information on work should be expanded
 * References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format
 * External links may need pruning, as discussion forums are not usually suitable