Talk:Claudia Llosa

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Girasol10002. Peer reviewers: Mintandlavender, Cinema4242.

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Feedback for Girasol10002
Hi Girasol10002,

Great work on this article so far. The article is easy to read, and well written. The chart of her awards is very detailed and you have plenty of sources which makes your article very reliable! I have a few suggestions to make the article even stronger. First, I would recommend you ensure that her films all have consistent formattings, such as italics and appropriate links. This will make the article look even more polished. Second, I do not think you need to include the people she worked with on The Milk of Sorrow unless they had a closer relationship to her or an impact in her life. Third, I'm not sure if the language around mentioning whether or not she uses stereotypes in her film is objective enough. Perhaps could the language be changed to present the information in a more matter of fact way?

Once again, great work! Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns!

Cinema4242 (talk) 04:17, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

Second student peer review feedback:

the articles Early Life and Education section has significantly been improved with new information.

new information about films have been added to page. Very detailed descriptions of films.

awards and recognition information have been added to page.

the structure and flow of information is superior. very well written and sentences link.

information is written in a non-biased way. it is neutral.

sources are credible and well balanced. journal articles from credible databases are used.

overall, contributions done by student editor has vastly improved the page.

The introduction to the wikipedia page should be stronger. More prominent/relevant information should be displayed in the introduction.

Perhaps more information could be added to the "Early life and Education" section. It is a little bit small compared to the Career section. More information could be added to distribute the weight of the article more evenly.

A "Legacy" section would be useful for this article to enhance it.

All in all, information is accurate and detailed.

Mintandlavender (talk) 22:27, 1 November 2018 (UTC)MintandLavender

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