Talk:Claudia Myers

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Pebbles44. Peer reviewers: Ed3695, Bzepp.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:08, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Editing Suggestions
You have written a great article, I think you begin it straight to the point! You've structure the article very clearly, nonetheless I would suggest to add more detail to the first paragraph as well as her Early Life section, however if you don’t have much information on Myers, that’s not a problem !

Just a few quick grammar changes: under Buddy & Grace, “who suffers with” should rather be “who suffers from”, under Fort Bliss, “A film about an army medic” should instead be “The film depicts an army medic”. In your filmography section, I would suggest creating links on the title of the films!

Everything else looks great, wish you the best of luck ! Bzepp (talk) 20:17, 17 March 2016 (UTC)

Remove link
Kettle of Fish links to an album, rather than the movie. E clark e100 (talk) 19:45, 25 March 2016 (UTC)