Talk:Clavaria zollingeri/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peter coxhead (talk · contribs) 09:14, 16 May 2012 (UTC)

Thank-you for your review. I'll address your points individually:
 * 1a: I clarified that the branches are fragile. The second sentence parses ok to me–it's a list of the three ways the fruit bodies arrange themselves. I did, however, change "fungus" to the more accurate "fruit bodies". Hope this helps (but I'm open to other wordings).
 * 1b: I used both of your suggestions to make the lead more accessible.
 * 2b: What can I say, it's just my "style" :)
 * 3a: Good points, and I hope my addition resolves this.
 * 6b: There is no image sandwiching at the width I use for my browser window, but hopefully the increased length of the sections above the second image will reduce sandwiching on your screen. Sasata (talk) 06:57, 17 May 2012 (UTC)
 * All the issues I raised have been sorted, so I'm happy to say that this is a Good Article. Peter coxhead (talk) 08:18, 17 May 2012 (UTC)