Talk:Clean (2022 film)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Otuọcha (talk · contribs) 22:55, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for the creation and editing. Will start this tommorrow.

This documentary is too small per the former GA review. It has some non cited words, but no one is perfect. I will review and effectively relate non cited words and will seek quick addition to help meet GA.
 * I have no objections to expanding anything you see necessary to pass. It has increased by 4k bytes since the last GA review almost a year ago

Copy vio

 * I am satisfied with this report from Earwig.
 * noted thanks

Lead

 * Generally, the lead is too short for a GA. I was also seeing this:
 * I'll attempt an expansion. I have changed the wording per your recommendation.
 * I'll attempt an expansion. I have changed the wording per your recommendation.


 * (Just a suggestion): add "Australia" to the first title: Clean is an Australian 2022 documentary film about the life of Sandra Pankhurst
 * done thanks

Synopsis

 * . Consider reducing line breaks and adjusting related content
 * re-written parts. This is my own original writing.


 * . Might consider reword:
 * I re-wrote parts, but this sounds more like a film review than neutral enyclopaedia.

cast

 * The cast is too short. Consider merging or removing per MOS:CASTLIST
 * nothing in that MOS section precludes a short castlist? It states A film may have an ensemble cast, or only a handful of actors. Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of information, so try to name the most relevant actors and roles that are most appropriate for the film:. Seems fine to just list the two primary cast members?

Production

 * Consider citing. Or removing
 * cited
 * cited


 * Do we leave that Walking Fish Productions like that. You can at your own discretion, place an in-site-tag for red linking— I do suggest that.
 * I already cited, and I did not red-link this as I dont think it's a notable production company? But I will if you prefer.

done
 * In general, do place an IMDb title as ext link, and any other relevant link.

Image review

 * File:Sandra Film.jpg: I can't find the original link source where this image was gotten: provide one!
 * Here is the link


 * Done — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:29, 2 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Done — MaxnaCarta  ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:29, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

Spot checks: source analysing

 * Source2 ✅
 * Source3 ❌: removed it from the sentence At this time, he had not read The Trauma Cleaner: One Woman's Extraordinary Life in Death, Decay & Disaster book documenting Pankhurst's life, released in 2017 and written by Sarah Krasnostein. It's a primary source and replace with a secondary source.
 * thanks. I removed that source entirely. That entire paragraph is substantiated with the one citation already used.


 * Source4 ✅ I am much concern with their Editorial policy and well cited too.
 * Source5 ✅
 * Source6 ✅: replace the shortened "the Guardian" to "The Guardian and link it, since there are other "The Guardian" newspapers!
 * Source7 ✅
 * Fionnuala Halligan of Screen Daily considered the re-enactment scenes to be a negative in the film, calling them a "let down for a cast of characters who are so determinedly real." Link the "Screen Daily".
 * linked


 * Place source 8 after ...certainly a tribute to [Pankhurst]."
 * Done, thanks!

All the Best! Otuọcha  (talk) 00:06, 3 April 2024 (UTC)


 * If you don't mind, can fancy in to reviewing. I have many from WikiProject Nigeria/ Language & Literature! All the Best!  Otuọcha   (talk) 00:08, 3 April 2024 (UTC)