Talk:ClearSign Technologies/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CorporateM (talk · contribs) 04:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

Good start! I don't think this article is ready for a GA review yet. I've provided a few notes below. CorporateM (Talk) 04:48, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


 * The Lead should summarize the entire article
 * History generally goes before Products
 * There are various spacing issues before citations
 * Please see WP:ORGAWARDS regarding the award
 * "Rutkowski was a co-founder of projection technology company Microvision and nanotechnology company Lumera" Avoid going off-topic by discussing executives rather than the company
 * " according to the company, " I think in the case of the amount raised in an IPO, we can trust them and not need attribution
 * "A company press release" This is a poor use of a primary source
 * I'm not sure a small company like this will be able to reach GA standards for comprehensiveness, because the volume of sources required to make a comprehensive piece probably do not exist. Would suggest a strong stub.
 * Suggest moving the image of HQ to the infobox.