Talk:Cleopatra (Haggard novel)

What is this about "stilted language"? If anything, "Cleopatra" becomes too easily melifluous, often slipping into iambics for significant stretches. Lewis said Haggard couldn't be bothered to write well, but I don't see it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.163.106.71 (talk) 15:17, 19 March 2009 (UTC)