Talk:Clevedon/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 18:57, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: No dabs found

Linkrot: No dead links found. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:01, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * The article is reasonably well written. I made a number of copy-edits.
 * There are a large number of stray sentences, please consolidate into paragraphs.
 * I have tried to combine some of these


 * Walton Castle is a 17th century fort located on a hill  Which hill?, as they are all mentioned this would help.
 * Done


 * Clevedon Court lies at the other end of the town, can you phrase this better, other end from what? As Walton Castle hasn't been located this doesn't help the reader.
 * Done


 * The lead contains information not in the artcile, e.g. the origin of the town name.
 * Moved


 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * References all appear to be RS, no evidence of OR
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * History - is there nothing available from the period between Domesday and the Victorian era?
 * No not really - I've added a sentence based on the town councils description of it as a small quiet agricultural village, but it doesn't seem to have any involvement in anything notable enough to have been written about.


 * Production of penicillin, why, where?
 * Expanded & hopefully explained


 * Economy could do with some expansion. No mention of tourism is made.
 * I can't find any sources which talk about numbers of visitors or contribution of tourism to the economy etc - although I've looked at hundreds of sites about accommodation available etc


 * Demography (or should that be Demographics?). Consider expanding with breakdowns by ethnic origin, age bands, etc.
 * I've added something about age, religion & economic activity


 * Although the poets are mentioned later on, some explanation of the name Poet's Walk is needed.
 * Done


 * Unveiled in June 2000, the 5 ft (1.5 m) tall sculpture cost £9,000 Name of sculptor, who raised the money?
 * I've added a bit more - the best source I could find was Geograph - hope this source will be OK as RS?


 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days, please leave comments on this review page. I have watch-listed the page. Jezhotwells (talk) 12:20, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your comments and edits - hopefully some of your conce3rns have been addressed as set out above?&mdash; Rod talk 19:32, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days, please leave comments on this review page. I have watch-listed the page. Jezhotwells (talk) 12:20, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your comments and edits - hopefully some of your conce3rns have been addressed as set out above?&mdash; Rod talk 19:32, 30 August 2010 (UTC)


 * OK, thanks for the work in expansion, I am happy to pass this as a good article. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:05, 30 August 2010 (UTC)