Talk:Clive Metcalfe

Dead external links to Allmusic website – January 2011
Since Allmusic have changed the syntax of their URLs, 1 link(s) used in the article do not work anymore and can't be migrated automatically. Please use the search option on http://www.allmusic.com to find the new location of the linked Allmusic article(s) and fix the link(s) accordingly, prefereably by using the Allmusic template. If a new location cannot be found, the link(s) should be removed. This applies to the following external links: --CactusBot (talk) 11:34, 2 January 2011 (UTC)
 * http://allmusic.com/cg/amg.dll?p=amg&uid=UIDMISS70403211511500090&sql=B9qn8b5c4psqh

Not sure where to start
This article really needs work. As I know next to nothing about this man, I don't know how much more help I can be to it. I made a few changes here and there to improve the grammar, as well as make it read better. I made several changes to remove minor exaggerations. And I also removed, following our BLP rules, a statement allegedly made by Metcalfe concerning Roger Waters, another living person with an article in this encyclopedia. I'm afraid that this only scratches the surface. I actually considered tagging this article, as I'm not at all sure that Mr. Metcalfe meets the criteria for inclusion. But I'll leave that decision to someone more knoweledgeable about the notability guidelines, which I myself am still learning. Joefromrandb (talk) 10:48, 13 January 2011 (UTC)