Talk:Close My Eyes (Mariah Carey song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 20:41, 6 January 2013 (UTC)

Good article. Not too many issues:  — Statυs  ( talk,  contribs ) 20:41, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
 * It was co-written by Carey and Walter Afanasieff; Carey solely wrote the lyrics, while both she and Afanasieff composed the music. They also produced and arranged the song together. → Don't really like how this worded. May I suggest: It was co-written and produced by Carey and Walter Afanasieff. While Carey solely wrote the lyrics to the song, both she and Afanasieff composed its music.
 * "Close My Eyes" is a down-tempo piano led song. → A little short of a sentence. Can it be expanded, or merged into another sentence?
 * Dana Jon Chappelle and Mike Scott served as the engineers, while Ian Dalsemer was enlisted as the assistant engineer. → Dana Jon Chappelle and Mike Scott served as recording engineers, with assistance from Ian Dalsemer.
 * Numbers < 10 need to be written out.
 * with her ex-husband, Tommy Mottola → with Mottola
 * When did she perform the song on The Rosie O'Donnell Show?
 * that she was written → that she has written
 * The references link to books, but there are no bibliography references for them.
 * How do you do that? AARON &bull; TALK  20:47, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
 * See Madonna (entertainer) as an example.  — Statυs  ( talk,  contribs ) 20:51, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Okay done. AARON &bull; TALK  20:59, 6 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Struggled a bit with it, but I finally got it to work. Now, you see if you click on "Shapiro 2001, pp. 99–100", for example, in the notes, it will bring you down to references.  — Statυs  ( talk,  contribs ) 21:07, 6 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Now that everything is resolved, I feel confident in passing the article! Keep up the great work!  — Statυs  ( talk,  contribs ) 21:07, 6 January 2013 (UTC)