Talk:Closed on Sunday/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 02:00, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Because of your numerous amazing reviews of my articles, I will take this on. At first glance it looks good. LOVI 33  02:00, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot, cannot wait to see your comments. --K. Peake 08:43, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Are you sure Gospel should be included as a genre since it specifically refers to it's chorus?
 * Shouldn't it be fine to include as a genre since not only is the chorus included more than once but it is not described as merely "influence" from, or "elements" of gospel? --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)


 * "songwriting credit was added" → "a songwriting credit was added"
 * ✅ --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)


 * For the release sentence, add something about it being released through GOOD Music and Def Jam Recordings.
 * ✅ does that look fine? --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Background and development

 * "McDonald's" → "McDonald's", with target.
 * ✅ --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

 * Looks Good!

Release and promotion

 * Looks Good!

Critical reception

 * Looks Good!

Music video

 * "An accompanying music video was directed" → "An accompanying music video for "Closed on Sunday" was directed"
 * ❌ since I thought this too, until I learnt otherwise on Talk:Follow God/GA1. --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)


 * Shouldn't he be mentioned as "West" instead of "Kanye"?
 * See MOS:SAMESURNAME, or is this not following that MOS rule properly and should it be "Kanye West" instead? --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Commercial performance

 * Looks Good!

In popular culture

 * Looks Good!

Credits and personnel

 * Looks Good!

Charts

 * Looks Good!

Final comments and verdict

 * As always, the article is really well written. I'm going to put it for now. Just a few small fixes, shouldn't take too long.  LOVI  33  15:21, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review and proper feedback, have made some comments to you regarding it though. --K. Peake 15:51, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * , you had good reasons for not applying some of my suggestions so I'm going to ✅ it. Great Job! LOVI  33  16:10, 4 August 2020 (UTC)