Talk:Cloudy catshark/GA1

GA Review
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Hello! bibliomaniac15 here, at your service. I'll be your reviewer, so sit tight!

Overall, it's a neat little article about a neat little shark. The article was well cited by a variety of reliable sources. I gave it a copyedit and fixed some prose irregularities.


 * The range map is pretty good, but it would be nice to see a citation for it.
 * Done.


 * In the Description section: "the fourth pair over the pectoral fin origins." Could you possible say "base of the pectoral fin"? I don't want to mess up the meaning, so I didn't fix that.
 * Can't; "origin" and "base" don't mean the same thing.


 * A possible topic for expansion would be to look at ongoing research in physiology using the cloudy catshark. After all, it is a model organism.
 * Perhaps, I'd have to think about what to say.

Aside from these issues, which I anticipate can be easily corrected, I will be passing this as a good article. Well done.

Reviewer:  bibliomaniac 1  5  06:42, 16 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! -- Yzx (talk) 18:50, 16 December 2010 (UTC)