Talk:Club Harlem/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:11, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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History

 * "Williams was a medical student at Penn" - change to University of Pennysylvania ✅
 * "It came to be considered the "Cotton Club" of Atlantic City." - who exactly considered this point?
 * I've reworded this as the ref doesn't indicate who. We hope (talk) 14:01, 29 August 2016 (UTC)


 * "and arrested 32," - I'm guessing 32 people or employees? ✅
 * Adelaide, Australia is a dab link ✅
 * Change Northeastern US to Northeastern United States and wikilink it for accessability ✅

Shows

 * "The music played from 10 pm Saturday night to 6 am Monday morning." - change 10pm and 6am to 10 p.m and 6 a.m for consistency ✅
 * "Long time Atlantic City disc jockey Pinky Kravitz recalled that by 3AM," - ditto ✅
 * "in New York City for 6 months" - spell out 6 ✅
 * "and then in the summer play at the Club Harlem" - perform would be better since play is mentioned previously in the sentence this is in ✅
 * "to sing with Sammy Davis, Jr., and sang with Davis," - reptition of sing/sang ✅

Final years and demolition

 * I don't think easter should be linked since it's a common term. Also the same issue is present in the lead ✅