Talk:Clwyd/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:49, 22 April 2016 (UTC)

Great! Happy to help with this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 17:49, 22 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Lead:
 * No infobox here?
 * Dr. Blofeld removed it a few days ago with the edit summary "better without the hideous infobox". Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 *  one of eight counties in Wales Not clear if there were eight counties in Wales at the time or this was one of the eight that had county councils.
 * Clarified. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I think "Romans", "Normans", "Act of Union", "English Crown" and "Chester" should be wikilinked.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * "Cheshire" is linked twice.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * The links in the lead can be repeated later.


 * History:
 * I think "Celtic" should be wikilinked
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * "75 AD", "AD 400" use any one style.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Geography:
 * There are a lot of duplicate links, I think you can use this tool to fix them.
 * Removed about thirty from the whole article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * The county of Clwyd in northeastern Wales Seems as if there are other such counties elsewhere.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Gwynnedd to the west, Powys to the south Would be good to add these are Welsh counties.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * What is a scarp slope?
 * Explained. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * The north central part  "north-central"
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * The population as of 2007 More recent figures available?
 * The Office for National Statistics produces data but it has a difficult to negotiate, useless website and I could not find any more recent figures. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Tourism is nowadays the main source of income in Clwyd The line "The economy of Clwyd depends on a mixture of industrial, agricultural and tourism activities" does not seem to highlight the significance of tourism in the economy.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Administrative history:
 * I think "coat of arms" should be wikilinked.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Landmarks:
 * I think "Neolithic" should be wikilinked.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Transport:
 * Betws-y-Coed Earlier you said "Betws y Coed"
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Images: Perhaps a few images could be shifted to the left?
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)

Alright, that should be it for now. Good luck! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 18:43, 22 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking on this review. I think I have dealt with or commented on all the issues you raised. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the response. Looks good to go. Awesome job! Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 10:48, 23 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review, Sainsf. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:05, 23 April 2016 (UTC)