Talk:Coast Air/GA1

GA Review
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Comments: I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 14:08, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Coast Air is a defunct airline but the infobox seems to describe it as if it is still in operation. Can some parameters be added to show that it is no longer in business?
 * 2) "usin ATR 42 aircraft": should be "using ATR 42 aircraft".
 * 3) "Following attempts to start new international route" sounds awkward.
 * 4) "1984-decision" should not be hyphenated.
 * 5) "They would to use" sounds awkward.
 * 6) Change "to not be profitable" to "to be unprofitable".
 * 7) The phrase "traffic had increased so much that the company instead a larger, 20-seater Twin Otter aircraft into service" sounds awkward.
 * 8) "grow through new, small route" should be rephrased to "grow through newer, smaller routes".
 * 9) Comma not needed in sentence "At the time the company had nine daily routes, and 35 employees".
 * 10) "therefor" should be "therefore".
 * 11) "They bid NOK 23.7 million" sounds awkward, use "Their bid was NOK 23.7 million" instead.
 * 12) "this resulted in there no longer being in intermediate stops from Florø to Bergen and Oslo." sounds awkward.
 * 13) "that has a 1,200 metres (3,900 ft) runway" sounds awkward.
 * 14) "Darkening skies" sounds a little awkward for a section heading. Can something else be used instead?
 * 15) "Coast air" should be in all capitals.
 * 16) In phrase "Coast Air introduced and additional daily flight to Aberdeen", "and" should be "an".
 * 17) "also also"? Remove one instance of "also"
 * 18) "Norsk Hydro, who have a lot of employees in the Grenland area," sounds awkward.
 * 19) In the phrase "carrying eight passenger", "passenger" should be pluralized.
 * 20) "booked full" souunds wordy, "booked" would suffice here.
 * 21) The sentence "Skien Lufttransport on their hand stated that Vildanden was now a sleeping company, and that contract therefore was terminated." sounds awkward.
 * 22) Is there a better section heading that can be used instead of "Financial crash landing"?
 * 23) "that was again owned by four people": It is nessecary to use "again"?
 * 24) "NOK 35 million were given in private placements to the company", change "were" to "was".
 * 25) "High costs made the owner Seglem loose faith in future profits": "loose" should be "lose".
 * 26) "give up" sounds colliqual.
 * 27) Can a section about Coast Air's fleet at the time of bankruptcy be added to the article?
 * 28) The Airlines of Norway template does not have Coast Air on it. Is it nessecary to include it in this article?
 * 29) You may want to look through this article again and check for more grammar issues and short sentences that need to be combined.
 * Since Arsenikk has not been around for a while I have started to fix some of the issues. Rettetast (talk) 15:15, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Is anyone planning on fixing the rest of the issues? Dough4872 (talk) 14:44, 7 July 2009 (UTC)
 * It has been over a month, and since the issues have not been resolved, I will have to fail the article. It may be renominated when an editor is willing to take care of the remaining issues. Dough4872 (talk) 02:14, 17 July 2009 (UTC)