Talk:Coat of arms of Canada/GA1

GA Review
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 * The "Blazon" section is one big quote, and should be converted into prose.
 * That is how a blazon is written, though... roux  
 * Ah okay. I'm no expert in this :| Gary King  ( talk ) 17:58, 21 November 2008 (UTC)


 * I've converted a bunch of sections into one section with bolded titles. I think it looks a lot better now.
 * Hmm, ok... I've rejigged it slightly so that at least there are headers, breaking up the sections a little more obviously and making it more obvious what each paragraph(s) is dealing with. roux  


 * About.com is not a reliable source, so that one link will have to be replaced.
 * ✅ roux  

Gary King ( talk ) 16:50, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Otherwise, I made a few fixes. Looks good, passing. Gary King ( talk ) 17:59, 21 November 2008 (UTC)