Talk:Cobra Kai season 3/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:35, 16 September 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'll be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:35, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry about the week delay. I have been unexpectedly busy. I will be free this Sunday so expect comments by then. Again, sorry for the delay. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:36, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
 * No worries, I've been pretty preoccupied with my FAC lately so it works out. The Doctor Who  (talk) 02:26, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * The first sentence has a lot of commas. Try removing some.
 * All plot summaries are less than 200 words so they pass MOS:TVPLOT.
 * The second episode's summary has the phrase "in order to" three times.
 * Netflix is linked twice in #Development (MOS:DUPLINK).
 * Netflix is linked again in #Awards_and_nominations (MOS:DUPLINK).
 * Disney+ is linked twice in #Awards_and_nominations (MOS:DUPLINK).
 * "On May 9, 2019" – the cited source is from May 2
 * "Later that month" – the cited source is from the following year
 * Add a serial comma between "Josh Heald, Jon Hurwitz and Hayden Schlossberg".
 * Add a serial comma between "Will Smith, James Lassiter and Caleeb Pinkett".
 * "seasons release" "season's release" (American English)
 * "thorughout" – typo
 * Add a MOS:GEOCOMMA after "Marietta, Georgia".
 * Add commas after "Later that month" and "June 2020".
 * Add a comma after "As part of the move".
 * Add a comma after "Rotten Tomatoes".
 * Remove the comma after "90% approval rating".
 * Add a comma after "MTV Movie & TV Awards".
 * Add a comma after "Screen Actors Guild Awards".
 * ScreenRant Screen Rant
 * AV Club The A.V. Club
 * Mark references from The Telegraph with "|url-access=registration".
 * Salong Salon
 * Sources from The Futon Critic can only be archived through https://archive.ph/.
 * All taken care of. TheDoctorWho Public (talk) 15:25, 26 September 2021 (UTC)