Talk:Cockiness (Love It)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 00:17, 26 February 2012 (UTC)

I will be taking this review. As this is my fourth or fifth review for this nominator, he should know what to expect. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:17, 26 February 2012 (UTC)

Comments

 * 1a
 * Lede
 * Why is Mr. Bangladesh linked two times in the same sentence? Also, how are we supposed to refer to him? Is Mr. used every time in reliable sources, or do they shorten to Bangladesh?
 * His production name is Mr. Bangladesh, regardless of how critics refer to him. Unlinked Crawford. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One
 * I'd suggest splitting the lede into two paragraphs, one for production and one for the song and reception.
 * Done. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One


 * Background and conception
 * Once again, why is Mr. Bangladesh linked twice?
 * Unlinked Crawford. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One


 * 2b
 * What makes DJ Booth a reliable source? Cultureblues?
 * DJ Booth is perfectly reliable for GA. The critic, Nathan, has a BA in Journalism and Creative Writing. DJ Booth is not reliable for FA, which this article will not become. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One
 * I don't get how something can be reliable enough for GA but not reliable enough for FA. Regarding the credentials, I have a BA in Indonesian lit, but that doesn't automatically make me a reliable critic for works such as Sitti Nurbaya. I tried looking at RSN, but there was nothing on DJ Booth. Also, what about Cultureblues? Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:59, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * DJ Booth is used in other GAs, it's acceptable. I know, I don't understand how something can be reliable for GA and not FA, but that's FAC for you! I'm pretty sure Culture Blues is reliable. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 01:02, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * I've asked at RSN. I will add a question about Culture Blues. Of course, for this to pass immediately we could just remove the reviews until the RSN thread is finished. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:04, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm not worried about it passing at this very moment in time lol. I don't mind waiting. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One
 * Alright, hopefully they don't... well, I've had bad experiences with RSN. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:21, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * The feedback was that DJ Booth is okay for a review but cultureblues should probably not be used. (here) Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:05, 28 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Removed CultureBlues. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 23:21, 28 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Not much this time around. Just a couple fixes and we should be good to go
 * Thanks
 * Paraphrasing checks fine. Spotchecks on three sources above also fine. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:56, 26 February 2012 (UTC)


 * And that's a wrap. Congrats! Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:05, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 00:17, 29 February 2012 (UTC)