Talk:Cody Ross/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sportsguy17 (talk · contribs) 21:55, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm here again to review another one of your fine-looking articles. I'll leave initial thoughts shortly.  Sports guy17  ( T •  C ) 21:55, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

Most of the issues I see involve grammar, not content that is or isn't there, so only minor changes will be made and here it is section-by-section:
 * Lead
 * Change "He stands 5 ft tall and weighs 195 lb" to "He is 5 ft tall and weighs 195 lb".
 * Change "He was traded to the Los Angeles following spring training in 2004..." to "He was traded to the Los Angeles Dodgers following spring training in 2004".
 * The rest of the lead looks good.
 * Early life
 * This section is all good.
 * Minor League career (1999-2005)
 * This section is all good.

I will stop here for now. Make the clubs and teams he was on Level 3 headings and add a Level 2 heading called Major League career like you have for other GA's you worked on.  Sports guy17  ( T •  C ) 16:37, 2 March 2014 (UTC)

First round of changes made. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 12:18, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
 * OK. I do not see any other issues with the article, so I am passing it. Good work.  Sports guy17  ( T •  C ) 23:13, 4 March 2014 (UTC)