Talk:Colby Cave/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 10:38, 24 April 2021 (UTC)


 * I'll review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:38, 24 April 2021 (UTC)

Review

 * Colby and his sister Taylor Cave - you can remove the Cave part after Taylor
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Playing with the Battlefords Bantam AA Baron, please begin the sentence with While
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * You start two back-to-back sentences with Going into the, please replace at least one of these
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Are two references necessary for the first sentence of the Boston Bruins section? I think just one will do, just trying to reduce WP:OVERCITE.
 * The SI reference mentions that he was an undrafted free agent, the NHL press release does not.  Kncny11  (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Can you add a bit more detail for his first career NHL goal (ie. His goal came with 26 seconds left in the second period -mentioned in source)
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * The 2018–19 NHL season is Wikilinked twice, please remove the second wikilink in the Oilers section
 * ✅  Kncny11  (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Some of the references are archived while others are not
 * ✅ Only saw one that wasn't archived and took care of it manually  Kncny11  (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * You may wish to add something about the most recent Cave memorial but it's not neccessary.
 * I believe I did? It's the second paragraph of the Memorials subhead  Kncny11  (shoot) 20:53, 30 April 2021 (UTC)
 * The link is for 2021, you only mention 2020 events. The link I posted is about the Oilers loss, which they said was due to the Cave memorial HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 08:51, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I think there's some confusion. The paragraph beginning "In lieu of a large funeral" described the 2021 memorial and McDavid subsequently questioning the NHL. I clarified in the paragraph that all of those events were in 2021, and that the Oilers lost that game 5-0.  Kncny11  (shoot) 17:59, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
 * , I must be very out of it, sorry . I am passing this now. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:04, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Absolutely no worries! Reading the paragraph back, I could see where it wasn't immediately obvious when the events were taking place. Just glad I could get the article up to snuff, considering how tragic the story is.  Kncny11  (shoot) 18:16, 10 May 2021 (UTC)