Talk:Cold (Kanye West song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 07:44, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * 1 disambiguation link


 * Done.


 * Lead
 * not to be featured onto any --> not to be featured on any
 * onto iTunes on April 4, 2012 --> on the iTunes Store on April 4, 2012
 * The production was handled by Hit-Boy. --> How about stating who wrote the song? That sentence is a bit lonely. Something like: The song was written by West, Chauncey Hollis, James Todd Smith and Marlon Williams, while the production was handled by Hit-Boy.
 * The song received positive reviews from music critics who praised West's lyrical performance and the boldness of his subject matter. --> The song received positive reviews from music critics, who praised West's lyrical performance and the boldness of his subject matter.
 * US Billboard Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs charts --> US Billboard Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart


 * All done.


 * The track received single artwork designed by George Condo. --> Awkward sentence. The single's artwork was designed by George Condo. Did he also do the Twisted Fantasy artwork? It looks like he did. Should say that also.


 * Done. Added a line about that.


 * The song drew controversy from Humphries, the brand Theraflu, and PETA who criticized the content of West's lyrics. --> Why exactly was PETA upset about it?


 * Done.


 * Background
 * This seems more appropriate to be titled "production and release".
 * In an interview Khaled explained, "I was in the studio --> In an interview Khaled explained: "I was in the studio. You should also put who Ye is in brackets, like 'Ye [name]
 * West then released the song as a single onto iTunes --> He didn't personally release the song on iTunes. And it's the iTunes Store, but iTunes itself.
 * Should note it impacted US radio on that date.


 * All done.


 * Composition
 * Prose is good. I'm saying this here so I don't have to start a whole new infobox section here, but genres are usually sourced in the composition section. Where is the source for the genre that is in the infobox?


 * Removed unsourced genre claim in infobox


 * Additionally, this is an issue. If you don't know how to fix it, I would be happy to do it for you. The same thing happened to me recently, but I figured out how to do it.


 * Thank you! But I removed the sample since it wasn't overly important.


 * Critical reception
 * No issues.


 * Controversy
 * Pink (singer) --> Pink


 * Done.


 * Live performances
 * No issues.


 * Chart performance
 * Consistency between Billboard and (Billboard)


 * Done.

As far as I am aware, all corrections have been done. Bruce Campbell (talk) 06:26, 12 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Just one remaining issue. I was saying for [name], insert the name of the person. I know 'Ye is a nickname for someone, I just don't know who. Put who it is in the [name]. Statυs  (talk) 19:46, 12 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Done. Bruce Campbell (talk) 20:37, 12 July 2012 (UTC)