Talk:College of Information and Cyberspace

Wikipedia is international
When creating/editing content, please keep in mind that Wikipedia has an international audience. For example, this article started with:
 * The Information Resources Management (IRM) College is a group of educators working to inform the nation's leaders, from the government as well as private sector.

I am going to change this to make clear that the "nation" and "government" refers to the United States. CosineKitty (talk) 13:04, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

Cheerleading and advertising phraseology
The opening paragraph has some problems with sounding like advertising. I tagged two of the more glaring problems with the tag. If multiple independent sources can attest to IRM in such glowing terms, they should be cited in a verifiable way. Also, perhaps I have read too many Dilbert cartoons, but I involuntarily roll my eyes when I see a Pointy-Haired Boss phrase like provides strategic direction and vision. This is my own personal bias, but I suspect I speak for many others in reacting negatively to such wording. Overall I find it hard to take the article seriously when it has the tone of marketing literature. CosineKitty (talk) 13:22, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

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