Talk:Collide (Leona Lewis and Avicii song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 19:30, 21 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Hi, I don't know if you held off reviewing because of my brief block, but I am available to make improvements now. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 02:07, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I wasn't delaying the review because of that; I had some personal things to deal with in real life and I couldn't get to Wikipedia. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 04:50, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * No issues

Lead

 * ...and samples his instrumental dance track called "Penguin". → Remove the word "called" for better prose
 * ...Avicii claimed that Lewis and her record label, Syco, had sampling his song without his authorisation... → Replace "sampling" with "sampled"
 * Before the lawsuit filed by Avicii and his record label reach the hihg court → Add was between "lawsuit" and "filed"; Fix spelling error
 * ✅ all Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 11:55, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Background and release

 * "Collide was written by Arash Pournouri... → Put quotes around all of "Collide"
 * ✅ Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One

Sampling controversy

 * No issues

Composition and lyrics

 * According to WP:SAMPLE, audio recordings have to be less than 10% of the original recording (right now it is 24 seconds and it has to be less than 23.9 seconds)
 * I don't see one millisecond as an issue tbh. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One
 * ...from the low note of G♯3 to the high note of E♭5... → The phrase "low note of G♯3 to the high note of E♭5" should not be wiki-linked as one phrase
 * ✅ Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One

Critical reception

 * Put "Accolade" information as prose, and not in a table
 * You can either use a table or use prose, like I have done in If I Never See Your Face Again. I was told either a table or prose is acceptable. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One

Promotion

 * No issues

Track listings

 * Put length of each track listed
 * ✅ Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One

Credits and personnel

 * No issues

Charts and certifications

 * No issues

Radio and release history

 * No issues